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Tujhe Manaun Kaisey..??? - 23rd November 2009, 04:54 PM

DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri waffa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey




Zainy


PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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23rd November 2009, 05:02 PM

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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey
Wow, amazing. Zainy Bete...! Bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne...! Har sher dil ke khareeb hein magar 4th one kuch jyaadaa khaas lagaa...!

Likhte rahein aur apna khayaal rakhiyegaa, ok...?

With blessings



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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23rd November 2009, 05:10 PM

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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey
Zainy jee,

umda bahot umda...iss ghazal main sangeet pirooya ja sakta hai aur behad asardaar banegi composition..aam aadmi bhi samjh aur mehsoos kar sakta hai..
(aur meri nzar main aam aadmi bahot khaas hota hai gar uska dil jeet liya to kya kehne)

very good..keep writing...god bless.

saare sher pasand aaye mujhe...i liked d simplicity...

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman


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23rd November 2009, 05:14 PM

Zainy Ji...Namaste ! aapki rachna ki khushbu se har ashaar mehak raha hai....kahi dil ki tarap ko bhi dikhat hai aaphi yeh ghazal....

yeh sach hai aapki ghazal bahut intezaar ke baad aai hai....woh bhi itne sundar shabdon ke saath....

ghazal ki adaayegi mujhe bahut pasand aai...sabhi sher bahut ache lage mujhe......baar baar padhne ka mann hota hai....khaas kar maqtaa mujhe bahut pasand aaya....

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey

aur yeh do sher bhi mujhe bahut ache lage aapke....

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

itni khubsurat rachna ko....tahe dil se daad....hazir hai....

yuhi likhte rahiye....
khush rahiye....
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath.....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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23rd November 2009, 06:52 PM

Zainy Ji...Namaste ! aapki rachna ki khushbu se har ashaar mehak raha hai....kahi dil ki tarap bhi dikhai deti hai....jo mann ke taaron ko jhankrit karti hai.....

yeh sach hai aapki ghazal bahut intezaar ke baad aai hai....woh bhi itne sundar shabdon ke saath....

ghazal ki adaayegi mujhe bahut pasand aai...sabhi sher bahut ache lage mujhe......baar baar padhne ka mann hota hai....khaas kar maqtaa mujhe bahut pasand aaya....

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey

aur yeh do sher bhi mujhe bahut ache lage aapke....

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

itni khubsurat rachna ko....tahe dil se daad....hazir hai....

yuhi likhte rahiye....
khush rahiye....
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath.....





YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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23rd November 2009, 07:12 PM

Zainy Ji,

Bahot khoob likha hai, Tahe dil se mubarak baad kubul kijiye

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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey



Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko

   
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23rd November 2009, 08:14 PM

Wah Wah,,

Boht Khoob,,,

An out-standing creation Zainy Jii,,

Maqta boht achaa laga mujhe,,

Likhtey rahiye ga,,

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bahut khoob ZAINY...............


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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey


Zainy jii,

Aaj aapko pehli martaba padha hai, aur padh ke bahut achha laga.
Bahut khubsoorat Ghazal kahi hai aapne, dil ki gehraiyoN se wah wah! Nikal rahi hai....
Bahut khoob!
Waise to sare sheyr hi badhiya bane haiN lekin neeche wale 2 mujhe khaas pasand aaye:



Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey

Aise hi likhti rahiye......
Duaon ke saath ijaazat,
Vikram


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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23rd November 2009, 10:16 PM

Dear Zainy
bahut accha likha hai....vaise to poori gazal acchi lagi par yeh 2 sher khaas rahe.

YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey


kush raho
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23rd November 2009, 10:35 PM

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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey

Very good Zainy, esp these two

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey



magar yeh samajh nahin aayaa

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey


इक रोज़ क़यामत बराबर कर ही देगी इसे
हमने ना की मुकम्मल ज़िंदगी, तो न सही
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Very good Zainy, esp these two

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey



magar yeh samajh nahin aayaa

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey
Mayoos Jii,

I think yeh mis-type ho gaya hai "wafa" ki jaga "jafa" type hogaya..

Coz jafa also means bewafai....


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24th November 2009, 01:45 PM

zainy Jee aadaab.........

AApki gazal dekhker bahut achcha laga......... Kafi khoobsurat khayalon se less hai aapki yeh gazal....... Daad di na jaye to beshak gazal ki tohin hi hogi......... Behad khoob alfaaz aur adaygii se saji aapki is gazal ke sabhi sher ek se badhker ek lage.... Har sher per daad .........

Khoobsurat gazal per dil se daad kabool kijiye...

Ek mistake nazar aayi thi aap ne door kar dii....... "Wafa ko Jafa kiya tha jo aapne"

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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri waffa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey
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Wow, amazing. Zainy Bete...! Bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne...! Har sher dil ke khareeb hein magar 4th one kuch jyaadaa khaas lagaa...!

Likhte rahein aur apna khayaal rakhiyegaa, ok...?

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Danny ji mujhe khushi hai keh aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi,4th sher tou mera bhi favourite hai....

yuhi saath dete rahiye.

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umda bahot umda...iss ghazal main sangeet pirooya ja sakta hai aur behad asardaar banegi composition..aam aadmi bhi samjh aur mehsoos kar sakta hai..
(aur meri nzar main aam aadmi bahot khaas hota hai gar uska dil jeet liya to kya kehne)

very good..keep writing...god bless.

saare sher pasand aaye mujhe...i liked d simplicity...

aapka dost,
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pradhyuman ji...

bahut din baad aapka deedaar ho raha hai ! kaise haiN aap ?

zarra nawazishoN ki maiN hamesha se hi aihsaanmand rahi huN !aapko ashaar achhe lage meri khushnasiiibii !jis andaaz se aapne meri ghazal ki tareef ki hai, woh bhi dilchasp hai.....mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri yeh adnaa si koshish pasand aayi...

yuN hi hausla afzaayii karte rahiye !

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Zainy..

namaste! kaise hoN aap?

baRe dinoN baad aapki peShkaSh paRhne kaa mauqaa milaa.. qaabil-e-taareef rahiiN aapki yeh koShiSh.. umdaah ehsaas! yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee .. bazm ki raunaQ baRhaate raheN... ! daad!

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Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

ahem ahem ..............

pahle to apne dil ki raza jaan jayiye
fir jo nigaah-e-yaar kahe maan jayie

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Zainy Ji...Namaste ! aapki rachna ki khushbu se har ashaar mehak raha hai....kahi dil ki tarap bhi dikhai deti hai....jo mann ke taaron ko jhankrit karti hai.....

yeh sach hai aapki ghazal bahut intezaar ke baad aai hai....woh bhi itne sundar shabdon ke saath....

ghazal ki adaayegi mujhe bahut pasand aai...sabhi sher bahut ache lage mujhe......baar baar padhne ka mann hota hai....khaas kar maqtaa mujhe bahut pasand aaya....

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey

aur yeh do sher bhi mujhe bahut ache lage aapke....

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

itni khubsurat rachna ko....tahe dil se daad....hazir hai....

yuhi likhte rahiye....
khush rahiye....
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath.....


Aapka bohat bohat shukriyaH naresh ji..aap meri ghazal per aaye aur meri ghazal ko pasand kiya....

aapne tou kuch zyada hi tareef kar di hai meri is ghazal ki, koshish karungi ke aagey se aur bhi accha likhuN..

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Aap tou Masha-Allah bahot khoob likhti hain.............................................. .....
dil se daad haazir hai..........................................
Aise hi achhi achhi ghazlon se mehfil ki shaan badhati rahiye........................

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Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
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Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
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Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
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Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
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behad khoob zainy ji...dil ke khayaalat kis sadgi se lafzon mein utaar diyee aapne....

ek sher aapki hi tarz par..

khoob hota hai mere dil manzar yeh bhi
pyaas aankhon ki pyaalon se bhujhaaon kaisey..

yunhi likhte rahiyeGaa..



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Zainy jii...

kaise hain aap? Ek lambhe arrse baad aapne kuch pesh kiya ... aur har sher dil ko chu raha hai.. puri ki puri ghazl pasand aayii ...

umeed karti hu ab aap ese hi mehfil saajaatye rahye ...

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Bohat bohat shukriyah Rashid saheb......yuhi saath dete rahiye...




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Wah Wah,,

Boht Khoob,,,

An out-standing creation Zainy Jii,,

Maqta boht achaa laga mujhe,,

Likhtey rahiye ga,,

HSN

Hassan saheb.....

Aap ko yahaaN dekh kar behad khushi huyii.. aap ne Kalaam ko padhne ke liye waqt nikaala aur isay saraaha is ke liye tah e dil se shukriyah..'Inshallah'!!.. koshish jaari rahegi...

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bahut khoob ZAINY...............

THANKS LAMHA...............................




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Aaj aapko pehli martaba padha hai, aur padh ke bahut achha laga.
Bahut khubsoorat Ghazal kahi hai aapne, dil ki gehraiyoN se wah wah! Nikal rahi hai....
Bahut khoob!
Waise to sare sheyr hi badhiya bane haiN lekin neeche wale 2 mujhe khaas pasand aaye:



Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
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Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey

Aise hi likhti rahiye......
Duaon ke saath ijaazat,
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vikram saheb

sabse pehle tou maiN aapka is bazm meiN shirkat karne ke liye shukriya adaa kar duuN aur khush-aam-deed


aapko yahaaN dekh kar behad khushii huii hai

aapne Ghazal pasaNd farmaaya hai, shukriyah


maiN iNtehaa'ii shukurguzaar huuN aapka yahaaN aane ke liye aur meri hauNslaa-afzaa'ii karne ke liye, ummiid hai aap yuuN hi aage bhi saath dete raheNge







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bahut accha likha hai....vaise to poori gazal acchi lagi par yeh 2 sher khaas rahe.

YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey


kush raho
diii

Aapka bohat bohat shukriyaH Sunita di...mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi...

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Very good Zainy, esp these two

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Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
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magar yeh samajh nahin aayaa

Meri jafa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey



SHUKRIYAH MAYOOS SAHEB,

Aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi, zehnaseeb....

jis sher ki aap baat kar rahe haiN, usme thodi si typing mistake thi, jo maine theek kardi hai, plzz check...

once again thanks for honour...........

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Zainy G ............... bahut aache... me kisi ek sher ko aacha kaise kahu samajh nahi aa rahi ... mujhe to apki puri ghazal hi dhamakedar lagi


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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri waffa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
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Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
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Bhut khoob aapke matle ka jawaab nahi ghazal ke saare hi aashaar daad ke haqdaar hai qubool keejiye


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zainy Jee aadaab.........

AApki gazal dekhker bahut achcha laga......... Kafi khoobsurat khayalon se less hai aapki yeh gazal....... Daad di na jaye to beshak gazal ki tohin hi hogi......... Behad khoob alfaaz aur adaygii se saji aapki is gazal ke sabhi sher ek se badhker ek lage.... Har sher per daad .........

Khoobsurat gazal per dil se daad kabool kijiye...

Ek mistake nazar aayi thi aap ne door kar dii....... "Wafa ko Jafa kiya tha jo aapne"



Likhati rahiye.........

Khush rhaiye......
Khuda Hafez........

Shukriyah sameer sahab..................................




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Zainy..

namaste! kaise hoN aap?

baRe dinoN baad aapki peShkaSh paRhne kaa mauqaa milaa.. qaabil-e-taareef rahiiN aapki yeh koShiSh.. umdaah ehsaas! yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee .. bazm ki raunaQ baRhaate raheN... ! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

aapka

Dhaval bhaa'ii

Mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi Dhaval bhai....

yuhi saath dete rahiye..............




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Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

ahem ahem ..............

pahle to apne dil ki raza jaan jayiye
fir jo nigaah-e-yaar kahe maan jayie

kateel ji ne kaah hia humne dohraa diya
man nahi bhara aur likhe ... itni kanjoosi theek nahi hai ji

Shukriyah Vikas bhai,

Ji koshish tou rehti hai ke zyada se zyada likhuN per waqt ki kami ki wajah se kayi ghazaleiN puri nahi ho paati....

Mood change ho jaata hai tou ghazal bhi adhuri hi reh jaati hai........

yuhi saath dete rahiye




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Aap tou Masha-Allah bahot khoob likhti hain.............................................. .....
dil se daad haazir hai..........................................
Aise hi achhi achhi ghazlon se mehfil ki shaan badhati rahiye........................

khush rahiye
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Bohat bohat shukriyaH Fezan sahab.....

Yuhi saath dete rahiye.......




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Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey


Bahot khoob ehsaaso-khayalaat hai jainy.. likhti rahen.
allah hafiz
shaad.

Shukriyah Sameer sahab,,

Der se reply de rahi huuN,iske liye maafi ki talabgaar huuN....

ummid hai aap sab meri masrufiyat ko laparwaahi ka naam nahi denge,

Yuhi saath dete rahiye.




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behad khoob zainy ji...dil ke khayaalat kis sadgi se lafzon mein utaar diyee aapne....

ek sher aapki hi tarz par..

khoob hota hai mere dil manzar yeh bhi
pyaas aankhon ki pyaalon se bhujhaaon kaisey..

yunhi likhte rahiyeGaa..

Shukriyah Anu ji...

Aajkal kahaaN ghayab haiN aap? Sdc per nazar hi nahi aate...??

Aate rahiye,

Sdc per aap jaise acche shayer aur khadadaan ki kami mehsoos hoti hai

Aur aapka sher waqay lajawaab hai...bohat khoob

DuaoN ke saath




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DostoN bahot dino baad aaj mehfil me kuch pesh kar rahi huuN....ummid hai aapko meri yeh koshish pasand aayegi...Padhiye aur izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...




YakeeN apni mohabbat ka dilauN kaisey
Jo ruuth jaaye tu mujhse tou manauN kaisey

Meri waffa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey

Tera hi naam sunati hai dil ki har dhadkan
Sadayen dil ke dhadakne ki sunauN kaisey

Mai saath tere chaluN, hausla kahaaN mujhme
Diye jo faasle qismat ne mitauN kaisey

Nahi hai jin meiN mere pyaar ki mahek "Zainy"
MaiN aise phooloN se khwaboN ko sajauN kaisey



Zainy Ji........

Boht Acha Laga Aap Ko Parhna....

Boht Achay Khayalaat Ko Boht Achay Alfaaz Me Piroya Hai Aap Ne....

ALLAH AAP KO KHUSH RAKHAY




Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
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Meri waffa ko samajhta hai bewafai tu
Bata dey rasm-e-mohabbat nibhauN kaisey


Bahaut khooooooooooooooob Zainy ji

Her sher laajawaab hai

puri Gazal dil ko chooo gai


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Zainy Ji ... Sa-Parivaar Haardik ShubhkaamnaayeN ... Happy DiwaaLi .. !

DiwaaLi Parv Ke Mauqe Par ... Ummeed Kartaa HooN ... Jald Aapki Nayi Peshkash Hume PaDhne Ko Milegii ......... !!!




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