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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul……… -
13th May 2009, 03:49 PM
Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it
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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………
Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,
roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,
atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,
Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!
-Shan
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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13th May 2009, 04:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Fathomless
Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it
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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………
Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,
roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,
atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,
Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!
-Shan
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Wah Shan Bhai achcha likha hai,
Sach me tumne kitna samjha hai Naaz ko... I am also agry with you....
And it's really superb expression from your.. mujhe fakhar hai tum jaise Dost per...
And this line is really true about her I Know also....
Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!
and I also missing you Naaz,
Keep It Up...
Good work.....
Khush raho Duaon ke sath....
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13th May 2009, 04:40 PM
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Wah Shan Bhai achcha likha hai,
Sach me tumne kitna samjha hai Naaz ko... I am also agry with you....
And it's really superb expression from your.. mujhe fakhar hai tum jaise Dost per...
And this line is really true about her I Know also....
Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!
and I also missing you Naaz,
Keep It Up...
Good work.....
Khush raho Duaon ke sath....
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Thanks a lot brother...... for liking and appreciation........!
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13th May 2009, 04:48 PM
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Originally Posted by Fathomless
Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it
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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………
Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,
roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,
atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,
Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!
-Shan
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Shaan..
bahot khoob likha hai tumne..........
Aur haan Naaz aaj-kal bahot kam nazar aati hai SDC par..... Shayad isi liye tum bhi Invisible mod par rahene lage ho...........
Likhte raho
Khush raho
purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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13th May 2009, 05:12 PM
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Shaan..
bahot khoob likha hai tumne..........
Aur haan Naaz aaj-kal bahot kam nazar aati hai SDC par..... Shayad isi liye tum bhi Invisible mod par rahene lage ho...........
Likhte raho
Khush raho
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Nahin purvi ji, aise koi baat nai hai............. !
aur bhi dost hai yahan par..... aur aap bhi to ho
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beautiful moment.........
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13th May 2009, 09:52 PM
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Originally Posted by Fathomless
Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it
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Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………
Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,
roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,
atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,
Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!
-Shan
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how sweet..................awesome yaar SHAAN........kaash ! hume bhi koi itni shiddat se yaad karta.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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14th May 2009, 12:10 PM
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how sweet..................awesome yaar SHAAN........kaash ! hume bhi koi itni shiddat se yaad karta.....
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tum gayab hokar to dekho......... tumhara to kaan pakad ke wapis le aaunga......
you are my sweet darling...... i know tum mujhse naraz nai hogi........! )
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14th May 2009, 12:22 PM
Well Dude..... Shaan this is the problem with you, anybody Tom, dick n harry can take you for a ride.....hehehehe
Well i Alwayz take the driving seat, this way i'll not be taken for a ride
Now dont be Senti....just be Mental okai
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14th May 2009, 12:37 PM
Okie Dokie........................................
thanks a lot
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15th May 2009, 12:16 PM
My Pleasure.......................................... ..... !
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15th May 2009, 12:33 PM
........................................ ........ may be !
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15th May 2009, 02:11 PM
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Tu kyun hairaan pareshan ho raha hai......................... !
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15th May 2009, 03:18 PM
kya khoob likhe ho shan jee
ab to lagta hai main bhi mahino gayab rah jauN
taki koi to likhe mereliye bhi
achha laga aapki tahreer
yun hi likhte rahiye
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
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Diya
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16th May 2009, 04:53 PM
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kya khoob likhe ho shan jee
ab to lagta hai main bhi mahino gayab rah jauN
taki koi to likhe mereliye bhi
achha laga aapki tahreer
yun hi likhte rahiye
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nai pls. aisa mat karna........ woh badtameez Naaz to chali gai mujhe chorr ke ab aap mat chale jaana
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18th May 2009, 12:14 PM
Shaan aur bhi buri buri baatein karta hai tumhare barey mein... when you are not around.............
Bol doon shaan tu ne kya kya kaha....????
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18th May 2009, 12:25 PM
Itne burey burey.....motey motey...galliyaan diya usne....padd ke mere tou ankh baher nikal aaye......
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Ae oye phek mat shaan mjhe kabhi galiyaan nhi dega
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beta baqs apna sir diwar me maar le...... ya doob marr chullu bhar pani me....
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18th May 2009, 02:54 PM
beech mein mera naam kyu laya tumne....tumhare iraden kya hai??
hope this is ok Zainy ji
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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18th May 2009, 02:56 PM
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Hello Friends !
I m dedicating my this poem to Nazu............. coz she is not that active on SDC these days and i was missing her so much, when i wrote this..... i hope she will like it
====================================
Kyun nahi.n hai aaj woh hulchul………
Kal tak jo khela karti thi, har taraf machalti thi,
Kaha.n hai aaj woh pyaari surat,
roz savere khilti thi, auro.n ko khushboo deti thi,
kaha.n gai woh dil ki moorat,
atkheliyon ne jiski hardamm dhoom yahan machayi thi,
baatein bhi karti thi jo khoobsurat,
Apna dard chupaye dil mein, auro.n ko hasati thi,
Us hasti kali ki humko aaj bhi hai zaroorat………!
-Shan
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bahot khub dost......good going
keep up the good work
Regards
Praneeta
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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18th May 2009, 02:58 PM
Kyunki tum Sita nai ho duffer ho duffer
aur duffer ke liye kabhi bhi jagah nai hoti............... samjhi
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18th May 2009, 02:59 PM
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bahot khub dost......good going
keep up the good work
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thanks a lot my dearest............
Glad to see ur reply!
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18th May 2009, 03:00 PM
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oye!!!!!!!!!!!!beech mein mera naam kyu laya tune....tere iraden kya hai re??!
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praneeta aap se request hai ke aap itni rough language me baat na karein, ye ek adab ki mehfil hai,zara is baat ka khayaal rakhiye......badi meherbaani hogi.....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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18th May 2009, 03:05 PM
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praneeta aap se request hai ke aap itni rough language me baat na karein, ye ek adab ki mehfil hai,zara is baat ka khayaal rakhiye......badi meherbaani hogi.....
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sorry zainy ji....frustration mein kuch bhi ho jata hai
maine edit kar di hai hope thats ok now
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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beautiful moment.........
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18th May 2009, 06:14 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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19th May 2009, 06:10 AM
yeh dar nahi dost adab hai...
tum nahi samjho ge aur main fir se rough language use nahi karna chahti
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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19th May 2009, 08:35 AM
hey ,
ek humble suggestion doon guys.......................... without any offence, yeh specially moderators ke liye hain, MODS, please SDC pe live chat/live thread ki facility shuru kijiye naaa.....................
What say Guys...........????
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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19th May 2009, 11:27 AM
Is it a suggestion thread?
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19th May 2009, 12:00 PM
Look who is talking....???
Baa-Adab....Baa mulaizaaaah hoshyaaar.... Ek faltoo pari adab se tashreeeeeeeeef la rahi hai .........
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19th May 2009, 12:04 PM
Well....suggestion rejected... cuz this site is only for shayari... no faltoo chatting and no live shows... yahan log sirf dukhi aatma hotey hai and kabhi kabhi khush hotey hai tou koi khushi wali ghazal pesh karte hai... and most of them are sooooooooo humble..... Like what they call themselves... ( Nacheeez, tahey dil se... tahey jigar se shukar guzaar...mamnoo mashkooor hoon..... apki hasla afzai -whatever....)
I mean humbly they fell to your feet....hahahahahaha
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19th May 2009, 12:21 PM
Alas one is happy ......................... now i have to offlist her
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19th May 2009, 01:25 PM
Logon ki bahut sunti ho.................................
Probably the grass in ur skull in not operative...
Agar kuch cells working condition mein hoti tou unko use karti
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