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7th February 2009, 03:20 PM
yaaraan-e-mehfil:
aadaab arz hai:- aik Ghazal pesh hai .. (jo ki 2 kaafiye par meri pahli Ghazal hai.. )jis ki farmaaish aap me.n se to kisi ne bhi nahee.n kii, par apni hii farmaaish par pesh kar rahaa huu.n ..
to dosto.n, agar ise dheeme dheeme gungunaa kar pyaar ke saath padhe.n to kyaa baat ho!
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cheer kar dil ko dikhaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
gile-shikawe bhii miTaa le.nge tum aao to sahii
ham amaavas me.n bhii duniyaa ko dikhaa de.n ge chaa.nd
chhat pe ham, tum ko sajaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
ham ne waadaa yeh kiyaa kuchh na chhupaaye.nge kabhii
tum ko aaiinaa banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii
dil to kyaa cheez hai yeh jaan bhee haazir hai sanam
apnee hastii bhii miTaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
haath maa.ngaa hai to ham thaam ke bhee rakkhe.nge
ham-safar tum ko banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii
maa.ngate kyu.n ho charaagar se Gham-e-dil ki davaa
hum tumhe.n Gham ki dawaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
*chaaragar: physician
be-asar apnii-muhabbat ko na samjho, :Ghaafil:!
aag paanii me.n lagaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
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maine toh pehle hi kaha tha ki kamaal ka radiif hai sahab ..
mazaa aa gaya ...ab itna bulaane pe bhi yaar na aaye toh laanat hai mohabbat pe
chaliye ...mashq jaari rakhiye ....ye kavish bhi khoob rahi ...!
dua go,
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Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii,
Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN ..
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7th February 2009, 08:34 PM
Kya khoob Rahi Ghazal Mayankji......
Yahan kuch arz karti hoon.......
Hamne jahaan kahin bhi dekha,ek tum ko hee dekha
Aaj tuj se Jahan dekhenge , tum aao to sahi..............
Yunhi likhte rahiye.......Duwao ke saath
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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Excellet Work Dear Friend Mayank -
7th February 2009, 11:25 PM
DEAR FRIEND MAYANK, I HAVE CAME HERE AFTER LONG TIME, AND FIRSTLY I STUKED @ YOUR GHAZAL, CONGRATULATION FOR CREATING SUCH MARVELOUS ,WONDERFULL AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY. MAY GOD BLESS U WITH CREATIVITY AND HATS OFF TO UR WORK.
KEEP WRITING
BEST WISHES AND REGARDS
MANU
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8th February 2009, 12:37 AM
bohat khoob mayank sahab i liked it very much
bohat ki khoobsoorat khayaal....!
Mera daman jalega tau jalogai tum bhi yeh samajhte ho,phir aag lagate kyu ho
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9th February 2009, 07:50 PM
The revised version is a lot better than the older one.. (My personal thought) but haan daad deni hogi. Itne simple se thought par bhi itni khoobsurat gazal likh daali hai bade bhai. maza aa gaya padhkar.
ek sher khaas achha laga...
ham amaavas me.n bhii duniyaa ko dikhaa de.n ge chaa.nd
tum ko ham chhat pe sajaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
Is thought par mera bhi kuch likhne ka mann kar raha hai. Likhunga zaroor... aur aapse share bhi karunga. Bas yu samajhiye Aapke Ehsaaso ko samarpit hoga woh..... Aur vaada karta hu ki poori koshish karunga khoobsurat likhu taaki aapke itne sundar Alfaazon aur Ehsaason ki tauheen na ho. Umeed hai aapki ijazat milegi....
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10th February 2009, 06:55 PM
Mayank ji aadaab arz hai,
Do din se soch rahi thi ki aapki ghazal per kuch comment karun,per aapki ghazal ishq aur dard ke sections me idhar se udhar jhul rahi thi,to maine socha kahin tik jaye phir review dungi...waise accha kiya aapne ultimately ishq me rok diya..ab ishq per kuch likha ho to ishq me hi post karna chahiye, aysa mera apna khayaal hai..ab chalte hai aapki ghazal ki taraf...
waise dont mind...zara shararat ka mood tha to yeh sab likh diya....waise sach poochu to aapki ghazal hai bade kamaal ki...ek bahut hi khoobsurat koshish keh sakte hain....koshish jaari rakhiyega mera matlab hai..(isi tarah acchi acchi ghazalein likhne ki)..
pls dont mind and dont reply...
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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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11th February 2009, 08:42 AM
Hi Mayank Ji
Aapko bahut dino baad padhna naseeb hua ... aapki ghazal hamesha umda rahi hai ... pyaar mein yeh b zaroori hai ..aacha kiya aapne kisi ko pukara .... nahi ko kisi ko kaise pata chalta ... May all ur wishes come true ...
yu hi behtareen ghazal nazar karte rahe...hume intezaare rahega
take care...
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13th February 2009, 10:36 AM
mayaNk bhaiyaa:
namaste!!
kyaa baat haii!! duaa haii mehnat raNg laayeN
aapki yeh pyaar bharii Ghazal bahot Khuub rahee!!
daad!!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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13th February 2009, 04:14 PM
Mayank ji,
kya baat hai Romantic ghazal...hmmm
Valentine spl ...............
dil to kyaa cheez hai yeh jaan bhee haazir hai sanam
apnee hastii bhii miTaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
is sher keliye rep++++++++++++++++++..
aise hi Romantic ghazal likha kijiye ........mahfil ko pyar ki ehesaas se sajate rahiye
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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Hi Mayank,
Bht hi romantic ghazal likhi hai aapne...........ths is the first time i've read something written by u n m impressed........will b looking fwd 4 some more of ur ghazals.....keep it up.
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Jee Ghazal jee, yahaa.n kis ki taareef ho rahii hai hamaari ya khud apni , I mean 'Ghazal' kii
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irshaad!!
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waah waah! waah waah!
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beshak ham likhte rahe.nge, go,aap jaise chaahne waale hame paDhte rahe.n... duaao.n , Ghazal ki pasadeegii ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah...
yuu.n hi aage bhi paDhti rahe.n
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17th February 2009, 09:49 PM
in short.............................superb
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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DEAR FRIEND MAYANK, I HAVE CAME HERE AFTER LONG TIME, AND FIRSTLY I STUKED @ YOUR GHAZAL, CONGRATULATION FOR CREATING SUCH MARVELOUS ,WONDERFULL AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY. MAY GOD BLESS U WITH CREATIVITY AND HATS OFF TO UR WORK.
KEEP WRITING
BEST WISHES AND REGARDS
MANU
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Dear Manu,
kahaa.n Gaayab ho tum? aaya karo yahaa.n bhii......
dost, Ghazal tumhe pasand aaii jaan kar behad khushi huii.... mai.n chaahata huu.n ki tum bhi Ghazale.n pahle jaise likah karo aur site par regular aao.
apna khayaal rakkho...
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bohat khoob mayank sahab i liked it very much
bohat ki khoobsoorat khayaal....!
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The revised version is a lot better than the older one.. (My personal thought) but haan daad deni hogi. Itne simple se thought par bhi itni khoobsurat gazal likh daali hai bade bhai. maza aa gaya padhkar.
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hmm.. Amit bhai, zeyadah mehnat Ghazal likhane me.n nahii hai, lekin us ko khayaalo.n ko duurust rakhane me.n hai. isiliye Ghazal par jahaa.n kamii nazar aati hai, mai.n usay duur karna munaasiib samjhta huu.n. aur yeh sirf baar baar paDhne se ho sakta hai.. Ghazal pasand aaii, jaan kar khushi huii...
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is sher ki pasandeegi ke liye , khaas taur se shukriyah!
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Is thought par mera bhi kuch likhne ka mann kar raha hai. Likhunga zaroor... aur aapse share bhi karunga. Bas yu samajhiye Aapke Ehsaaso ko samarpit hoga woh..... Aur vaada karta hu ki poori koshish karunga khoobsurat likhu taaki aapke itne sundar Alfaazon aur Ehsaason ki tauheen na ho. Umeed hai aapki ijazat milegi....
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zaruur likho Amit bhaii, mere khayaal par koii kuchh likhe woh meri izzat aur himmat afzaaii hi hogii yeh to baDappan hai aap ka jo aap saadgii ke saath mujhe is baat ka ijaazat maa.ng raahe hai.n ... puuri puuri ijaazat hai...
aap ki koshish kaamyaab koshish ho, yeh subh-kaamnaaye.n hai..
likhte raho..
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Ab Chaand ke baare mein likhna hi padega na bhai. Ek Chaand mere paas bhi jo hai.......
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mayank bhai superb
apka ye sher bahut acha hai
ham amaavas me.n bhii duniyaa ko dikhaa de.n ge chaa.nd
chhat pe ham, tum ko sajaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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Hi Mayank Ji
Aapko bahut dino baad padhna naseeb hua ... aapki ghazal hamesha umda rahi hai ... pyaar mein yeh b zaroori hai ..aacha kiya aapne kisi ko pukara .... nahi ko kisi ko kaise pata chalta ... May all ur wishes come true ...
yu hi behtareen ghazal nazar karte rahe...hume intezaare rahega
take care...
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mandeep jee,
hello,
shaayad aap pahli baar ham ne hamaare kisii post par aaii hai.n, aap ko dekh kar khushi huii..
aap ne Ghazal pasand farmaaya is ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah! aap jaise dosto.n ka saath raha to ham aise hi likhte rahe.nge.. aap bhi mehfil me.n aati rahe.n aur kuchh na kuchh likhti rahe.n, achchha lagta hai.....
ek baar phir se shukriyah!
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26th February 2009, 04:09 AM
bhut khoob mayank ji.............saare ke saare shair bhut hi achy hain khaas tour par ye shair bhut khoob hai..
ham ne waadaa yeh kiyaa kuchh na chhupaaye.nge kabhii
tum ko aaiinaa banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii
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mayaNk bhaiyaa:
namaste!!
kyaa baat haii!! duaa haii mehnat raNg laayeN
aapki yeh pyaar bharii Ghazal bahot Khuub rahee!!
daad!!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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dhaval bhaaii,
jai shri krishna
Ghazal pasand farmaane ke liye ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah, ummeed hai ki aage bhi yuu.n hi hausila aur izat afzaaii karte rahe.nge..
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Mayank ji,
kya baat hai Romantic ghazal...hmmm
Valentine spl ...............
dil to kyaa cheez hai yeh jaan bhee haazir hai sanam
apnee hastii bhii miTaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
is sher keliye rep++++++++++++++++++..
aise hi Romantic ghazal likha kijiye ........mahfil ko pyar ki ehesaas se sajate rahiye
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shukriyah diya
Ghazal valentine's special to nahii.n, lekin ittefaaq ki baat thi ki Ghazal Romaani hai aur valentines day ke aas paas likhi gaii thi to valentine's day special kaha jaa sakta hai....
aap ko Ghazal achchhi lagii, jaan kar behad khushii huiii....... shukiyah reps ke liye bhii.
Mayank
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MayaNk sahab adaab....yaraan-e-mehfil meiN aaj kaafi arse baad ana hua..our aate hi aapka kalaam aakhoN ke aage se Guzra..yaqeen maaniye tabiat khush ho gayii...aapkii iss dil paziir Ghazal ke tamaam ashar bahuur hi oomda kahe gaye haiN...merii jaanib se dhairoN daad qubool farmaayeiN dost....
Ek instant ahsaas....do ashar meiN aapke kalaam ko smarpit dost...
Dil-e-aarzoo ko dewaana bana deNge tum aao toh sahi
Zakhm-e-dil muskaan meiN uljha deNge tum aao toh sahi
Mana ke khayii hai chot tumne jawaaN hote -hote ai dost
Un likheiN khatoN ko dewaan bana deNge tum aao toh sahi
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17th March 2009, 06:56 PM
Aadab mayank ji,
kaise hai aap?
Masha allah kitni khubsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne,
aaj kayi dino baad apne parivaar me hazir hui hun,
or yakin maniye aapki ghazal padhkar dili khushi mayassar hui hain,
ALLAH APKO AUR TARAKKI DE,AAMIN
KHUSH RAHIYE
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
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19th March 2009, 11:01 AM
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Hi Mayank,
Bht hi romantic ghazal likhi hai aapne...........ths is the first time i've read something written by u n m impressed........will b looking fwd 4 some more of ur ghazals.....keep it up.
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Nazneen jee:
Romantic Poetry, mai.n kabhi kabhaar Ghalti se likh leta huu.n, lekin zeyadahtar sad poetry hi likhaa karta huu.n. aap ko hamaarii yeh koshish pasand aaii, jaan kar behad khushii huii..... yuu.n hi aage bhi paDhte rahe.n.. khaaksaar ki pazeraaii ke liye behad shukriyah!
-Mayank
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in short.............................superb
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Sunita jee:
namaste:
Ghazal ki pasandeegi ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah! yuu.n hi aage bhi hausila afzaaii karti rahe.n....
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mayank bhai superb
apka ye sher bahut acha hai
ham amaavas me.n bhii duniyaa ko dikhaa de.n ge chaa.nd
chhat pe ham, tum ko sajaa de.nge tum aao to sahii
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dinesh bhaii,
Ghazal ki aur khaas kar ke is sher ki pasandeegi ke liye aap ka bohat bohat shukriyah!
yuu.n hi apni raa'ey dete rahe.n
-mayank
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bhut khoob mayank ji.............saare ke saare shair bhut hi achy hain khaas tour par ye shair bhut khoob hai..
ham ne waadaa yeh kiyaa kuchh na chhupaaye.nge kabhii
tum ko aaiinaa banaa le.nge tum aao to sahii
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asalm saahab,
GHazal ki pasandeegi ke liye aap ka shukr-guzaar huu.n
koshish rahegii ki aage bhi bhetar likh kar aap sab ke saamne pesh kar sakuu.n....
daad aur hausila afzaaii aur khaaskar ke chune huye sher ki pasandeegi ke ke liye shukriyah
-Mayank
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MayaNk sahab adaab....yaraan-e-mehfil meiN aaj kaafi arse baad ana hua..our aate hi aapka kalaam aakhoN ke aage se Guzra..yaqeen maaniye tabiat khush ho gayii...aapkii iss dil paziir Ghazal ke tamaam ashar bahuur hi oomda kahe gaye haiN...merii jaanib se dhairoN daad qubool farmaayeiN dost....
Ek instant ahsaas....do ashar meiN aapke kalaam ko smarpit dost...
Dil-e-aarzoo ko dewaana bana deNge tum aao toh sahi
Zakhm-e-dil muskaan meiN uljha deNge tum aao toh sahi
Mana ke khayii hai chot tumne jawaaN hote -hote ai dost
Un likheiN khatoN ko dewaan bana deNge tum aao toh sahi
Harash
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Harash jee:
mai.n Ghazal ki pasandeegi ke liye aap ka behad aabhaari huu.n.. aap jaise shaayar ko Ghazal pasand aaii yeh ek khushii kii baat hai.. aap khud ek achche shayar hai.n to aap ki pasandeegi bhii khaas maaene rakhti hai.... aap ke daad ke liye tah-e-dil se shukr-guzaar huu.n..
aap ke instant ehsaas bhi achche lage bazm me.n aate rahe.n
-Mayank
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29th March 2009, 08:32 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by munfairy
Aadab mayank ji,
kaise hai aap?
Masha allah kitni khubsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne,
aaj kayi dino baad apne parivaar me hazir hui hun,
or yakin maniye aapki ghazal padhkar dili khushi mayassar hui hain,
ALLAH APKO AUR TARAKKI DE,AAMIN
KHUSH RAHIYE
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE
ALLAH HAFIZ
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sony jee:
aadaab!
kaisi hai.n aap, bohat dino ke baad aap ko yahaa.n par dekhaa, dekh kar khushii huii. ummeed hai sab khairiyat hogee..
ap ko Ghazla pasand aaii, jaan kar behad khushii huiii.. aap ki is hausila aur izzat afzaaii ke liye main aap ka tah-e-dil se shukr-guzaar huu.n... yuu.n hii mehfil me.n aate rahe.n.....apna khayaal rakhiyegaa....
khuda-haafiz
-Mayank
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