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14th October 2012, 02:35 PM
toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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Welcome to shayri.com neetu jee..... And thanx for liking....
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umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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सकरात्मक सोच इंसान को हमेशा आगे की तरफ ले जाती है. आपकी लिखी हुयी यह रचना ऐसी ही एक कोशिश है जिसके लिए आप बधाई के पात्र हैं.
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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wah wah!
Bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahii aapne..! Umdah peshkash..!
Khaash t`aur pe mat`la bahot pasand aaya!
Daad qubool farmaa`en.!
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main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon - 14th October 2012, 02:05 AM -
4th March 2013, 09:27 AM
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Originally Posted by aru
toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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सकरात्मक सोच इंसान को हमेशा आगे की तरफ ले जाती है. आपकी लिखी हुयी यह रचना ऐसी ही एक कोशिश है जिसके लिए आप बधाई के पात्र हैं.
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Thanx jaspal jee..................................
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9th March 2013, 02:21 PM
wow bahut nice lines hai , may be ye lines me haqiqat chipi hai
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Bahutu hi ache khyaal pesh kitye hain agape arunji. aur Bhai Kalam bulandiyaan chuye. bas itna kahna chahunga, ham ise ghazal nahi kah skate
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wah wah!
Bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahii aapne..! Umdah peshkash..!
Khaash t`aur pe mat`la bahot pasand aaya!
Daad qubool farmaa`en.!
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Thanx a lot prashant jee...............
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wah wah!
Bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahii aapne..! Umdah peshkash..!
Khaash t`aur pe mat`la bahot pasand aaya!
Daad qubool farmaa`en.!
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Thanks a lot prashant jee....................
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wow bahut nice lines hai , may be ye lines me haqiqat chipi hai
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Thanx geetu jee,...may be apne sahi kaha ho
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16th November 2013, 04:17 PM
toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
bahut hi khubsurat peshkesh hai aru bhaiiiiii
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16th November 2013, 10:28 PM
ek dipak se diwali bana leta hoon ..... beautiful !
bahaut hi khoobsurat rachna rahi Aru ji .... vichaaron mein bahaut gehraayee, vishwaas aur saahas hai ..... dheron daad !!!
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18th November 2013, 03:36 PM
bahut khoob, bahut hi sundar
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18th November 2013, 04:35 PM
aapki ye ek behad puraani peshkash hai Aru bhai... lekin jis lihaaz jis muhabbat aur jis tadap se is kalaam ko sajaaya hai wo waaqai kaabile tareef hai....... bahot bahot badhaai aapko Aru bhai.......
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon
kyaa kehne hain... bhai waahh
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24th November 2013, 01:20 AM
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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thanx a lot shakir jee...........
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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thanx zarra jee....aapka saath yun hee bana rahe..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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aapki ye ek behad puraani peshkash hai Aru bhai... lekin jis lihaaz jis muhabbat aur jis tadap se is kalaam ko sajaaya hai wo waaqai kaabile tareef hai....... bahot bahot badhaai aapko Aru bhai.......
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon
kyaa kehne hain... bhai waahh
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Thanx shoiab bhai..............aapki mohabbat hai jo aise likhne pe majboor karti hai..
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24th March 2014, 10:21 AM
toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
Arvindji,
Kya khubsurat tehreer hai, bhai....................
aalatareen soch pe daad..................
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30th March 2014, 09:15 PM
Hello Aru
Truly Inspirational.Due respect to u for the motivation that this poetry conveys.
Harivansh rai bachan ji ki kavita yaad aa gayi..koshish karne walon ki kabhi haar nahin hoti.
keep up the good work
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31st March 2014, 06:27 AM
Arvind bhai ,
Shayad ye vohi pehli rachna hai jo maine SDC pe pehli baar pari thi
Oct 2012 aur isi se inspire ho ke yahan jur kaya .
Aapka dhara pravah bahut hi kamaal ka hai is rachna mein aur shabdon
ka jaal bun.ne ki kala aap mein God gifted kala hai ..
Thora sa last ki line mein mujhe abruptness lagi ...
Umeed ka daaman kabhi chorta nahi 'aru'
Ek deepak se Diwali bana leta hun.
Isme saani { second } ke ehasaas bade ache hain per adaygi
thori raw lagi mujhe ..Ho sake tou is pe gaur farmayein ..
Bura na man~na main apni niji ray de raha hun..
Regds
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ek-ek lafz dil ko choo gaya bahut khub likha hai aapne.............
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thanx a lot ravi jee.......................... ............................
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
Arvindji,
Kya khubsurat tehreer hai, bhai....................
aalatareen soch pe daad..................
Adil.
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thanks a lot adil jee. .....aapka saath yun hee bana rahe............
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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wow...how different. ..kya khubsurat andaaz hai ..
One of your best, I must say
Hats off. ..ghazal ke liye bhi aur usme maujood josh aur himmat ke liye bhi
you truly deserve reps for this one...+++
Zainy
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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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thanx adil g for reputation..................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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Sorry aru ji kuch problem hai system mein shayad exclamation ki jagah question mark aa raha hai.
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Sorry aru ji kuch problem hai system mein shayad exclamation ki jagah question mark aa raha hai.
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hello masti g..... koi baat nahin....waise mere mein to boxes banke aa rahe h
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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12th June 2014, 08:15 AM
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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Aru ji muhabbat ho ya Dushmani......ek sunder aagaaz ho to anjaam bhi achha hone ki umeed band jaai hai....aapka ye peskarda kalaam bahut hi khoobsoorati se apne anjaam tak pahooNchaya hai aapne....
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,.....................bahut hi oomda ..waah...merii jaanib se dhairoN daad qabool farmaaiyega....
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bahut badhiyaaa.. likha hia sahab..
Binaa tere ... khudaa mere.. seher kaisii.. safar kaisaa..
KaheeN daryaa kaheeN pyaasaa idhar bhatkaa udhar bhatkaa ~ - Abhi Tamrakar
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Hello Aru
Truly Inspirational.Due respect to u for the motivation that this poetry conveys.
Harivansh rai bachan ji ki kavita yaad aa gayi..koshish karne walon ki kabhi haar nahin hoti.
keep up the good work
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thanx sukanya jee......for appreciating and liking.........
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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31st July 2014, 03:44 PM
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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One of the best of urs aru ji. .
Ek to khoobsurat rachna au uspe aapki behtareen soch. ...
Aapki positivity isme aur bhi jaan daal rahi hai...
Itni Achhi kavita ke liye dheron badhaiyaan..ummeed hai jald hi aapki koi nayi
Peshkash padne ko milegi...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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bohut bohut badhiya
yun hi likhte rahiye aur hamen luftandoz karte rahiye.
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Arvind bhai ,
Shayad ye vohi pehli rachna hai jo maine SDC pe pehli baar pari thi
Oct 2012 aur isi se inspire ho ke yahan jur kaya .
Aapka dhara pravah bahut hi kamaal ka hai is rachna mein aur shabdon
ka jaal bun.ne ki kala aap mein God gifted kala hai ..
Thora sa last ki line mein mujhe abruptness lagi ...
Umeed ka daaman kabhi chorta nahi 'aru'
Ek deepak se Diwali bana leta hun.
Isme saani { second } ke ehasaas bade ache hain per adaygi
thori raw lagi mujhe ..Ho sake tou is pe gaur farmayein ..
Bura na man~na main apni niji ray de raha hun..
Regds
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sanjay g mujhe aaj bhi vo din yaad hai jab aapne mujhe call kiya tha..aur isi rachna ke liye badhaai dee aur pransha kee thi.....thanx a lot for ur appreciation....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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wow...how different. ..kya khubsurat andaaz hai ..
One of your best, I must say
Hats off. ..ghazal ke liye bhi aur usme maujood josh aur himmat ke liye bhi
you truly deserve reps for this one...+++
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Thanx a lot zainy jee...aapki repky padkar mujhe aur bhi josh mila hai..........bas aap aage bhi aise hee saath deti rahiyega...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Amazing, incredible, superrb.......í*½í±í*½í±í*½í±í*½í±í*½í±
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Thanx sarika jee......yun hee aapka sneh bana rahe bas yehi dua karta hu....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon,
phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe,
main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon,
raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein,
main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon,
raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main,
har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon,
na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj,
main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon
vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe,
main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon,
mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon.
main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon,
aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere,
main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon,
aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main,
aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon,
milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo.
main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon,
manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main,
ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon,
jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera,
insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon,
apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva,
main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon,
daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin ,
bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon.
umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru'
ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon,
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Aru bhai.....etni positive soch jis ensaan ke paas hai wo kabhi bhi kisi bhi jagah par maat nahi kha sakta, muje aapka yeh attitude behad pasand aaya...aur aapki aik aik baat dil ko chu gye...bahut hiiiiiiiumda likha hai aapne...aapki es postive soch ko hamara salaam.
aapki reps points ke haqdaar hai
reps +++
god bless u
vry sorry, abhi reps pont add nahi kar paa rhi hu...pending rhe
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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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