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Thumbs up "YE DARD BHARI KALAM...................." a shayri for her.........."ishq"...... - 17th September 2006, 10:42 AM

jaan ,hum to hai ishq karne wale,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi sehne do........

hum to hai ishq ko chahne wale,
ye dard ko unko hi chahne do........

hum to hai ishq ki bate karne wale,
ye dard ki bate unko hi karne do...............

hum to hai ishq k bareme sochne wale,
ye dard k bare me unko hi sochne do........

tum samjho sirf ishq k bare me,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi samajhne do.......

tum likha karo ishq bhari kalam,
ye dard bhari kalam to unko hi likhne do......






A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...............................................

ye dard bhari kalam unko hi likhne do.........


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Re: "YE DARD BHARI KALAM...................." a shayri for her.........."ishq".. - 17th September 2006, 12:33 PM

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jaan ,hum to hai ishq karne wale,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi sehne do........

hum to hai ishq ko chahne wale,
ye dard ko unko hi chahne do........

hum to hai ishq ki bate karne wale,
ye dard ki bate unko hi karne do...............

hum to hai ishq k bareme sochne wale,
ye dard k bare me unko hi sochne do........

tum samjho sirf ishq k bare me,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi samajhne do.......

tum likha karo ishq bhari kalam,
ye dard bhari kalam to unko hi likhne do......






A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...............................................

ye dard bhari kalam unko hi likhne do.........
are wah kya nasihat di hai janaab.

chalo use kahenge ki vo aapki baat manle.

aapne achha likha hai. very nice..................

likhiye likhiye

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17th September 2006, 12:37 PM

are wah kya nasihat di hai janaab.

chalo use kahenge ki vo aapki baat manle.

aapne achha likha hai. very nice..................

likhiye likhiye

gratse

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Re: "YE DARD BHARI KALAM...................." a shayri for her.........."ishq".. - 17th September 2006, 12:38 PM

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jaan ,hum to hai ishq karne wale,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi sehne do........

hum to hai ishq ko chahne wale,
ye dard ko unko hi chahne do........

hum to hai ishq ki bate karne wale,
ye dard ki bate unko hi karne do...............

hum to hai ishq k bareme sochne wale,
ye dard k bare me unko hi sochne do........

tum samjho sirf ishq k bare me,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi samajhne do.......

tum likha karo ishq bhari kalam,
ye dard bhari kalam to unko hi likhne do......






A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...............................................

ye dard bhari kalam unko hi likhne do.........
seedhe seedhe bol na tu ham logo ke bare main kah raha hai.....

nice na

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Re: Re: "YE DARD BHARI KALAM...................." a shayri for her.........."ishq&quo - 17th September 2006, 12:41 PM

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seedhe seedhe bol na tu ham logo ke bare main kah raha hai.....

nice na

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seedhe seedhe bol na tu ham logo ke bare main kah raha hai.....

nice na

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haan ji dilip ji aap hi ke bare me bol rahe hai ye. aap log ho jo sare jahan ka dukh apne seene me liye bethe ho..........ha na


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Re: "YE DARD BHARI KALAM...................." a shayri for her.........."ishq".. - 18th September 2006, 10:17 AM

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jaan ,hum to hai ishq karne wale,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi sehne do........

hum to hai ishq ko chahne wale,
ye dard ko unko hi chahne do........

hum to hai ishq ki bate karne wale,
ye dard ki bate unko hi karne do...............

hum to hai ishq k bareme sochne wale,
ye dard k bare me unko hi sochne do........

tum samjho sirf ishq k bare me,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi samajhne do.......

tum likha karo ishq bhari kalam,
ye dard bhari kalam to unko hi likhne do......






A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...............................................

ye dard bhari kalam unko hi likhne do.........
dear dhaval, accha lagta hai jab tum apne dil ki baat seedhey shayri main kahtey ho. aur ha mai bhi yehi dua karti hu ki tum dard ke barey main kabhi na likho yeh kabhi tumhari kisi kushi ko na chuye.

tumhrey chrey par lagti hai hansi acchi,
es liye dua karti hu us kudha se main,
ki mere bhai ko kabhi koi gum na dena,
uski ankho mai nahi lageygi nami acchi.

god bless u.

tumhari didi


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18th September 2006, 10:49 AM

dear dhaval, accha lagta hai jab tum apne dil ki baat seedhey shayri main kahtey ho. aur ha mai bhi yehi dua karti hu ki tum dard ke barey main kabhi na likho yeh kabhi tumhari kisi kushi ko na chuye.

tumhrey chrey par lagti hai hansi acchi,
es liye dua karti hu us kudha se main,
ki mere bhai ko kabhi koi gum na dena,
uski ankho mai nahi lageygi nami acchi.


god bless u.

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janaab aadaab,

aapne jo ye likha hai isne mujhe bahut jyada confuse kar diya hai.yakeen maaniye shayad mujhe theek se padhna hi nahi aa paa raha par mujhe feelings me jane ki aadat hai aur is baar main samajh hi nahi paa raha hun kuch v.

main samajh hi nahi paa raha ki aap ek baar tum kehte ho aur ek baar unko kehte ho ek hi sher me,jabki aapne pehle hi keh diya hai ki ye kalaam kisi particular shakhs ke liye hai.to kya aap mujhe bata paayenge ki yahaan aap kise tum aur kise unko keh rahe hain? kyunki dono sarvnaam ek hi shakhs ki oor ishara kar rahe hain.aur agar aisa hai to un sheron ka koi matlab hi nahi reh jayega.
aur ek correction thi janaab,

dard bhara kalaam hota hai,dard bhari nahi.


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21st September 2006, 05:44 PM

janaab aadaab,

aapne jo ye likha hai isne mujhe bahut jyada confuse kar diya hai.yakeen maaniye shayad mujhe theek se padhna hi nahi aa paa raha par mujhe feelings me jane ki aadat hai aur is baar main samajh hi nahi paa raha hun kuch v.

main samajh hi nahi paa raha ki aap ek baar tum kehte ho aur ek baar unko kehte ho ek hi sher me,jabki aapne pehle hi keh diya hai ki ye kalaam kisi particular shakhs ke liye hai.to kya aap mujhe bata paayenge ki yahaan aap kise tum aur kise unko keh rahe hain? kyunki dono sarvnaam ek hi shakhs ki oor ishara kar rahe hain.aur agar aisa hai to un sheron ka koi matlab hi nahi reh jayega.
aur ek correction thi janaab,

dard bhara kalaam hota hai,dard bhari nahi.


maafi chahunga agar meri koi baat buri lage aapko.naadan samajh kar maaf kar dijiyega hume.


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janab ghayal saab

aapko mera bhi adaab

to janab maine bhi aapka ye reply padha abhi abhi aapne jo kaha k main ek hi sher me kisiko tum kehta huaur ek hi sher me unko kehta hu

ye baat sach kahi aapne kyuki main sirf uske liye likhta hu

wo hi mereliye "tum" hai aur wo hi mere liye"unko" hai

"tum" ya" unko" lafz use karne se use koi fark nahi pada par ako achha nahi laga kyuki aap kabil aur bade shayar hai main aaj ka naya naya chhotasa shayar hu meredost

mujhe kaha shayri aati hai ye jo kuch thoda tum ya unko jaisa likhna sikha hu itna kafi hai mereliye .........

aur dard bhari kalam hoti nahi dard bhara kalam hota hai shukriya aapne aisasamjhaya

bas aap uhi mujhe samjhate jayiye main bhi shayad aapki tarha likhna sikh jau .............


aapka bhaot bahot shukriya aise hi aapkasuggetions ka intezar rahega hamesha

aate rahiyega janab, achha lagega

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janaab main aapki baat se sehmat hun par maine iske liye nahi kaha ki agar aap alag sheron me alag shabd kahen to kuch nahi hoga.par jab ek hi sher me dono shabd hon tab gadbad hoti hai.

jaise

tum samjho sirf ishq k bare me,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi samajhne do.......

tum likha karo ishq bhari kalam,
ye dard bhari kalam to unko hi likhne do......



ab yahaan wahi ishq ko samjhengi v aur dard ko v samjhayengi,aur ishq ke kalaam aur dard ke kalaam dono wo hi likhengi.yahaan mere khayaal se kuch sudhar ki jaroorat hai.nahi to lagta hai saare kam unhi se karwaye jaa rahe hain.jabki baaki ke kalaam me aapne kuch apne liye rakha hai aur kuch unke liye.

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janaab main aapki baat se sehmat hun par maine iske liye nahi kaha ki agar aap alag sheron me alag shabd kahen to kuch nahi hoga.par jab ek hi sher me dono shabd hon tab gadbad hoti hai.

jaise

tum samjho sirf ishq k bare me,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi samajhne do.......

tum likha karo ishq bhari kalam,
ye dard bhari kalam to unko hi likhne do......



ab yahaan wahi ishq ko samjhengi v aur dard ko v samjhayengi,aur ishq ke kalaam aur dard ke kalaam dono wo hi likhengi.yahaan mere khayaal se kuch sudhar ki jaroorat hai.nahi to lagta hai saare kam unhi se karwaye jaa rahe hain.jabki baaki ke kalaam me aapne kuch apne liye rakha hai aur kuch unke liye.

ho sakta hai maine kuch galat kaha ho.maafi chahunga iske liye.par mujhe yahi mehsoosh hua.
ghayal ji gustakhi maaf......mein samjhati hu plzz sorry.........yahan ''tum'' se matlab uss shaqs se hai jise dhaval ye kah rahe hai ki tum sirf pyaar ke kalam hi likho....aur ''unko'' ka use un logo ke liye hai jo dard bhari kalam likhte hai.........ye tum aur unko alag alag shaqs ke liye use kiye gaye hai.......

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nahi yaar maafi kaisi mere dost

]ab dekho maintumhe samjhata hu thik se

jaise ki ek line leta hu



tum samjho sirf ishq k bare me,
ye dard ko sirf unko hi samajhne do.......


ha to tum lafz ye maine usse kaha hai jiske liye main hamesha likhta hu ok?????


aur dusri line me unko word use kiya maine

ye word maine un logo k liye kaha hai jo dard bhari peshkas likhte ha ijaise k aap

to main bas ye samjhana chahta tha use [;use means jiske liye main shayri likhta hu]


k tum samjho ishq k bare me ye dard sirf unke liye hi rehne do

ok?

lucky ji
samajh me aaya?

i hope k aap mujhesamajh rahehonge

reply dijiyega fir se

im waiting

and no sorry in friendship

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got it ab.yaar bhaari confuse kar daala tha.aadat ho gayi hai lines ko todne ki.aur uske kaaran jyada hi confuse ho gaya...... keep writing.



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got it ab.yaar bhaari confuse kar daala tha.aadat ho gayi hai lines ko todne ki.aur uske kaaran jyada hi confuse ho gaya...... keep writing.
aap unhi dhyan se post dekhte rahiye kabhi na kabhi to dhaval ji ke kalaam ki geharai ko samajhna aahi jayega..........

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got it ab.yaar bhaari confuse kar daala tha.aadat ho gayi hai lines ko todne ki.aur uske kaaran jyada hi confuse ho gaya...... keep writing.


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lucky

main jo bhi likhta hu aap jaise dosto se hi sikha hu..
aapse bhi sikhneko milega mujhe

agarkuch achha na lage toa ise hi reply kar dena

aapka inntezar rahega meri har peshkas pe agese k kab lucky ji ka reply aaye

aap mujhe suggetion de sakte hai no prob.
par ye dard bhari kalam tha.....ok??
ab has bhi do mere yaar

meri baat ka kuch bura laga ho to maaf kadena ere dost

ate rahiyega

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