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8th May 2005, 12:15 AM
Hey guys,
On this mother's day this is what I have to say for my mom and I also expect everyone from u guys to write what u feel for your mom. Take care and do reply...
My Mother
My mother Is so special
One of a kind
Someone like her
Would be hard to find...
She’s with me
In all kinds of seasons
To love my mom
I don’t need no reasons…
The First person I know
The First friend of mine
The First lessons she taught me
The First love of my life…
How can someone be
So caring and selfless
With a voice soo soothing
And emotions flowing flawless...
I wonder how she does it all
To expect from anyone else its odd
Maybe cuz she’s a mother
The noblest creation of God...
When I m with my mom
I don’t need any luxuries, no wealth
All I pray to God is
Keep my mom in good health…
Love u Mom... Always.
Jeet...
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8th May 2005, 12:41 AM
wow! jeet ji, this is very nice...you have truly captured the emotions and feelings for a mother
keep it up
take care
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marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...
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8th May 2005, 04:47 AM
Thnx Mukhra ji,
Glad u liked it. Yeah I luv my mom and its for the first time I wrote something for her. Anyways thnx for reading.
take care...
jeet...
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8th May 2005, 12:16 PM
jeet,
tumhari kavita k aage sabhi ka sir jukna hi hai kyunki yah ek maa k liye bani hai.....
meena
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8th May 2005, 08:25 PM
ek maa to bhagwaan ka dusra roop hoti hai. kehte hai ki ''god thought that he cannot be everywhere, so he made mother''. nobody can define a mother just by simple words...
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9th May 2005, 11:23 PM
Hi Jeet
its a good way or expressing your love for ur Mom. did u show thsi peom to her? Im sure she would have been happy with it. I had written a peom to my Mom a few years back for Mother's Day. I guess that was about the time I had just started writing poems. one of my friends told me that for him, " everyday is Mother's day" and i really agree with him. nothing compares to the love a Mother has for her children.
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11th May 2005, 04:56 AM
Hi everybody,
Again U guys showered your love on me with all those replies. Thanks Meena ji. Thanks Vedika. Thanks Munnia.
I just felt like writing something for my mom and the worst thing is that I didn't show it to her. But its okay, some other time.
Take care...
Jeet...
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11th May 2005, 06:45 AM
hey Jeet
it never too late to show to your mom . Im sure se would still love it
try karke dekh lo
See ya
munnia
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11th May 2005, 08:06 AM
ek insaan ko apne maa ke liye apna prem dikhane ki zarrorat nahi padti.
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12th May 2005, 04:42 AM
Hi there,
U r right, Munnia. I must show it to her and I will do that a.s.a.p. My mom loves me as I love her and she would never say its bad. I will do that.
Vedika. I don't agree with u. U said that we don't need to show our love for mom or someone else. I think there's no harm in telling someone how much u love them. After all feelings r something u should express. And I m not ashamed of anything. so why not??? think about it and then tell me. ok
see u later...
Jeet...
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12th May 2005, 10:35 PM
Hi jeet
I agree with you that we must show our feelings. Its never enough for us to assume that others know we love them unless we are able to show them from time to time. That could make all the difference.
keep writing more poems
take care
Munnia
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13th May 2005, 04:51 AM
Hi Munnia,
U were right. My mom liked the poem and also she was really happy to see that I wrote something for her. And I think expressing your feelings only brings good returns, there's no harm at all. Unless u r showing one sided love for someone. right.
see ya...
Jeet...
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15th May 2005, 12:49 PM
well jeetji, i meant that we need not show our love. if we truly love someone, our heart will always have place for that person and its not necessary to go on telling them that we love them.
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