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kya baat hai..... - 7th August 2008, 04:08 PM

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im new here plz ap mujy thora guide kro ge k mujy kis forum me kya posyt krna hai i love poetry
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"teri aankho.n ka noor ban jauN,
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main tera humsafar ban jauN"


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"teri aankho.n ka noor ban jauN,
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hum dono mein koi parda na rahe,
main tera humsafar ban jauN"


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VASL AB RAAH SE BHATKE KABHI MUMKIN HI NAHIN
DASHT-E-HASTI* MEIN TERA ISHK HAI TAARON KI TARAH.

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Dhalti shaam ka khula ehsaas hai,
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Mein uski hu, yeh Raaz toh vo jaan gaya hai..

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waah kya baat hai...........

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waah kya baat hai...........

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Dil to unka hai unke har baat maan leta hai
labz main ikrar kare to yakin karlon......



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*DASHT-E-HASTI (forest of life,jeevan aranya,zindgi ka jungle.)

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Waah Prashantji! Baa_qayii damdaar sher hai. Lekin maan_na paDegaa ki agar aap ne 'dasht-e-hasti' kaa haasil-kalaam naa samajhaayaa hotaa to hamaari samajh ke baahar thaa ye sher. Ham abhi-abhi Urdu siikh raheN haiN haalaaN ki hamaari Urdu kabhi-kabhi be-daaGh si lagti hai. Bahut saare lafz samajh meN nahiN aate aur ham dictionary (luGhat?) kaa istemaal karte haiN.

Likte rahiyegaa.. aur samajhaate rahiyegaa.

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dil per haath rakho jawab mil jayega....

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Dil to unka hai unke har baat maan leta hai

labz main ikrar kare to yakin karlon......

Aap donoN kaa sawaal-jawaab kaafi mazedaar hotaa jaarahaa hai. Ham jab un logoN ke baare meN sochate haiN jo rap, rock aur pop ke diiwaane hogaye haiN to hameN un par bahut taras aataa hai. Woh log kabhi lazzat-e-Urdu ko chakh nahiN paayeNge aur sher-o-shaayri meN jo aise Khuubsuurat jazbaa ubhar aate haiN unko kabhi mahsuus nahiN kar paayeNge..

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Aap donoN kaa sawaal-jawaab kaafi mazedaar hotaa jaarahaa hai. Ham jab un logoN ke baare meN sochate haiN jo rap, rock aur pop ke diiwaane hogaye haiN to hameN un par bahut taras aataa hai. Woh log kabhi lazzat-e-Urdu ko chakh nahiN paayeNge aur sher-o-shaayri meN jo aise Khuubsuurat jazbaa ubhar aate haiN unko kabhi mahsuus nahiN kar paayeNge..

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shayri wo hai jo aapme jeene ka jajba jagatii hai... aur ye wo jagah hai jahan hame seekhne samajhne ko kafi kuch milta hai........ even sawal jawab ka ye silsila aapme shayri ke liye ek naya jajwa paida karta hai....
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"jab humne mohabat ki to yeh raaz saamne aaya,
kyuN Ranja Takhat Hazara chorr yogi ban aaya"

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Sher jo aap ne likha wo yun hai..
ISHQ NE GAALIB NIKAMMA KAR DIYA
VARNA HUM BHI AADMI THE KAAM KE.

ye sher Mirza Asad-ullah-beg Ghalib ka likha hua hai..jinhe hum Ghalib ke naam se jaante hain..lihaaza ab ye NA-MALOOM nahin raha.Ghalib ki jagah Zaalim aap kahan se laaye..?
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terii zulfoN ke bikharne kaa sabab hai ko’ii
aaNkh kahtii hai tere dil meN talab hai ko’ii


Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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"Teri Bhigii zulfo.n ka koi kasoor nahi,
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terii zulfoN ke bikharne kaa sabab hai ko’ii
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Bikhari zulfon ko sanwaarne ko jee chahta hai,
Aaj phir sanam ko nihaarne ko jee chahta hai,
Kabhi thukra diya tha jise hamne naadaani mein,
Aaj phir usko pukaarne ko jee chahta hai...



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ujaale apanii yaado.n ke hamaare saath rahane do
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~Bashir Badr ~



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Log Toot Jate Hain Ek Ghar Banane Main
Tum Taras Nahi Khate Bastiyaa.n Jalane Mai.n

( Bashir Badra Ji )


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Log Toot Jate Hain Ek Ghar Banane Main
Tum Taras Nahi Khate Bastiyaa.n Jalane Mai.n

( Bashir Badra Ji )


"in aa.Nkho.n kii mastii ke mastaane hazaaro.n hai.n
in aa.Nkho.n se vaabastaa afasaane hazaaro.n hai.n
ik sirf ham hii may ko aa.Nkho.n se pilaate hai.n
kahane ko to duniyaa me.n maiKhaane hazaaro.n hai.n"

-Shahryar ji


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ik sirf ham hii may ko aa.Nkho.n se pilaate hai.n
kahane ko to duniyaa me.n maiKhaane hazaaro.n hai.n"

-Shahryar ji

chalo pee le.n ke yaar aaye na aaye
ye mousam baar baar aaye na aaye....... ( umar khaiyaam )


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chalo pee le.n ke yaar aaye na aaye
ye mousam baar baar aaye na aaye....... ( umar khaiyaam )
"mai bhi hai meena bhi hai,
bas saaki teri hi kami hai"


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bas saaki teri hi kami hai"


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aap hain main hoon per ye meena koun hai

duniya ik maikhana zindgii hai zame-surahi

aage ki line nahi ban rahi aap bana do


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kaise puchte fir hum bewafai ka sabab...
jab jakhm uske dil par khud se bhi gehra dekha...
bahut khoob.....


"ishq mein be-qaraar jab had se bad gaye,
unse milne bhi gaye to kaanto.n ki nok par"

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ik sirf ham hii may ko aa.Nkho.n se pilaate hai.n
kahane ko to duniyaa me.n maiKhaane hazaaro.n hai.n"

-Shahryar ji
nahii maloom kya rishtaa hai paimane ka aankhon se
chhalak padatii hain aankhe.n jab bhii paimana chalakata hai


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Aankh se aankh milaata hai koi
Dil ko kheenche liye jaata hai koi


Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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bahut khoob.....


"ishq mein be-qaraar jab had se bad gaye,
unse milne bhi gaye to kaanto.n ki nok par"

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mohabat mein lut kar bhi wo khud ko aabaad kehte hain..
ye ashik hain ya inhe koi farishta kahun yaaro.....

aaj apni mahfil ki jaaN diya nazar nahi aa rahi...kisi ko pata hai ki woh kahaN gayab hai aaj


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