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Bachpan - 26th October 2005, 08:34 PM

Thodi der pahale hi mom se baat kar rahi thi.. aur wo has kar boli.."tujhe jaise jaise bada hona chahiye ulta chhoti hoti jaa rahi hai.. pahale itana hasana khilkhilaana to nahi tha, ab ladkiya shaant sharmili dikhati hai.. aur tum natkhat hoti jaa rahi ho.."

bas usi waqt isaka jawab kuchh aisa bana hai... mere yeha post karane se ek hi matlab hai..

Maa, Aunty, Bhaiya, Didi sabko bataoon mai abhi kitani bachi hoon.. kahi ye log bhi bhool se mujhe bada to nahi samajhate hai na...


abhi abhi to bachpan ne hasna sikha hai
abhi abhi to chuse ne udana sikha hai

saamne bag me lehlehaate paudhe
abhi abhi usake kali ne khilana sikha hai

Raounak laata hai huwa madmast pawan
abhi abhi to usane mehakana sikha hai

maa ki god me khel raha nanha bacha
abhi abhi to usane machalna sikha hai

badalo ki ot me khelata huwa chaand
abhi abhi chandani bikherana sikha hai

abhi aadat nahi sirf tapish sah paane ki
abhi abhi to maine chalana sikha hai

abhi khelane do mamta ke chhanw me
abhi abhi to khilkhilaana sikha hai

kaise badi ho jaaoon Mai itani jald
abhi abhi to duniya dekhana sikha hai


hehehe afterall mai abhi nanhi si bachi hoon..

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26th October 2005, 08:38 PM

hey garima... natkhat..

bahut bahut bahut achha likha hai... haan yeh bhi sahi hai abhi abhi to duniya dekhna sikha hai.. very well dear... the you expressed your feelings is amazing... keep writting & take care!!!

   
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26th October 2005, 08:51 PM

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hey garima... natkhat..

bahut bahut bahut achha likha hai... haan yeh bhi sahi hai abhi abhi to duniya dekhna sikha hai.. very well dear... the you expressed your feelings is amazing... keep writting & take care!!!

hahahaha.. yehi to baat hai.. Garima hi natkhat ho sakati hai.. kyunki natkhatpan ka bhi to apana ek mhatva hota hai...


thanks parul for liking it...

abhi abhi to bolana sikha hai isliye bahoot saare alfaaz nahi hai jawab dene ke liye..


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27th October 2005, 10:09 AM

yeh kya ho raha hai natkhat bachi,
waise sweetheart daad deni padegi tumhari soch ko. u know agar har insaan aapne aap ko ek bacche ke roop mein daale to shayad is duniya mein gamn ka koi naam na ho. kyuki ek bache ka maan hi itna saaf hota hai jismein koi chal kapat nahi hota. woh sirf pyar bantna aur paana janta hai. teri masoomiyaat par aaj garima hairan hoon mein. kabhi to kitni badi badi baatein kar jati hon n sumtimes just kiddish. i love u bache. god bless u. loved reading each word of it. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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27th October 2005, 11:36 AM

Haan Meri Sweet Pagal Sis....

abhi to tum nanhi si bacchi ho......humesha ki tarah alag khayal.....yahi to mujhe pasand hai.....

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27th October 2005, 12:10 PM

abhi abhi to bachpan ne hasna sikha hai
abhi abhi to chuse ne udana sikha hai

saamne bag me lehlehaate paudhe
abhi abhi usake kali ne khilana sikha hai




Raounak laata hai huwa madmast pawan
abhi abhi to usane mehakana sikha hai

maa ki god me khel raha nanha bacha
abhi abhi to usane machalna sikha hai

Sach...


badalo ki ot me khelata huwa chaand
abhi abhi chandani bikherana sikha hai

abhi aadat nahi sirf tapish sah paane ki
abhi abhi to maine chalana sikha hai

very nice...!


abhi khelane do mamta ke chhanw me
abhi abhi to khilkhilaana sikha hai

kaise badi ho jaaoon Mai itani jald
abhi abhi to duniya dekhana sikha hai



Gudiya,

Bahut hi pyaar likha hai tumne... aur bahut sach bhi....

Tum kehti ho naa koi insaan tumhe asaani se samjh nahi paata... magar thhoda bahut tumhara yeh bhaai tumhe samajhta hai....

Abhi kucch din pehle meri baat ho rahit thhi kisi se... to main bataa raha thha ke jab main Garima ko mila thha to woh bahut serious... apne aap ko over matured dikhaati thhi...apni umar ke hisaab se koi bachpana nahi thha......magar ab yahaan sab logon ka pyaar paakar woh bachpana bhi karti hai, zidd bhi aur shararat bhi......aur yehi kamaal hain humare is parivaar ka....itna pyaar dete hin sab ko ke bas......!

Main to yehi chaahta hoon ke tum aise hi khilkhilati raho humesha... Khoob masti karo... Mera pyaar to tumhaare saath hi hai... Love u...


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Re: Bachpan - 27th October 2005, 04:08 PM

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Thodi der pahale hi mom se baat kar rahi thi.. aur wo has kar boli.."tujhe jaise jaise bada hona chahiye ulta chhoti hoti jaa rahi hai.. pahale itana hasana khilkhilaana to nahi tha, ab ladkiya shaant sharmili dikhati hai.. aur tum natkhat hoti jaa rahi ho.."

bas usi waqt isaka jawab kuchh aisa bana hai... mere yeha post karane se ek hi matlab hai..

Maa, Aunty, Bhaiya, Didi sabko bataoon mai abhi kitani bachi hoon.. kahi ye log bhi bhool se mujhe bada to nahi samajhate hai na...


abhi abhi to bachpan ne hasna sikha hai
abhi abhi to chuse ne udana sikha hai

saamne bag me lehlehaate paudhe
abhi abhi usake kali ne khilana sikha hai

Raounak laata hai huwa madmast pawan
abhi abhi to usane mehakana sikha hai

maa ki god me khel raha nanha bacha
abhi abhi to usane machalna sikha hai

badalo ki ot me khelata huwa chaand
abhi abhi chandani bikherana sikha hai

abhi aadat nahi sirf tapish sah paane ki
abhi abhi to maine chalana sikha hai

abhi khelane do mamta ke chhanw me
abhi abhi to khilkhilaana sikha hai

kaise badi ho jaaoon Mai itani jald
abhi abhi to duniya dekhana sikha hai


hehehe afterall mai abhi nanhi si bachi hoon..

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wowwww..... bahut bahut khooob dear.... bahut sweetly bachpan dikhaya hai tumne isme... sach me iski khoobsoorti ke ehsaas padhte padhte hi ho jata hai bass yu hi alag alag andaaz me likhti raho


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27th October 2005, 04:21 PM

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tumhari tehreer mein chupi masumiyet ko mein mehsoos ker sakta hoon.
behan ho yah beti yeh duniyaa mein bohat bari naimat hai.
inka pyaar aur inki masumiyet bohat qeemti hoti hai.
tum ne is ka izhaar apne andaaz mein kiyaa, bohat pur asr aur bohat achcha laga.

meri dua hai ke khoob khush raho, phoolo phalo, aur zindagi ki khushiyaan tumhara naseeb hoan.

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28th October 2005, 09:24 PM

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yeh kya ho raha hai natkhat bachi,
waise sweetheart daad deni padegi tumhari soch ko. u know agar har insaan aapne aap ko ek bacche ke roop mein daale to shayad is duniya mein gamn ka koi naam na ho. kyuki ek bache ka maan hi itna saaf hota hai jismein koi chal kapat nahi hota. woh sirf pyar bantna aur paana janta hai. teri masoomiyaat par aaj garima hairan hoon mein. kabhi to kitni badi badi baatein kar jati hon n sumtimes just kiddish. i love u bache. god bless u. loved reading each word of it. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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hehehehe.. didi natkhat bachi se sawdhaan..

didi har waqt ye bachpana to nahi reh pata.. lekin jab aata jhoom ke aata hai..

masoomiyat ka to pata nahi.. didi aap jaanti ho na.. jis pal mai serious rehati hoon bas rehati hoon.. reason yehi hai ki har pal ko sanzidagi ke saath jeeti hoon..

mujhe lagta hai.. sanzida rehana hi jyaada achha hai.. jab bacho se pyaar karo to uname apana bachpana dikh jaata hai.. aaj bhi mai mom ke god me chhup jaana chahati hoon as like gauraj chhupata hai.. bas mera bachpana kabhi kabhi haawi ho hi jaata hai.. isliye ek dam bachi hoon..

aur aap jab chaao dekh lena.. Garima waisi hi milegi ekdam serious.. jab jaisa waqt waisa ban jaana fitrat me hai..

mera funda yaad hai na.. ya to waqt ko apane muthi me kar lo.. na ho sake to tab tak waqt ke saath chalo jab tak muthi me karane ki himmat na aaye.. dono haalat me sucsess aapke kadam chumegi..

so didi.. aapki natkhat bachi ko aapka yeha aana bahoot achha laga..

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29th October 2005, 01:13 AM

Beta ...

Nirmal, komal, seedha, anjaan, aur begana .. aur chanchal .. aur utna hi pardarshi ... bachpan wakai ek darohar hi hai .. jo har kisi ko naseeb hoti hai .. par koi ise enjoye kar pata hai aur koi nahii

tumne likha bohat sahi hai .. tumhari post padh kar ek apna bhi purana post yaad aa gaya link de raha huN waqt mile to padhna ...

Mera bachpan naam hai uska

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29th October 2005, 09:00 PM

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Haan Meri Sweet Pagal Sis....

abhi to tum nanhi si bacchi ho......humesha ki tarah alag khayal.....yahi to mujhe pasand hai.....

khush rahoo....
heheheh mai pagal hoon na.. isliye khayaal bhi alag hai... aur usal aapko pasand bhi hai mujhe pata tha aapko pasand aayega hi humesha ki tarah...



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Re: Bachpan - 29th October 2005, 09:10 PM

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Thodi der pahale hi mom se baat kar rahi thi.. aur wo has kar boli.."tujhe jaise jaise bada hona chahiye ulta chhoti hoti jaa rahi hai.. pahale itana hasana khilkhilaana to nahi tha, ab ladkiya shaant sharmili dikhati hai.. aur tum natkhat hoti jaa rahi ho.."

bas usi waqt isaka jawab kuchh aisa bana hai... mere yeha post karane se ek hi matlab hai..

Maa, Aunty, Bhaiya, Didi sabko bataoon mai abhi kitani bachi hoon.. kahi ye log bhi bhool se mujhe bada to nahi samajhate hai na...


abhi abhi to bachpan ne hasna sikha hai
abhi abhi to chuse ne udana sikha hai

saamne bag me lehlehaate paudhe
abhi abhi usake kali ne khilana sikha hai

Raounak laata hai huwa madmast pawan
abhi abhi to usane mehakana sikha hai

maa ki god me khel raha nanha bacha
abhi abhi to usane machalna sikha hai

badalo ki ot me khelata huwa chaand
abhi abhi chandani bikherana sikha hai

abhi aadat nahi sirf tapish sah paane ki
abhi abhi to maine chalana sikha hai

abhi khelane do mamta ke chhanw me
abhi abhi to khilkhilaana sikha hai

kaise badi ho jaaoon Mai itani jald
abhi abhi to duniya dekhana sikha hai


hehehe afterall mai abhi nanhi si bachi hoon..

Garima


bada khoobsurat likkha hai aapne garima.....the way you have have xpressed ur thoughts is great...keep writing.take care.bye


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30th October 2005, 07:09 PM

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abhi abhi to bachpan ne hasna sikha hai
abhi abhi to chuse ne udana sikha hai

saamne bag me lehlehaate paudhe
abhi abhi usake kali ne khilana sikha hai




Raounak laata hai huwa madmast pawan
abhi abhi to usane mehakana sikha hai

maa ki god me khel raha nanha bacha
abhi abhi to usane machalna sikha hai

Sach...


badalo ki ot me khelata huwa chaand
abhi abhi chandani bikherana sikha hai

abhi aadat nahi sirf tapish sah paane ki
abhi abhi to maine chalana sikha hai

very nice...!


abhi khelane do mamta ke chhanw me
abhi abhi to khilkhilaana sikha hai

kaise badi ho jaaoon Mai itani jald
abhi abhi to duniya dekhana sikha hai



Gudiya,

Bahut hi pyaar likha hai tumne... aur bahut sach bhi....

Tum kehti ho naa koi insaan tumhe asaani se samjh nahi paata... magar thhoda bahut tumhara yeh bhaai tumhe samajhta hai....

Abhi kucch din pehle meri baat ho rahit thhi kisi se... to main bataa raha thha ke jab main Garima ko mila thha to woh bahut serious... apne aap ko over matured dikhaati thhi...apni umar ke hisaab se koi bachpana nahi thha......magar ab yahaan sab logon ka pyaar paakar woh bachpana bhi karti hai, zidd bhi aur shararat bhi......aur yehi kamaal hain humare is parivaar ka....itna pyaar dete hin sab ko ke bas......!

Main to yehi chaahta hoon ke tum aise hi khilkhilati raho humesha... Khoob masti karo... Mera pyaar to tumhaare saath hi hai... Love u...

hehehe mai to ab kaafi masti karati hoon.. mujhe bade bhaiya mil gaye hai.. jinake saamne mai apani zidd rakh sakati hoon.. pahale mere saamne zidd rakahne waale hi thay.. to aamooman mera bachpana kho gaya tha.. mai aise jimmedaar ho gayi thi, unhe sambhaalate hue... ab jab bhi mai thak kar baithati hoon.. mujhe lagta hai... no tention mujhe sambhaalane ke liye, meri zidd maanane ke liye bhi koi hai.. isliye itana badlaaw to aana hi tha..Love u to bhaiya..


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Re: Re: Bachpan - 30th October 2005, 07:12 PM

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wowwww..... bahut bahut khooob dear.... bahut sweetly bachpan dikhaya hai tumne isme... sach me iski khoobsoorti ke ehsaas padhte padhte hi ho jata hai bass yu hi alag alag andaaz me likhti raho
bachpan sweetly hota hi hai.. haan ye sahi kaha mai soch rahi thi harek topic par likha jaaye.. jo bhi dil se umad kar aaye..


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tumhari tehreer mein chupi masumiyet ko mein mehsoos ker sakta hoon.
behan ho yah beti yeh duniyaa mein bohat bari naimat hai.
inka pyaar aur inki masumiyet bohat qeemti hoti hai.
tum ne is ka izhaar apne andaaz mein kiyaa, bohat pur asr aur bohat achcha laga.

meri dua hai ke khoob khush raho, phoolo phalo, aur zindagi ki khushiyaan tumhara naseeb hoan.

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masumiyat... nahi ye nahi hai mujhame wo ek chhote bache me hi ho sakati hai.. mai to waqt ke saath badalati rehati hoon..

beti to nahi jaanti.. hehehe mai kaise bataoon haan bhai bahan duniya me bahoot keemati hote hai..

aap meri posts par bahoot kam aate hai.. lekin jab bhi aate hai bahoot achha lagta hai.. ummed hai aapka saath uhi berkraar rahega..


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Maa aapki hi kami thi.. bachpana maa ke bina adhura hai jaise aatma ke bina shreer nirjeev hai..


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30th October 2005, 07:28 PM

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Nirmal, komal, seedha, anjaan, aur begana .. aur chanchal .. aur utna hi pardarshi ... bachpan wakai ek darohar hi hai .. jo har kisi ko naseeb hoti hai .. par koi ise enjoye kar pata hai aur koi nahii

tumne likha bohat sahi hai .. tumhari post padh kar ek apna bhi purana post yaad aa gaya link de raha huN waqt mile to padhna ...

Mera bachpan naam hai uska

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Re: Re: Bachpan - 30th October 2005, 07:29 PM

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Post 14th November 2005, 09:40 PM

Pagal Pathik Ji

Aapke shabd parhe tow beeta hua zamaana yaad aagaya....woh bachpan jo kisi gum ko pehchantaa tak nahin.
Shabdon ke sangam ne parichay diya hai ek acchi lekhak ka... jo shabdon ko bahubi pehchaanti hain.

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Aapke shabd parhe tow beeta hua zamaana yaad aagaya....woh bachpan jo kisi gum ko pehchantaa tak nahin.
Shabdon ke sangam ne parichay diya hai ek acchi lekhak ka... jo shabdon ko bahubi pehchaanti hain.

SHukriya

achhi lekhak... mm.. pata nahi..

waise beeta zamaana mere liye nahi hai ye.. kyunki aaj bhi har pal kahi na kahi bachpana dikhata hi hai.. bhale hi use dekh paane ki himmat har waqt nahi rehati...

aisa nahi hai wo bachpan kisi gum ko nahi pehchaanata..

kal mai gaurav( mera chhota bhai jo abt 4 year ka hai) ko ghumaane le jaa rahi thi, wo raatse me aate hue har chiz ko gaur se dekhata aur aadatan apane sawaalo ke bauchhar karta , wahi raaste me ek chhota bachha dhoop me aise hi soya tha usaki maa paas me hi kaam kar rahi thi, gaurav puchh pada didi ye aise kyu soya hai, ise dhoop nahi lag rahi? ye ghar me kyu nahi hai?
e.t.c .. mere paas usako samjhaane ke liye jawab nahi tha, juhi ne hi bataaya .. use ghar nahi hai, wo bahoot gareeb hai isliy dhoop me sone ko sadak par dhool khaane ko majboor hai wo.
uname aapas me baat ho rahi thi, aur mai chupchaap dono ko dekh rahi thi,
lautate waqt gaurav ki zidd kahi gaayab thi apane pasandidia khilaono ko dekhkar bhi wo ek baar nahi bola mujhe chahiye..
ghar aakar mujhase puchh pada..
didi us bache ko ghar kab milega...aur maun ho mujhe dekhane laga.. mai kya jawab doon..kaise bataoon ki shayad hi use makaan naseeb ho jisame wo dhoop se bachkar reh sake..
ye baat jaroor hai ki jald hi wo ye sab bhool jaayega, aur fir apane bachpane me shikayato me masti me jeene lagega..

lekin hum bhi to yehi karate hai, ek baar kisi ko dard se tadpate dekhate hai, dard hota hai, ya to bheekh me kuchh dekar aate hai ya mooh fer lete hai, fir bhi jald hi sabkuchh normal hota hai, humaari zindagi me koi antar to nahi aata, hum apane ghar me kisi ko sharan nahi de paate..
to us bache me aur hum.me is najariye se kya antar raha..

kaun kehata hai bache gum nahi samajhate , wo bhi samajhate hai hum bhi samajhate hai.,. bas hum khood ko jaanbujhkar bada bana rakhe hai..
aaj bhi hum bache hai, jo ek pal kisi baat ko dekhkar usake pichhe sochate hai fir bhool jaate hai... yehi chalata rehata hai..

jyaada bol gayi.. sorry.


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Post 17th November 2005, 04:57 PM

Garima Ji,
Aapne bachpan ka jo ullekh kiya hai woh tow theek hai, aapke bhai ne uss drishay ko dekhney ke baad Khilauna nahin maanga, kyonki unhe sach mein dukh hua hoga uss bachey ko dekhkar. Baccha sukh aur dukh dono hee samajhta hai.
Magar Garima Ji, thoda sa vistaar mein kehna chahunga ki, Bachpan kya nahin jaanta hai...Aaj Majdoor ka chota baccha aur ek viksit samaaj mein sabhi suvidhaaon se yukt Maa-baap ke bacche mein fark Maa aur Baap ka hai, unke baccho ka nahin. Dono hee bacchon ka mann ek sa hai, icchaayein ek si hain. Gareeb ke bacche ttheli se Ice-cream kharidna chahatey hain aur Ameeri jaana chahti hai McDonadls aur Barista mein. Baccha koi bhi ho, khud faisla nahin kar sakta. Unhe gareebi aur ameeri humne dee hai. Iska fark unhe humne samhjhaaya hai.....Jiska aabhaas unhe bada honey per ho jaata hai. Un par koi zimmedari ka bojh nahin, jise kal unhoney utthana hai. Woh kisi se irsha nahin kar saktey...Irshaa se unki mulaqaat tabhi hogi jab woh apne bhavisya ko sawaanrenge. Aaj unke paas koi samasya nahin....samasya hai tow matr school ki aur homework ki. Issi tarah gareeb bacche ki bhi koi samasya nahin...jo hai woh usne nahin uske Maa-Baap ne suljhaani hai. Usse bhook mitaane se matlab hai...iss se nahin ki aaj Sabji kaun si bani hai.
Garima ji, bura nahin maaniyega....aaj matr 1, 2 ya 100 udhaaran humey dikh hee jaate hain. Mujhe yeh baat jaankar accha laga ki aapke bhai ko dukh hua woh sab dekhkar, unhoney choti si umr mein woh mehsoo kiya hai jis-se aaj hum badey katraatey hain. Agar desh ka har baccha gareebi ko samaj jaye tow kamm se kamm Bharat ka bhavisya sudhar jaye. Main sach mein aapke chote bhai ki soch ki qadr karta hoon.
Aapki umr ka tow pata nahin, magar aaj se 8 saal pehley tak mujhe bhavisya ki itni chinta nahin tthi ki subah jaldi utthkar kuch sochun. Garam garam Breakfast-Lunch-Dinner tayyaar milta ttha, Roti ki koi fiqr nahin. Kyon ki woh daur mere college ka ttha...jahan ek saal aur guzarna ttha. Magar aaj ki tareekh mein Roti bahut hee mehngi hai. Mehngi tab bhi tthi magar tab kharidi nahin tthi. Aaj main maatr ek Roti se bhook mitaaney ki himmat rakhta hoon aur tab tow itni aise hee barbaad ho jati tthi. Bachpan ko Samay ka intezaar nahin hota magar aaj....Samay ke 24 hr bhi kamm hai jeene ke liye. Garima Ji,.....yeh sirf mere akele ki baat nahin, yeh aksar uss Insaan mein uss samay dikenhge jab woh bachpan se nikalkar jimmedaari ka jholaa uttha bazaar mein Roti ki qeemat poochega.

Tab dil se yahi baat nikalti hai ki.....Bachpan har Gum se begaana hota hai.

Garima Ji, agar yeh saar main maatr ek pankti mein kahun tow yahi hai ki.....Bachpan ke paas khud ke haath nahin, Maa-baap ka pyaar aur aashirvaad hota hai. Baccha bhhoka soyega ya mehlon mein rahega, yeh Maa-Baap ne taye karna hai.
Aapse baatein karke bahut accha laga, Main yahan (shayri.com) sach mein hee seekhney ki lalak lekar aata hoon, bahut accha lagta hai jab iss tarah baat ho. Apne chote bhai ko mera hello kehna aur apna khayal rakhiyega.

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17th November 2005, 05:21 PM

Vipin Sir..

hum dono alag base se bol rahe hai.. khair shuruaat to maine hi ki thi..

mai aapki baat samajh nahi paayi thi.. waise bhi mai us din mai gaurav ke baare me soch rahi thi aur itana kuchh bol gayi..

mai aapki baat se sehmat hoon...

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Post 17th November 2005, 05:42 PM

Garima Ji,

Meri aapse vintee hai ki is tarah matt sochiye ki suruvat aapne ki tthi. Yeh ek Charcha hai jo hum baant rahe hain. In sab se humaari hee jaankari badti hai. Hum yahan kyon likhtey hain...kyon shabdon ko baant-tey hain, kyonki yeh shabdon ka vishvaas hai.
Agar aapko bura laga ho tow main dono haath jordkar aapse kshama maangta hoon.
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17th November 2005, 05:52 PM

a rre nahi nahi.. aap maafi kyu maang rahe hai.. mujhe to debate bahoot hi achha lagta hai.. just love it..

aap jab kaho mai haazir rahungee apani baat lekar.. waise bhi aksar mai ulta bolati hoon.. ek vidroh sa rehata hai mere man me humesha.. jab bhadak jaata hai to bas ek dam mood me bolati hoon..

mujhe aapki baate bilkul buri nahi lagi .. lekin maafi maangana bura laga..


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Post 17th November 2005, 06:11 PM

Garima Ji,

Aapne kaha ki aap ulta bolti hain....yeh tow acchi baat hai, tabhi tow seedhey ki qeemat hume pata chalegi. Aur virodh tow har galati ka hona hee chahiye. isiliye Virodh jaroori hai.

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17th November 2005, 09:25 PM

priy garima , mitr vipin,

aap dono ko padh kar bahut kuch jaana...

muje mere bache yaad aa gaye... vipin tumne sahi kaha hai ... bache ek se hi hote hai .. oonki ichhaye ek si hoti hai...

jab aashram k bache ... kuch aisi ziid karte the tab mai yahi sochti thi... inhe yah kaha pata hai k yah ichhaye in k liye nahi bani thi is waqt...

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19th November 2005, 03:23 AM

Vakai, ek oumda kalaam...Garima Ji ! Bachpan yaad dila diya !

Eisse hi likhte rahiyega aur apna khayaal rakhiye

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Vakai, ek oumda kalaam...Garima Ji ! Bachpan yaad dila diya !

Eisse hi likhte rahiyega aur apna khayaal rakhiye

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Thanks sir.. lekin mera naam Garima achha hai na.. usame ji lagaane ki jaroorat nahi hai.. ji lagane se badepan ka aabhas hota hai.. mujhe abhi chhota hi rehane dijiye..


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