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har khawaab tut jata hai ishk mein pura hone se pehle...
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woh to ishq ke naam se ghabra jate hain
hum sochte the ishq unse karlein.........



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woh to ishq ke naam se ghabra jate hain
hum sochte the ishq unse karlein.........
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woh peheli barish woh peheli mulakat
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"Bheege dupatte ko ungli par lapetna,
mera usse shararat se nazre.n milana,
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mujhe abhi tak sab yaad hai zara zara"

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humne bhi kisi par pyaar aane laga....
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pyar karne wale anjaam se nehin darte
jo darte hain woh pyar nehin karte



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aur uska sharma kar nazre.n jukana,
mujhe abhi tak sab yaad hai zara zara"

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wo chali gayi ye kehkar ki mujhe mila hi kya hai...
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pyar karne wale anjaam se nehin darte

jo darte hain woh pyar nehin karte
wo chale gaye to socha ki ab jee kar kya karna...
rab ne fir rehmat ki or ek diya jala diya.....
uski roshni mein jab jeene ki aarju hui...
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wo chale gaye to socha ki ab jee kar kya karna...
rab ne fir rehmat ki or ek diya jala diya.....
uski roshni mein jab jeene ki aarju hui...
to kisi ne diye k niche ka andhera dekha diya....
har kiske khwahish pure nehin hote
marne ki daar se jina to nehin chorte ...?



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har kiske khwahish pure nehin hote

marne ki daar se jina to nehin chorte ...?
humme kab kise se marne ki khawaish ki hai...
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gazab halat ishq paida karta hai
hum jinke dil main hai
wohi hume mehefil main dhund rahe hain



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wohi hume mehefil main dhund rahe hain

andaz apna aaine main dekhte hain wo
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mehfil ko unki jab hum chhod kar chalne lage...
tab wo najrein jhuka kar muskarane lage the ....
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andaz apna aaine main dekhte hain wo
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wah wah...kya karein humare halat kuchh aise hain
hum unke pyar main inte masroof hain
ki aaine main bhi wohi dikhayi dete hain



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[QUOTE=Diya_Jale;300413]wah wah...kya karein humare halat kuchh aise hain
hum unke pyar main inte masroof hain
ki aaine main bhi wohi dikhayi dete hain
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wah wah...kya karein humare halat kuchh aise hain
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ki aaine main bhi wohi dikhayi dete hain
"is ishq ke haatho.n se har-giz naamaafar dekhaa
utanii hii ba.Dii hasarat jitanaa hi udhar dekhaa
thaa baa_is-e-rusavaa_ii har cha.nd junuu.N meraa
ki unako bhii na chain aayaa jab tak na idhar dekhaa"

-Jigar Moradabadi


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Ajeeb si kashish hai aap mein,
Ke hum aap ke khayaalon mein khoye rehte hai..

Yeh soch kar ke aap khawaabo mein aaoge,

Hum din mein bhi soya karte hai..
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Actual alfaaz jinhe pakistan ke mash-hoor shayar AHMAD NADEEM QAASMI ne likha yun hain:

GALI KE MOD PE LADKON KE EK JHURMUT MEIN
YE KIS NE DARD BHARE SUR MEIN MAHIYA GAYA
MUJHE KISI SE MUHABBAT NAHI MAGAR AEI DOST
YE KYA HUA KI DIL-E-BEQARAR BHAR AAYA.

*kisi kisi jagah SUr ki jagah LAY bhi dikhai deta hai.
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Ajeeb si kashish hai aap mein,
Ke hum aap ke khayaalon mein khoye rehte hai..

Yeh soch kar ke aap khawaabo mein aaoge,

Hum din mein bhi soya karte hai..
..nm

"door hai aaj lahre.n kyuN sahil se,
kyuN kinaro.n se takrake yeh lout jati haiN,
kahte hain pyar ke liye ek pal hi kaafi hai,
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Actual alfaaz jinhe pakistan ke mash-hoor shayar AHMAD NADEEM QAASMI ne likha yun hain:

GALI KE MOD PE LADKON KE EK JHURMUT MEIN
YE KIS NE DARD BHARE SUR MEIN MAHIYA GAYA
MUJHE KISI SE MUHABBAT NAHI MAGAR AEI DOST
YE KYA HUA KI DIL-E-BEQARAR BHAR AAYA.

*kisi kisi jagah SUr ki jagah LAY bhi dikhai deta hai.
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kahte hain pyar ke liye ek pal hi kaafi hai,
shayad esi khayaal se milne chali aati haiN"
aap ke sayari ka jawab to abhi de nehin paungi ...sayad yeh jawab aap ko pasand aaye Sunita ji
Tum na jao kahin,
Bas ik nazar dekh lene ki ijazat de do...
Kuchh waqt guzar loon tere qadmon mein,
Ik zindagi jeene ki ijaazat de do...nm



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"hai bas yehi tamana dil-e-namuraad ki,
akhiri hichki teri bahho.n mein hi aaye"

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Qaid kar rakha hai jo sadiyo se pyar iss dil mein tere liye
Aaj jee bhar ke tujhpe barsaane ki ijaazat de do..

Teyz hawa hai kahin bujh na jaaye pyar ka DIYA
Zara roshan-e-dil hamein jalaane ki ijaazat de do..nm



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patthar ke Khudaa patthar ke sanam patthar ke hii insaa.N paaye hai.n
tum shahar-e-mohabbat kahate ho ham jaan bachchaakar aaye hai.n



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patthar ke Khudaa patthar ke sanam patthar ke hii insaa.N paaye hai.n
tum shahar-e-mohabbat kahate ho ham jaan bachchaakar aaye hai.n
waah mayank sir kamal kar diya.......
khud ka to kuch turant bana nahi sakta.... ise hii post kar deta hoon

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bahat khoob Mayank ji - 11th August 2008, 06:20 PM

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Dilip Jee aur Riya jee, aap dono ka bohat bohat Shukriyah.. - 11th August 2008, 06:57 PM



pyaar mujhase jo kiyaa tumane to kyaa paaogii
mere haalat kii aa.ndhii me.n bikhar jaogii
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sukriya Mayank ji ...bas chhotisi koshish hai mehefil ko sajane ki - 11th August 2008, 07:21 PM

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pyaar mujhase jo kiyaa tumane to kyaa paaogii
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[Javed Akhtar]
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phir aaj mujhe tum ko bas itanaa bataanaa hai
ha.Nsanaa hii jiivan hai ha.Nsate hii jaanaa hai
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per aap ne Diya ko Riya likhe hain - 11th August 2008, 07:37 PM

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I love this couplet

phir aaj mujhe tum ko bas itanaa bataanaa hai
ha.Nsanaa hii jiivan hai ha.Nsate hii jaanaa hai
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Zindegi to khawab hai khawab ko sajana hai
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Haq Shayar Ka - 11th August 2008, 10:49 PM

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jo yaad meri aaye to kabhi gam na karna...
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hmmmm....bahut accha hai reply

"hai bas yehi tamana dil-e-namuraad ki,
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duniya k sitam bhi kam na hue...
hmare jakhm bhi kuch kam na hue...
wo beshak hamesha ehsaas dilate rahe apni mahobat ka...
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Samj to aaya,dil me rehte hai aap humare.......
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Samj to aaya,dil me rehte hai aap humare.......
Kambakht nazar to aaye,ye khoya kaha hai.....




Mehfil me dhundh rahe the,apne dil k tukde hum.......
Unhe laga shayad hume unki talaash thi.....
yeh deewane bhi kitne jhoot bolte hain
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Nigaahein milane ki himaakat kaise karen hum.....
Suna hai wo nazron se katl-e-aam karte hai......
mohhbat kii bhii nahi nigahon se dar gaye
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“na rahi koi doori do jismo.n ke darmiya.n,
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