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izhaar-e-khyaal(ek aise bazam jo sabke liye khuli hai) - 22nd August 2006, 12:04 PM

dosto ajj hum ek naya silsila shuru karne ja rahe hai....jisme app sab ka tahe dil se sawagat hai....isme app khulke apne khyalon ka izhaar kar sakte ho.......is main hum sab milkar ek nai gazal shuru kiya karainge or hum sab milkar usko poori kiya karainge...jis me hum koshish karainge ki hum jo bhee likhe wo ehsaaso se bharpoor ho......jisme umda khyaal ho....beshak appko gazal ki jiyada jaankari na bhee ho phir bhee app khulkar apne dil ke jajbaton ko likhe.....agar app kafiya milana jante ho to appka is bazam main khule dil se sawagat hai........umeed karta hoon appsab ka bharpoor saath milega........app ka dost .........rajveer.......


chalo phir is silsile ko shuru kare......khuda ka naam lekar.....

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Re: izhaar-e-khyaal(ek aise bazam jo sabke liye khuli hai) - 22nd August 2006, 12:11 PM

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Re: izhaar-e-khyaal(ek aise bazam jo sabke liye khuli hai) - 22nd August 2006, 12:16 PM

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dosto ajj hum ek naya silsila shuru karne ja rahe hai....jisme app sab ka tahe dil se sawagat hai....isme app khulke apne khyalon ka izhaar kar sakte ho.......is main hum sab milkar ek nai gazal shuru kiya karainge or hum sab milkar usko poori kiya karainge...jis me hum koshish karainge ki hum jo bhee likhe wo ehsaaso se bharpoor ho......jisme umda khyaal ho....beshak appko gazal ki jiyada jaankari na bhee ho phir bhee app khulkar apne dil ke jajbaton ko likhe.....agar app kafiya milana jante ho to appka is bazam main khule dil se sawagat hai........umeed karta hoon appsab ka bharpoor saath milega........app ka dost .........rajveer.......


chalo phir is silsile ko shuru kare......khuda ka naam lekar.....

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Re: Re: izhaar-e-khyaal(ek aise bazam jo sabke liye khuli hai) - 22nd August 2006, 12:24 PM

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Re: Re: Re: izhaar-e-khyaal(ek aise bazam jo sabke liye khuli hai) - 22nd August 2006, 12:28 PM

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hi - 22nd August 2006, 12:40 PM

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Re: hi - 22nd August 2006, 12:47 PM

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Re: Re: hi - 22nd August 2006, 01:03 PM

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22nd August 2006, 02:43 PM

rajveer ji..

thanx a ton for starting this thread..
i really aapreciate it..
thank u thank u thank u thank u soooooooooooo much..

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hi - 22nd August 2006, 04:25 PM

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mere dil ki rakh kured mat..ise muskura ke hawa na de..
ye charaag fir bhi chiraag hai.. kahi tera haath jala na de..

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nisha ji bhut khub surat shuruwaat hai.....bhut acha kaha appne or is thred ki badai un sab dosto ko jo apne dil main bhut kush dabaiye huie baithe hai.....wo bhee apne khyaal or apne jajbaat ek doosre se share karain.......wel come.......

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mere dil ki rakh kured mat..ise muskura ke hawa na de..
ye charaag fir bhi chiraag hai.. kahi tera haath jala na de..

nisha

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tere bina jeevan guzarna na mumkin maloom parta hai,
ya to meri ho ja tu ya phir mujhe jeene ki duaa na de.......

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ki hai aabad maine tere dil me mohhabt ki duniya kayam
dar hai koi rusbai tere dil se meri mohhabt ko mita na de

raj sahab kuch jam nahi raha ye sher pls help karo.

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23rd August 2006, 10:11 AM

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ye charaag fir bhi chiraag hai.. kahi tera haath jala na de..

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ki hai aabad maine tere dil me mohhabt ki duniya kayam
dar hai koi rusbai tere dil se meri mohhabt ko mita na de

raj sahab kuch jam nahi raha ye sher pls help karo.

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dua karti hu mai kudha se yeh rishta yu hi banna rahey,
par darti hu ki dunia es rishtey ko nazar lagga na de.....

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lagne lagi ye duniya khoobsurat aap jo isme rahne lage
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main bhi aik naya sher pesh ker rahi hoon i don't know ye is qabil hai k ise agay barrhaya jaye ager aap logon ko is qabil lagay to plz mujhay khushi hogi


main ne zindagi jin yadon main guzaar di
woh yaaadain jin khuwabon main guzar di
un khuwabon ko haqeeqat main dhaal de
ger lagay main ne kismat ko maat di


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main bhi aik naya sher pesh ker rahi hoon i don't know ye is qabil hai k ise agay barrhaya jaye ager aap logon ko is qabil lagay to plz mujhay khushi hogi

dear frind
mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki is sher ka main kya reply doon. shayad ye meri nadani ka sabab hai. chalo fir bhee koshish karta hoon.

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main ne zindagi jin yadon main guzaar di
woh yaaadain jin khuwabon main guzar di
un khuwabon ko haqeeqat main dhaal de
ger lagay main ne kismat ko maat di
IInd sher

yaden or khwab kabhi sach ho nahi sakate
isliye maine aaj tanhai main jindgi guzar di.


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hi - 24th August 2006, 10:33 AM

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yaden or khwab kabhi sach ho nahi sakate
isliye maine aaj tanhai main jindgi guzar di.

'dilip'

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sadiyon se bikhri huie thee meri zindagi,
kisi ne meri zindagi pal main sawaar dee.....

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Re: hi - 24th August 2006, 10:41 AM

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yaden or khwab kabhi sach ho nahi sakate
isliye maine aaj tanhai main jindgi guzar di.

'dilip'

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sadiyon se bikhri huie thee meri zindagi,
kisi ne meri zindagi pal main sawaar dee.....

'veer'
4th sher
aaj wo jo itne kareeb baithe the mere,
unki chahat main humne jindgi waar dee...

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hi - 24th August 2006, 11:06 AM

4th sher
aaj wo jo itne kareeb baithe the mere,
unki chahat main humne jindgi waar dee...

'dilip'

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teri yaadon ke sahare jeet li thee zindagi,
tujhe bhool ke maine apni zindagi haar dee.....

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teri yaadon ke sahare jeet li thee zindagi,
tujhe bhool ke maine apni zindagi haar dee.....

'veer'

6th sher

khuda se manga humne tujhe har ghadi har pal,
aur usne hamari jholi me mayusi beshumar dee....

(veer ji,sunita ji,dilip ji.. plz help.. kuch ajeeb sa sher lag raha hai.. kuch galat ho to sudharein..)

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hi - 24th August 2006, 11:33 AM

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khuda se manga humne tujhe har ghadi har pal,
aur usne hamari jholi me mayusi beshumar dee....

(veer ji,sunita ji,dilip ji.. plz help.. kuch ajeeb sa sher lag raha hai.. kuch galat ho to sudharein..)

nisha

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khuda se manga tujhe har ghadi har pal,
usne hamari jholi me mayusi beshumar dee....

'nisha'

bhut pyara izhaar hai .......ek khubsurat gilla us dene wale se.....nisha bhut acha kaha......or haan tera massage box full ho gaya hai usko khali karo.......

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jisne mera daman kanto se bhar diya,
jiske chaman ko humne har bahar dee.....

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Re: hi - 24th August 2006, 11:41 AM

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6th sher

khuda se manga humne tujhe har ghadi har pal,
aur usne hamari jholi me mayusi beshumar dee....

(veer ji,sunita ji,dilip ji.. plz help.. kuch ajeeb sa sher lag raha hai.. kuch galat ho to sudharein..)

nisha

6th share

khuda se manga tujhe har ghadi har pal,
usne hamari jholi me mayusi beshumar dee....

'nisha'

bhut pyara izhaar hai .......ek khubsurat gilla us dene wale se.....nisha bhut acha kaha......or haan tera massage box full ho gaya hai usko khali karo.......

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jisne mera daman kanto se bhar diya,
jiske chaman ko humne har bahar dee.....

,veer'
8th sher

yaaden unki ban gayi sahara tere jeevn ka "dilip"
chalni ho gaya jigar unke marne ki jo khabar dee

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hi - 24th August 2006, 12:04 PM

ek bhut he pyari or umda gazal anzaam tak pounchi.......ab ek nai gazal shuru kar raha hoon......

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Re: hi - 24th August 2006, 12:28 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by rajveeer
[B]ek bhut he pyari or umda gazal anzaam tak pounchi.......ab ek nai gazal shuru kar raha hoon......

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mere aansuon ko yu girne se roka usne,
apni dasta sare mehfil kehne se roka usne.....

'veer'

pila rahi thi sari mahfil ko apni masti ka jaam
hum bhi madhosh huye to peene se roka usne...

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Re: Re: hi - 24th August 2006, 12:40 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by dilip200
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ek bhut he pyari or umda gazal anzaam tak pounchi.......ab ek nai gazal shuru kar raha hoon......

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mere aansuon ko yu girne se roka usne,
apni dasta sare mehfil kehne se roka usne.....

'veer'

pila rahi thi sari mahfil ko apni masti ka jaam
hum bhi madhosh huye to peene se roka usne...

dilip
is sher ko main dubara se post kar raha hoon

2nd sher

pila rahi thi mahfil ko apni masti ka jaam,
dekh ke meri pyaas peene se roka usne...


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Re: Re: Re: hi - 24th August 2006, 03:37 PM

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is sher ko main dubara se post kar raha hoon

2nd sher

pila rahi thi mahfil ko apni masti ka jaam,
dekh ke meri pyaas peene se roka usne...
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Chand apne noor se pila raha tha jaam koi...
badh rahi thi pyaas or mujhe roka usne......
   
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hi - 24th August 2006, 04:11 PM

dosto aapsab ke bich me ek sher mera bhi..................


Laga baithe hai hum to rog dil se ishq ka,
Haath thaam ke humara, dard hone se roka usne.....


meine likh to diya hai lekin agar aap words chang karna chahe to kar sakte hai.


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hi - 24th August 2006, 04:37 PM

dosto aapsab ke bich me ek sher mera bhi..................


Laga baithe hai hum to rog dil se ishq ka,
Haath thaam ke humara, dard hone se roka usne.....


meine likh to diya hai lekin agar aap words chang karna chahe to kar sakte hai.

Laga baithe hai hum to rog dil se ishq ka,
Haath thaam ke humara, dard hone se roka usne.....

pooja bhut acha likha ehsaas bhut khub hai .....acha likha appne...


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24th August 2006, 05:20 PM

Laga baithe hai hum to rog dil se ishq ka,
Haath thaam ke humara, dard hone se roka usne.....

aik meri taraf se bhi

hum to dena chahatay the ta qayamat saath us ka
mager janay kion humaray badhtay howe qadmon ko roka us ne


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Re: hi - 24th August 2006, 05:26 PM

4th sher

Laga baithe hai hum to rog dil se ishq ka,
Haath thaam ke humara, dard hone se roka usne.....

"pooja"

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nazare jhukakar ishq ka izhar kar diya usne
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hi - 24th August 2006, 05:48 PM

wah doston kya silsile chal rahe hai sheron-shayriyon ke. bahot hi achha lag raha hai.
khuda kare ye silsila kabhi ruke na.
sab ke saath se ye badta rahe. sabhi bahot hi khooob likh rahe hai.


6th sher

Chal rahe hai sooni dagar pe manzil ki aas liye,
Humsafar banke raah bhatak jane se roka usne.....


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Re: hi - 24th August 2006, 08:20 PM

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wah doston kya silsile chal rahe hai sheron-shayriyon ke. bahot hi achha lag raha hai.
khuda kare ye silsila kabhi ruke na.
sab ke saath se ye badta rahe. sabhi bahot hi khooob likh rahe hai.


6th sher

Chal rahe hai sooni dagar pe manzil ki aas liye,
Humsafar banke raah bhatak jane se roka usne.....


aapki dost
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rahe manzar me hamsafar banne ka wada karke
mazil ke raste pe saath aane se roka usne....

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24th August 2006, 10:24 PM

hi bhai ye to bohat buri baat hai beech main se mera sher kion gol ker diya gaya hai ye kesi monoply hai is ka to matlab ye howa k ye sirf kuch logon k sheron k liye hi hai jagah


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hi - 24th August 2006, 10:32 PM

koi to ho ji(aapka naam nahi pata isi liye) mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki aapka sher kaha gaya, mein apne sher ko koi number nahi diya thha lovely ji ne nu de diya 4th aur fir apne sher ko 5th bana diya. bahot hi galat baat hai. lovely ji se shikayat rahegi ye.

aapke sher ka nu. 4th hai, mera 5th ,lovely ji ka 6th, fir mera 7th, dilip ji ka 8th hai.
dekhiye ab sabhi iss baat ka khayal rakhiye ki ye sab ke liye hai. number sahi diya jaye sabhi ko.

mein aapse maaffi mangti hu. sorry.

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24th August 2006, 10:52 PM

Chal rahe hai sooni dagar pe manzil ki aas liye,
Humsafar banke raah bhatak jane se roka usne.....


pooja tumne kaha aur main likha raha hoon..to dosto ek sher meri aur se bhi....


Chal rahe hai sooni dagar pe manzil ki aas liye,
Humsafar banke raah bhatak jane se roka usne.....

" BAITHA HU MAIN AKELA DIL ME KUCH AAS LIYE........

ZINDAGI KO JI RAHA HU MAIN DIL ME ARMNAAN KUCH KHAS LIYE........."


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hi - 25th August 2006, 01:03 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by dilip200
doori sab mita kar kareeb aa jao tum
mere khile gulshan ka gulzar ho tum

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Door thi manjil,rasta bahut kathin....
Raah-e-manjil ka nishaan ho tum
   
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