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hum to hain.... - 26th November 2008, 09:50 AM

har pal sath rehne wale hum to hain...
tujhe khushi dene wale hum to hain...

bata gar koi shikwa hai kisi se...
tera dard sehane wale hum to hain...

jo de aansu tujhe tu bhool ja use...
tere husn ke diwaane hum to hain...

tujhe jo kabhi naraajgi ho khuda se...
tere liye dua mangne wale hum to hain..

tanhai jab mehsus ho tu bata dena...
tera dil behlaane wale hum to hain...

labz na miley tujhe kuch kehne ko to...
teri jubaani kehne wale hum to hain..

duniya ki nafrat ki tu fikar na kar...
beshumar pyar karne wale hum to hain...

darr lage kabhi in ishk ki rahon se...
tere sang yaara marne wale hum to hain...

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wonderful vicky keep it upp..................
   
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5th December 2008, 05:03 PM

wah Vicky ............bahot khoob .........

kya baat hai aaj kal bade Romantic Ghazal likh rahe ho
kuchh Raaz hai to jaldi batado

khus raho aise hi likhte raho

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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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har pal sath rehne wale hum to hain...
tujhe khushi dene wale hum to hain...

bata gar koi shikwa hai kisi se...
tera dard sehane wale hum to hain...

jo de aansu tujhe tu bhool ja use...
tere husn ke diwaane hum to hain...

tujhe jo kabhi naraajgi ho khuda se...
tere liye dua mangne wale hum to hain..

tanhai jab mehsus ho tu bata dena...
tera dil behlaane wale hum to hain...

labz na miley tujhe kuch kehne ko to...
teri jubaani kehne wale hum to hain..

duniya ki nafrat ki tu fikar na kar...
beshumar pyar karne wale hum to hain...

darr lage kabhi in ishk ki rahon se...
tere sang yaara marne wale hum to hain...

VICKY
Aadab vicky ji,
kaise hai aap?

waah janab kya baat hain,
bohot hi khubsurat andaze bayan.
ek mukammal nazam k liye dili daad kabul kijiye.

khush rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ


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6th December 2008, 02:32 PM

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har pal sath rehne wale hum to hain...
tujhe khushi dene wale hum to hain...

bata gar koi shikwa hai kisi se...
tera dard sehane wale hum to hain...

jo de aansu tujhe tu bhool ja use...
tere husn ke diwaane hum to hain...

tujhe jo kabhi naraajgi ho khuda se...
tere liye dua mangne wale hum to hain..

tanhai jab mehsus ho tu bata dena...
tera dil behlaane wale hum to hain...

labz na miley tujhe kuch kehne ko to...
teri jubaani kehne wale hum to hain..

duniya ki nafrat ki tu fikar na kar...
beshumar pyar karne wale hum to hain...

darr lage kabhi in ishk ki rahon se...
tere sang yaara marne wale hum to hain...

VICKY

Bohat khoob Vicky ji,,,Bohat acha andaze beyan hai....ayse he likhte rahiye hamesha...KHUSH RAHEN...meri app k liye ye he dua hai...


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6th December 2008, 02:48 PM

Vickyyyyy........bahut khoob likha hai aapne, prem-ras mein bheege hue ahsaas, kaya baat hai, accha laga aapke ahsaaso.n ko padna, yoon hi bazm ko pyar ki fuhaar se bheegote raho....sadha kush raho.

duao.n ke saath
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wah Vicky ............bahot khoob .........

kya baat hai aaj kal bade Romantic Ghazal likh rahe ho
kuchh Raaz hai to jaldi batado

khus raho aise hi likhte raho

Diya
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thanks diya

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Aadab vicky ji,
kaise hai aap?

waah janab kya baat hain,
bohot hi khubsurat andaze bayan.
ek mukammal nazam k liye dili daad kabul kijiye.

khush rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye
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lagta hai kuch jyada hi late ho gaya is thread pe reply me main..

hassoni ji

aapka tah e dil se shukriya...
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Bohat khoob Vicky ji,,,Bohat acha andaze beyan hai....ayse he likhte rahiye hamesha...KHUSH RAHEN...meri app k liye ye he dua hai...
shuriya rizi jii

aap bhi khush rahein..

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Vickyyyyy........bahut khoob likha hai aapne, prem-ras mein bheege hue ahsaas, kaya baat hai, accha laga aapke ahsaaso.n ko padna, yoon hi bazm ko pyar ki fuhaar se bheegote raho....sadha kush raho.

duao.n ke saath
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ye lo didi ne reply kiya or main ek saal bad thread pe reply de raha hun

aaj pehli bar shayd aisa hua..

diii taareef ke liye shukriya..

main sach me nalayak ho gaya hun...

ab to mujhe bhi lagne lag gaya hai

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13th October 2009, 09:07 PM

vicky ji....bahut khubsurat lage aapke ehsaas...sabhi panktiyon se pyar ki mehak mehsus hoti hai....iski zameen kaha janab ji...kuch batana chaahenge....aise hi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye...

acha likhne ke liye...dil se daad...kabul kare...

aur apna khayal rakhiyega
duaaon ke saath




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vicky ji....bahut khubsurat lage aapke ehsaas...sabhi panktiyon se pyar ki mehak mehsus hoti hai....iski zameen kaha janab ji...kuch batana chaahenge....aise hi likhte rahiye...khush rahiye...

acha likhne ke liye...dil se daad...kabul kare...

aur apna khayal rakhiyega
duaaon ke saath
arey naresh bhai ye ghazal to bahut pehle likhi thi..
iska font dekhke hi andaaza ho gaya hoga aapko...(bahut bada hai)
ab to zameen hi banjar ho chuki hai to kya bataayein...
main kabhiishk pe ab koi ghazal nahi likhta
ghazal ke ehsaas samjhne ke liye shukriya aapka

ummid hai aage bhi aise hi aapka sath milta rahega..

khush rahiye
duaaon ke sath..

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