Tun jo turiya naal ve valentin day 2012ghazal (revised) -
21st February 2012, 10:27 AM
Dosto revised ghazal ik navein shayer naal peshkar reha hhaN. I hope you like it.
Dosto aap sabh nu Valentine Day 2012 bahut mubaarak. May you and your partner have a very very happy long life together. Ashk
Valentine Day 2012 Ghazal (REVISED)
TUN JO TU RIYA NAAL VE
tuN jo Turiya naal ve, Tor meri badal gayee
madhosh hoiyaaN hasrataaN, khushbu teri jad ral gayee
tuN mileiN taaN mile khuda, bin tere rahaaN gamzadaa
ziNdgi kujh istrhaaN , hai meri badal gayee
DharknaN vich wasdaa eiN, tuN taaN saahaN di tarhaa
door hoveiN lagdaa iveiN, jaan meri nikal gayee (new shayer)
vekhyaa dharti daa chan, chan arshaaN da sharmaa gayaa
poh di pehli kiran, tanuu vekhke machal gayee
Heer Ranjhaa taaN nahiN, par jadoN ik raah Ture
Dor dil di meri, hathoN rabba fisal gayee
Keete hone ‘Ashk’ ne, pichle janam chaNge karam
shabdaaN vich rooposh ho, tu ban meri ghazal gayee
Tor-walk, poh-dawn, rooposh-disappear
Copyright. Hardev Sodhi ‘Ashk’
"takaaza umar da nahiN jardaa e jee dil taaN bachha e jee"
Last edited by Hardev Ashk; 21st February 2012 at 10:38 AM..
Awe some ashk ji.... SDC te es tarah hi chann ban ke chamakdey raho... Shaandaar gazal... bahut ghat shayar reh gaye ne punjabi gazal de... Tusi es raah da deewa ban ke jagmagaundey raho
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
Tun jo tu riya naal ve -
27th April 2012, 08:55 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by tilakji
Awe some ashk ji.... SDC te es tarah hi chann ban ke chamakdey raho... Shaandaar gazal... bahut ghat shayar reh gaye ne punjabi gazal de... Tusi es raah da deewa ban ke jagmagaundey raho