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27th November 2011, 12:29 AM
Duaa bhi Tuu, Dawaa Bhi Tuu, Sanam Baade-Sabaa Bhi Tuu,
AdaaoN kaa Tu Paikar hai, Haseeno ki hayaa Bhi Tuu.
Kisii ka Qatl kartee hai Kisi ko Zindegee deytee,
Agar Muaafi Mujhe miltee to keh deytaa Khudaa bhi Tuu.
Tujhe SochhuN to Murdaa dil Dhadak utthtaa hai Seene meiN,
Sunaa hai ye bhi LogoN se ke deytee hai Qazaa bhi Tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee Chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
Usee Mahboob ke Gore se HaaNthoN ki Hinaa bhi Tuu.
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Shaad...
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27th November 2011, 06:25 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Duaa bhi Tuu, Dawaa Bhi Tuu, Sanam Baade-Sabaa Bhi Tuu,
AdaaoN kaa Tu Paikar hai, Haseeno ki hayaa Bhi Tuu.
Kisii ka Qatl kartee hai Kisi ko Zindegee deytee,
Agar Muaafi Mujhe miltee to keh deytaa Khudaa bhi Tuu.
Tujhe SochhuN to Murdaa dil Dhadak utthtaa hai Seene meiN,
Sunaa hai ye bhi LogoN se ke deytee hai Qazaa bhi Tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee Chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
Usee Mahboob ke Gore se HaaNthoN ki Hinaa bhi Tuu.
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Shaad...
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WaaH ! Shaad Bhai !! Kyaa Dilkash Aur Umdaa Sher Kahe HaiN .. !
BehtreeN Ghazal Huii Janaab !
Laajawaab Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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RooH Se RooH Tak
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27th November 2011, 07:12 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Duaa bhi Tuu, Dawaa Bhi Tuu, Sanam Baade-Sabaa Bhi Tuu,
AdaaoN kaa Tu Paikar hai, Haseeno ki hayaa Bhi Tuu.
Kisii ka Qatl kartee hai Kisi ko Zindegee deytee,
Agar Muaafi Mujhe miltee to keh deytaa Khudaa bhi Tuu.
Tujhe SochhuN to Murdaa dil Dhadak utthtaa hai Seene meiN,
Sunaa hai ye bhi LogoN se ke deytee hai Qazaa bhi Tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee Chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
Usee Mahboob ke Gore se HaaNthoN ki Hinaa bhi Tuu.
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Shaad...
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ji nice one ........................................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
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28th November 2011, 12:25 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
WaaH ! Shaad Bhai !! Kyaa Dilkash Aur Umdaa Sher Kahe HaiN .. !
BehtreeN Ghazal Huii Janaab !
Laajawaab Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Aapkaa behad shukrguzaar hoon Mehra saab.. Aap ne jo ehsaasoN ko waqt diyaa aur unhe saraaha, hausla afzaai ke liye shukriyaa...aate rahiye
Shaad....
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28th November 2011, 12:40 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
duaa bhi tuu, dawaa bhi tuu, sanam baade-sabaa bhi tuu,
adaaon kaa tu paikar hai, haseeno ki hayaa bhi tuu.
Kisii ka qatl kartee hai kisi ko zindegee deytee,
agar muaafi mujhe miltee to keh deytaa khudaa bhi tuu.
Tujhe sochhun to murdaa dil dhadak utthtaa hai seene mein,
sunaa hai ye bhi logon se ke deytee hai qazaa bhi tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
usee mahboob ke gore se haanthon ki hinaa bhi tuu.
Kabhi jo haanth failaa kar hoon aaya baargaah-e-rab,
ibaadat ki wajah bhi tuu, duaaon ka silaa bhi tuu.
Tha aayaa ek tuufaan "shaad" apnee zindegee mein yoon,
jo ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, lutaa bhi tuu bachaa bhi tuu.
shaad...
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shaad saheb,--bahut--bahut---khoob,dil se daad
krishna
NA JANE NEENDON SE KYON DUSHMNI HUEE krishna
KHULI PLAK PE KOEE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN
KRISHNA
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29th November 2011, 11:08 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Duaa bhi Tuu, Dawaa Bhi Tuu, Sanam Baade-Sabaa Bhi Tuu,
AdaaoN kaa Tu Paikar hai, Haseeno ki hayaa Bhi Tuu.
Kisii ka Qatl kartee hai Kisi ko Zindegee deytee,
Agar Muaafi Mujhe miltee to keh deytaa Khudaa bhi Tuu.
Tujhe SochhuN to Murdaa dil Dhadak utthtaa hai Seene meiN,
Sunaa hai ye bhi LogoN se ke deytee hai Qazaa bhi Tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee Chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
Usee Mahboob ke Gore se HaaNthoN ki Hinaa bhi Tuu.
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Shaad...
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Shaad ji.....
apki kuch bht achchi gazlon ka selection hai ere pas.... ye unme se ek ban gai hai......
excellent sher.. dil ko chhute ehsaas.. pyaar me dube shabd.... aur ek madhosh dil se nikle jazbaat...... har ek sher me ye sab dekhne ko mila.....
mahobbat ki khushbu bikherti iss gazal k liye aapko dheron badhai.....
khush rahiye aur isi tarah inspire karte rahiye likhne k liye...
Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..
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30th November 2011, 01:08 PM
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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30th November 2011, 02:40 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Duaa bhi Tuu, Dawaa Bhi Tuu, Sanam Baade-Sabaa Bhi Tuu,
AdaaoN kaa Tu Paikar hai, Haseeno ki hayaa Bhi Tuu.
Kisii ka Qatl kartee hai Kisi ko Zindegee deytee,
Agar Muaafi Mujhe miltee to keh deytaa Khudaa bhi Tuu.
Tujhe SochhuN to Murdaa dil Dhadak utthtaa hai Seene meiN,
Sunaa hai ye bhi LogoN se ke deytee hai Qazaa bhi Tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee Chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
Usee Mahboob ke Gore se HaaNthoN ki Hinaa bhi Tuu.
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Shaad...
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Shaad ji namskaar.......................
shaad sahaab bahut hi uMda aur dil ko chu lene waali hai aapki ye peshkesh
mazaa aa gayaa
waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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30th November 2011, 07:15 PM
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ji nice one ........................................
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Ji bahot baahot shukriyaa......................................... ........
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30th November 2011, 07:16 PM
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shaad saheb,--bahut--bahut---khoob,dil se daad
krishna
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Aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa Krishna ji.. khushi hui aaapko yahaaaN dekhkar.. aate rahiyega.. Shukriyaa
Shaad...
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30th November 2011, 07:21 PM
Anamika jee... Aapne haal hi mein SDC join kiyaaa hai magar mujhe maloom hai ke meri shaayriyoN se aaapka khaas rishta rahaa hai.. aap bahot arse se mujhe padh rahi haiN... ye meri sabse badee khushnaseebi hai jo aaaj aap zahiri taur pe inhe padhti haiN aur comments kartee haiN.. aapke ehsaas hamesha se mere liye khaas hote haiN... Aur aapki muhabbat aur inaayat bahot haiN mere khushi ke liye.... ek baar fir se shukriyaa kahna chahungaa ke aap ye waqt detii haiN.... Khush raheN..
Shaaad..
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30th November 2011, 10:53 PM
shaad ji...
subhanallah!!! jaise ke aap jante hai aap ki likhawat ki kabhi koi misaal hi nahi milti... wahhhhh... likhte rahiye...
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1st December 2011, 06:28 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Duaa bhi Tuu, Dawaa Bhi Tuu, Sanam Baade-Sabaa Bhi Tuu,
AdaaoN kaa Tu Paikar hai, Haseeno ki hayaa Bhi Tuu.
Kisii ka Qatl kartee hai Kisi ko Zindegee deytee,
Agar Muaafi Mujhe miltee to keh deytaa Khudaa bhi Tuu.
Tujhe SochhuN to Murdaa dil Dhadak utthtaa hai Seene meiN,
Sunaa hai ye bhi LogoN se ke deytee hai Qazaa bhi Tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee Chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
Usee Mahboob ke Gore se HaaNthoN ki Hinaa bhi Tuu.
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Shaad...
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Waaaahhh shaad bhai. Kya kahu aapki is peshkash ke baare mein. Shayad jo bhi kahuN kum hi rahega. Behad naazuk, komal aur khoobsoorat ghazal hui hai. Dili daad o mubaarakbaad. Allah kare aap aur tarakki karein.
Aameen
apna khyaal rakhein
duaoN mein yaad rakhiye
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9th December 2011, 07:17 PM
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Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
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Shukriyaaahhhhhhh............ Zainy Saahibaaa.
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9th December 2011, 07:20 PM
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Originally Posted by Rajeev Sharma
Shaad ji namskaar.......................
shaad sahaab bahut hi uMda aur dil ko chu lene waali hai aapki ye peshkesh
mazaa aa gayaa
waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Khush rahiye Rajeev Sharma bhai... aapki muhabbat aur khuloos se chasme-nam ho aai haiN... aapko sukoon pahuchta hai kalaaam se to ye mere liye bahot badi baaat hai... yuNhi saaath banaaae rakkhen.. shukriyaa
Shaaad...
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10th December 2011, 09:02 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Duaa bhi Tuu, Dawaa Bhi Tuu, Sanam Baade-Sabaa Bhi Tuu,
AdaaoN kaa Tu Paikar hai, Haseeno ki hayaa Bhi Tuu.
Kisii ka Qatl kartee hai Kisi ko Zindegee deytee,
Agar Muaafi Mujhe miltee to keh deytaa Khudaa bhi Tuu.
Tujhe SochhuN to Murdaa dil Dhadak utthtaa hai Seene meiN,
Sunaa hai ye bhi LogoN se ke deytee hai Qazaa bhi Tuu.
Chupaa kar apnee Chaahat ko, jo baithee hai jhukaa ke sar,
Usee Mahboob ke Gore se HaaNthoN ki Hinaa bhi Tuu.
Kabhi jo haaNth Failaa kar hooN aaya Baargaah-e-Rab,
Ibaadat ki wajah bhi Tuu, DuaaoN ka Silaa Bhi Tuu.
Tha aayaa ek TuufaaN "Shaad" apnee Zindegee meiN yooN,
JO ghar dekhaa kiye apnaa, Lutaa bhi Tuu bachaa bhi Tuu.
Shaad...
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bahut khoob ... shaad bhai .... dil se daad ... radhe radhe ..........
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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12th December 2011, 08:42 AM
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shaad ji...
subhanallah!!! jaise ke aap jante hai aap ki likhawat ki kabhi koi misaal hi nahi milti... wahhhhh... likhte rahiye...
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AAapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon jo aap aisaa sochte hain... Nacheez ki bisaat kuch nahi faqat aap dostoN ka khuloos hai jo kuch kar guzarne ke liye uksaata rahtaa hai... halaaki in koshishon me koi dam nahi.. magar inka haasil yahi bahot hai ke aap sabhi ko pasand aataa hai.. meri jaanib se shukraana qubool kijiye....
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12th December 2011, 08:43 AM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Waaaahhh shaad bhai. Kya kahu aapki is peshkash ke baare mein. Shayad jo bhi kahuN kum hi rahega. Behad naazuk, komal aur khoobsoorat ghazal hui hai. Dili daad o mubaarakbaad. Allah kare aap aur tarakki karein.
Aameen
apna khyaal rakhein
duaoN mein yaad rakhiye
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Very much thanks to you anjaan saahab... Aapne qabool farmaaya AasharoN ko iske alfaaz alfaaz aapke karzdaar hue.. aate rahiyegaa aur apna khayal rakkheN...
Shukriyaa...
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12th December 2011, 08:47 AM
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bahut khoob ... shaad bhai .... dil se daad ... radhe radhe ..........
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Tahe dil se shukriyaa aapka Rajinder bhai.. ummeed kartaa hoon aage bhi yuNhi saath miltaa raahegaa....
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15th January 2012, 03:05 PM
Good one, Sameer Bete...!
2nd sher is my favourite...!
Keep it up & take care, ok...?
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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