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10th April 2011, 01:29 AM
चाँद गली तो उतरा होगा
मुझसे शायद रूठा होगा
ज़हर प्याला दे कर मुझको
कुछ तो वो भी तढ़पा होगा
चुपके चुपके पोंछा होगा
आँख से गर कुछ टपका होगा
उसने ख़त तो भेजा होगा
मुझ तक ही न पहुंचा होगा
नींद उढ़ा कर मेरी वो भी
शब् भर छत्त पर टहला होगा
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Chand gali to utra hoga
Mujhse shayud rootha hoga
Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko
Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga
Chupke chupke poNcha hoga
AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga
Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga
NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga
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13th April 2011, 11:17 PM
ज़हर प्याला दे कर मुझको
कुछ तो वो भी तढ़पा होगा
नींद उढ़ा कर मेरी वो भी
शब् भर छत्त पर टहला होगा
kya baat hai brijinder ji,
bahut daad,,,,..........
ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai.
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19th April 2011, 02:14 AM
thank you for the kind words.I hope this poem lingers in your mind for some time.
Regards
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20th April 2011, 06:11 AM
Brijinderji,
Yeh sab say behtreen lagi:
NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga
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21st July 2011, 11:22 AM
Bahut khubsurat.... especially "NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga".....
Mudattein hui… Mulakat hue….
Suno… Aie… Zindagi…..
Is bar jate jate….
Jara milti jana……
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8th August 2011, 04:24 AM
thank you all for the kind words.
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11th August 2011, 03:48 AM
Very nice jee. Thank you sir,I see your deep observation.
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
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