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Aapke rooth jaane par lab humare kuch keh nahi paate haii...!
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Thumbs up Aapke rooth jaane par lab humare kuch keh nahi paate haii...! - 18th November 2015, 01:41 PM

Mere pyaare dostoN

Namaskaar aur Aadaab

Mehfil mein haazir huuN apni aik nayii koshishbke saath..yeh koshish ke ehsaas mere liye bahot khaas hai kyuuki yeh koshish mere liye meri wife ne liKhii hay...baDii hii Khushii ke saath maiN un ehsaasoN ko aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aapkaa saath aur pyaar zaruur milengaa..

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Aapke rooth jaane par lab humare kuch keh nahiN paate haii
SaNg jo saath naa ho aapka to dard koi seh nahiN paate haii

Kaii baar chaahaa roothna aapse aapke manaane ki chaahat meiN
Par door hone ke Dar se aapse rooth nahiN paate haii

Yeh mohabbat hi hai aapki jo alfaaz ban ke kaaGaz par utartii haii
Bin aap ke ehsaasoN ke hum ek lafz bhi liKh nahiN paate haii

KaaSh aaNKhoN meiN Doob kar samajh jaao iShq ki intehaa
Ke laboN pe izhaar e mohabbat hum kar nahiN paate haii

Koi kamii nahiN chhoDii aap ko be intehaan chaahne me humne
Fir bhi lagta hai zimmedaari hum apni nibhaa nahiN paate haii

Hai ik duje se mohabbat dono ko iss qadar
Aap bin hum aur hum bin aap reh nahiN paate haii

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*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...

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18th November 2015, 03:22 PM

bahut hee pyaar bhare ehsaas pesh kiye hain dhaval sahab....aapko aur bhabhi ji ko...daad aur mubarakbaad...God bless u both...

aise hee hamare sath apne khayaal bantte rahiye..
khush rahiye...
aate rahiye....



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Love warm hugs Chutki Bhabhi - 18th November 2015, 04:02 PM

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Mere pyaare dostoN

Namaskaar aur Aadaab

Mehfil mein haazir huuN apni aik nayii koshishbke saath..yeh koshish ke ehsaas mere liye bahot khaas hai kyuuki yeh koshish mere liye meri wife ne liKhii hay...baDii hii Khushii ke saath maiN un ehsaasoN ko aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aapkaa saath aur pyaar zaruur milengaa..

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Aapke rooth jaane par lab humare kuch keh nahiN paate haii
SaNg jo saath naa ho aapka to dard koi seh nahiN paate haii

Kaii baar chaahaa roothna aapse aapke manaane ki chaahat meiN
Par door hone ke Dar se aapse rooth nahiN paate haii

Yeh mohabbat hi hai aapki jo alfaaz ban ke kaaGaz par utartii haii
Bin aap ke ehsaasoN ke hum ek lafz bhi liKh nahiN paate haii

KaaSh aaNKhoN meiN Doob kar samajh jaao iShq ki intehaa
Ke laboN pe izhaar e mohabbat hum kar nahiN paate haii

Koi kamii nahiN chhoDii aap ko be intehaan chaahne me humne
Fir bhi lagta hai zimmedaari hum apni nibhaa nahiN paate haii

Hai ik duje se mohabbat dono ko iss qadar
Aap bin hum aur hum bin aap reh nahiN paate haii

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Chottu...sab se pehle to tere kaan kheenchne padeNge muje yeh jo pehle wala sher hai eska matlab kya hai...ki tu rooth.ta hai wife se..nautanki ab ki baar to bas daant se hi kaam chalega, agar dubara aisa likhne ki naubat aaye to teri pitaai pakki


Meri Pyari si Chotti si bhabhi , muje bahut accha lga tumhara likha padkar...par aik baat suno meri...agar Dhaval kabhi rooth.ne ka natak bhi kare to muje usi waqt call karna....esko to maiN dekh loongi
pehle sher ko alag karke...baaki sabhi ehsaas muje behad acche lge...aap dono ka pyar yu hi bana rhe hamesha...yehi duaa hai meri

bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath
sister


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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...



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18th November 2015, 09:16 PM

Dhaval aaj aapki likhi hui nahi aapki wife (sorry don't know her name) ki likhi hui poem padhi. Bahaut achha laga padhkar. I can imagine ki aapko kitni khushi hui hogi isse padhkar. I wish I was lucky as well ki koi humare liye likhta...just kidding.

Oonhone aapke liye yeh likha toh bataiye phir aapne jawaab kaise diya???

My best wishes are with you and her (sorry don't know your wife's name). May the freshness of your love always remains. Wishing a happy life to both of you.

My fav lines were:

Kaii baar chaahaa roothna aapse aapke manaane ki chaahat meiN
Par door hone ke Dar se aapse rooth nahiN paate haii

Koi kamii nahiN chhoDii aap ko be intehaan chaahne me humne
Fir bhi lagta hai zimmedaari hum apni nibhaa nahiN paate haii

Ek quote yaad aaya toh likh rahe hain...hopefully you won't be offended.

"A great relationship is not holding
hands while you understand
Each Other, Its about having
lot of misunderstandings & still
Not leaving each other's hands"

Sorry reply thoda bada ho gaya...aap dono ka pyar dekh ke I got a little emotional...sorry.

Smiles,
Jiya


Zindagi wahi jise khul ke Jiya jaaye, apne armaanon ko pankh lagaa udhne do...

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Mere pyaare dostoN

Namaskaar aur Aadaab

Mehfil mein haazir huuN apni aik nayii koshishbke saath..yeh koshish ke ehsaas mere liye bahot khaas hai kyuuki yeh koshish mere liye meri wife ne liKhii hay...baDii hii Khushii ke saath maiN un ehsaasoN ko aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aapkaa saath aur pyaar zaruur milengaa..

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Aapke rooth jaane par lab humare kuch keh nahiN paate haii
SaNg jo saath naa ho aapka to dard koi seh nahiN paate haii

Kaii baar chaahaa roothna aapse aapke manaane ki chaahat meiN
Par door hone ke Dar se aapse rooth nahiN paate haii

Yeh mohabbat hi hai aapki jo alfaaz ban ke kaaGaz par utartii haii
Bin aap ke ehsaasoN ke hum ek lafz bhi liKh nahiN paate haii

KaaSh aaNKhoN meiN Doob kar samajh jaao iShq ki intehaa
Ke laboN pe izhaar e mohabbat hum kar nahiN paate haii

Koi kamii nahiN chhoDii aap ko be intehaan chaahne me humne
Fir bhi lagta hai zimmedaari hum apni nibhaa nahiN paate haii

Hai ik duje se mohabbat dono ko iss qadar
Aap bin hum aur hum bin aap reh nahiN paate haii

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waahhhhhh janaab waaahhhhh......... kya khoob kalaam pesh kiyaa hai bazm me aapne Dhaval bhai...... Subhaan Allah......
bhabhi ji ke is kalaam ko mera salaam..... waaaqai muhabbat ke sacche aur behad acche ehsaas nazar aa rahe hain is kalaam me...... Daad pesh hai mujh nacheez ki.... qubool kijiye.....


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Dhaval jee dil ko choo gaye apke ehsaas....



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Mere pyaare dostoN

Namaskaar aur Aadaab

Mehfil mein haazir huuN apni aik nayii koshishbke saath..yeh koshish ke ehsaas mere liye bahot khaas hai kyuuki yeh koshish mere liye meri wife ne liKhii hay...baDii hii Khushii ke saath maiN un ehsaasoN ko aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN....ummid kartaa huuN aapkaa saath aur pyaar zaruur milengaa..

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Aapke rooth jaane par lab humare kuch keh nahiN paate haii
SaNg jo saath naa ho aapka to dard koi seh nahiN paate haii

Kaii baar chaahaa roothna aapse aapke manaane ki chaahat meiN
Par door hone ke Dar se aapse rooth nahiN paate haii

Yeh mohabbat hi hai aapki jo alfaaz ban ke kaaGaz par utartii haii
Bin aap ke ehsaasoN ke hum ek lafz bhi liKh nahiN paate haii

KaaSh aaNKhoN meiN Doob kar samajh jaao iShq ki intehaa
Ke laboN pe izhaar e mohabbat hum kar nahiN paate haii

Koi kamii nahiN chhoDii aap ko be intehaan chaahne me humne
Fir bhi lagta hai zimmedaari hum apni nibhaa nahiN paate haii

Hai ik duje se mohabbat dono ko iss qadar
Aap bin hum aur hum bin aap reh nahiN paate haii

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bahut sundar ehsaas rahe dhaval bhai........................


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