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bujhartaa -
5th May 2008, 12:02 AM
jive kise mod te aa k muk jaandiyaa ne hasrtaa,
ki eh vi kite mukdiyaa ne nafrtaa..
ki dilaa vich wqt nal badlde ne khyaal.
ki gareebaa te v hundiyaa ne rehmtaa.
ki aashiq vichode to baad v jionda reh sakda.
ki shaayeraa nu marn to pehla v mil sakdiyaa ne shahurtaa...
ki koi sachi dilo bhula dinda.
ki eh bhuliyaa v ja sakdiyaa ne chaahtaa...
"deep" jinha swaala de jwaab labh reha,
koi ta das deo ki eh bujiaa v ja skdiyaa ne bujhartaa...
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bujartaan -
5th May 2008, 02:51 PM
Maut de mod te aaune to pehla
kade muk dia nai hasrtaa,
Ha piyar naal muk sakdia ne nafrtaa,
Ha dil de khiyaal ve badlde ne waqt de naal naal
Ha rab saccha karda a gareeba te ve rehmtaa,
Sacche aashiq viccohde to baad jeonde nahi rehnde
Rooh de shayeraa nu hi mil sakdia ne marne to pehla shohrtaan,
Joothe aashiq ta dilo bhula dende ne pal vich,
Par bhulia nai ja sakdia kade sacchia chahtaan,
"Deep" bas ene ku sawalaa de jawab ne mere kol,
Bus enia ku bujh saki a main teria bujhartaan
sandeep gill
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5th May 2008, 06:58 PM
woo thanx ji....tusi mere swala de jwaab de dite.........thats gr8..u r pretty smart..thnx alot
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6th May 2008, 12:02 PM
DEEP de swaal v niyaare te,SANDEEP de jwaab v pyare ne,
rabba slamat rakhi doha nu,
dono hi sdc nu pyare ne.
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6th May 2008, 07:27 PM
Deep, bahut hi sohna likhiya hai yaar, ena pyara ke hai ke sachmuch sochan nu dil karda hai eh sab kuch
-------------------------------------------- Jihdi mitro bhaal ch dil oh na kuri labhdi,oh na kuri labhdi
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6th May 2008, 08:22 PM
a babbu te adeep........tusi ta aap bahut ucche shayer ho ji........sanu aina maan bakshia mehrbaani
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7th May 2008, 07:40 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by D33P
jive kise mod te aa k muk jaandiyaa ne hasrtaa,
ki eh vi kite mukdiyaa ne nafrtaa..
ki dilaa vich wqt nal badlde ne khyaal.
ki gareebaa te v hundiyaa ne rehmtaa.
ki aashiq vichode to baad v jionda reh sakda.
ki shaayeraa nu marn to pehla v mil sakdiyaa ne shahurtaa...
ki koi sachi dilo bhula dinda.
ki eh bhuliyaa v ja sakdiyaa ne chaahtaa...
"deep" jinha swaala de jwaab labh reha,
koi ta das deo ki eh bujiaa v ja skdiyaa ne bujhartaa...
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Deep bahut hi sohniya han, teriya bujharta, bhave aapna nu ehna de jawab pata hove, jive ek sandeep ne dite ne, sab de mann ch ehi answer aaonge, answer dena koi aukhi gal nahi,
par mere anusar ta eh jawab kitaba ja filma ch disde ne, asal life ch ta ehna te mainu yakeeen jiha nahi hunda, jive ke....
Sacche aashiq viccohde to baad jeonde nahi rehnde
Rooh de shayeraa nu hi mil sakdia ne marne to pehla shohrtaan,
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7th May 2008, 08:11 PM
thanx heer ji.........par main tuhadi gall samjia hi nai........explain kronge?/
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25th May 2008, 07:33 PM
[quote=ADHURI HEER;286193]Deep bahut hi sohniya han, teriya bujharta, bhave aapna nu ehna de jawab pata hove, jive ek sandeep ne dite ne, sab de mann ch ehi answer aaonge, answer dena koi aukhi gal nahi,
par mere anusar ta eh jawab kitaba ja filma ch disde ne, asal life ch ta ehna te mainu yakeeen jiha nahi hunda, jive ke....
Sacche aashiq viccohde to baad jeonde nahi rehnde
Rooh de shayeraa nu hi mil sakdia ne marne to pehla shohrtaan,
Deep heer ji de kehan da matlab eh hai ke jo mai likhia hai ke jehre aashiq sacche dilon piyar karde ne oh vichran to baad jeonde nahi reh sakde te jihre shayer rooh to likhde ne uhna nu hi marne to pehla shohrtaan mildia ne par heer ji nu eh sab gallan te yakeen nahi hai uhna da kehna hai ke eh sab kitabi ja phir filmi dialogs han hun samjh gaye hovoge
sandeep gill
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26th May 2008, 09:29 AM
Deep ji, te Sandeep ji..
Tussi dohan ne boht hi vadiya likhya ae..
Inj hi likhde raho!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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26th May 2008, 11:03 AM
MaiN kujh dinaaN toN soch rihaa si ki ajj kall Deep ne Kamaal karni kujh ghatt kar ditti hai. Par ajj bahut sohnaa likhiaa hai. Eh alag gall hai ki saanu tuhaadey ToN umeedaaN hor vi zyaadaa ne. Par shaandaar sawaal aur Jawaab vi vadhiyaa diittey Sandeep ji ne. Sandeep ji fataa fatt poetry vi khoob kar laindey ne.
Wasdey raho
tilak
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
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28th May 2008, 12:13 AM
mehrbaani thanx jnaab........
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