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तेरे ह्रदय की पीड़ा खोजे अपने मन मा -
12th January 2011, 09:35 PM
ajj bhut dino ke baad kuch likha hai per yeh maine puri trah hindi mai likha hai urdu ke shabdo ka kam se kam upyog kiya hai
chukiyin yeh hindi mai so mai issi hindi mai hi post karoonga roman hnidi ke liye sorry yeh hindi mai hi phdne mai achi lagegi waise meri guzarish hai issko gungane ke dekhye ga ek lay mai padhyega koshish hai meri pata nahi shyad utni achi na hoo per fir bhi ek baar dekhye ga yasir तेरे ह्रदय की पीड़ा खोजे अपने मन मा तेरी व्यथा आलिंगन को अपने ह्रदय आंगन मा आनिश्चिता की अभिवक्ति में निशचिता का खोजे सूरज की किरणे जब छाए बदरी सावन मा निश्छल चंचल करुणा दारुणा कथा कहानी खोजे संसार दीपक लिए जगमग-तारो के उपवन मा विरह व्यथा के भागो में जीवन के फिंके रागों में खोजे अपना संतृप्त साया दर्पण के नयनन मा बहुत कठिन डगर यह प्रेम की किंचित व्याकुल अश्रुओं की धारा तेरे मेरे बंधन मा विरह व्र्ष्ठी के ओलों में द्रवित ह्रदय के जलते शोलो में नैनों में निंदिया न आवत जले स्वप्न रूपी तपन मा तेरे ह्रदय की पीड़ा खोजे अपने मन मा हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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13th January 2011, 08:41 AM
Very Nice Poetry ..... Yasir Ji !
Very Touching ........ !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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13th January 2011, 10:17 AM
Yasir jee:
namaste! bahot hi Khoob rahiin aapki yeh koShiSh.. aage bhee yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n dil se daad..! KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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13th January 2011, 10:34 AM
waah waah yasir bhai....apni mumbai me boloon to "classic cheez hai beedu, kya faadu item likhelaa hai" bas mazaa aa gaya.
Sach kahun to is baar meri taraf se aapko har baar se zzyada daad aur mubarakbaad... wo isliye nahi ki kavita acchee thee, wo to har baar hi mashallah behtar hoti hai. Balki is liye kyonki aapme ye hunar bhi hai, urdu behad saral lang. maani jati hai lekin hindi ke jin alfaazon ko chunkar aapne ye kavita banaaai hai wo bahot romanchak aur naye se lage... hats off for u sweetyy... Aapki hindi pe bhi aiisi pakad hai, mashallah behad acchee baat hai ye... aur hame bahot khushi huii... Likhte rahen hindii me bhi kabhi kabhaar... Last me bas itna hi kahunga ki..." kuch alag ho kabhi, to accha lagta hai." apna khayal rakhhen... shaad... |
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13th January 2011, 12:14 PM
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Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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13th January 2011, 06:24 PM
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app ko achi lagi bhut bhut kushi hoyi bhut bhut shukriya bas aise hi app apna ashirwaad banye rakhen duaaon mai yaad rakhye yasir हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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13th January 2011, 06:42 PM
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ajj shyad appne pheli baar humre kisi post pe comment kiya hai iskliye hum appke bhut shukrguzaar aise hi app apna kimati waqt mai se thoda waqt nikaal ke ajya karye bhut bhut shukriya appke anne ka orr phadne ka orr hosla afzai ke liye yasir हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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13th January 2011, 06:50 PM
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orr yeh bhi pata rehta hai mai jaisa bhi likhoonga app mera honsla zaroor bhadeynge sach mai tahe dil se appke anne ka orr appke hasnsla vafzai ka shukriya ada karta hoon abb to haq sa smjhne laga hoon app dono per ki koi ayye na ayye app log zaroor ayenge aise hi maine hindi mai likhne ki koshish ki orr app logon ko pasand ayyi yeh apne app mai bhut badi kushi ki baat hai mere liye waise hmesha se hi urdu bolte hai orr lucknow ke bhi issliye urdu to bhut bassi hoyi hai per mujhe hindi se bhi bhut prem hai or mujhe hindi bhi bhut achci trah se atti actully UP Board hindi medium se 10 12 kiya hai issliye hindi orr sanskrit bhut achi trah se atti hai per hindi mai kbhi likhe nahi ek baar phele 4 line likhe thi jisme baaki 6 lines urdu ki thi per puri trah se hindi mai pheli baar likha hai orr app logon ko achi lagi bhut bhut shukriya iss nacheez ki post ko phadne ke liye aise hi atte rahe hosnsla bhdate rahye orr dua mai yaad rakhe yasir हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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13th January 2011, 06:52 PM
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yasir हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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