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Hath laa laa vekhan kaalje nu......!!!!!!! - 7th April 2015, 01:44 PM
Tere supne nahi soun dende
Akh laggje tan mai darr janda han,
Jadon laggda pata kinne paa laye veham
Bin aayi mout mar jaanda han....
Jad kholan akhiyan kujh v nahi
Unj kanni macheya a shor channa,
Hath laa laa vekhan kaalje nu
kinna ku bacheya a jor channa.....!!

Mai hasdeyan hasdeyan thamm jaana
Aunda chete jad tu vichdi a,
Kinj tidd bhare oho lokan da
Jedi gaagar hi payi tidki aa....
Kinj tenu sahi mai saabit karan
Bcheya nahi jor hun hor channa,
Hath laa laa vekhan kaalje nu
Kinna ku bacheya a jor channa......!!

Nitt hath jodan te karan arjaan
Naa edan naa tadpaa menu,
Nahi lekhan wich te naa hi sahi
Naa ishqe di agg wich tapaa menu.....
Tnu pata kidde jazbaati han
Asi kinne han kmjor channa,
Hth laa laa vekhan kaalje nu
Kinna ku bacheya a jor channa.......!!!!
   
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7th April 2015, 08:59 PM
bada vadiya kalam likhya tusi , benam sahib ..Rooh khush ho.gayee.

Aunde raho taan mehfil sajande raho..

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8th April 2015, 01:13 PM
jaroor janaab asal wich wich meri id te password kho geya c tahin kaafi din koi kalaam paa nahi sakeyaa....

diljalon ki lagegi mehfil dil tootne ke bahaane honge
aashiqon ki zubani beyan mohhobbat k taraane honge,
naa rahe agar pyar karne wale is jahaan me
toh aage aane waale patharon k zamane honge.......!!!!
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9th April 2015, 08:23 AM
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Tere supne nahi soun dende
Akh laggje tan mai darr janda han,
Jadon laggda pata kinne paa laye veham
Bin aayi mout mar jaanda han....
Jad kholan akhiyan kujh v nahi
Unj kanni macheya a shor channa,
Hath laa laa vekhan kaalje nu
kinna ku bacheya a jor channa.....!!

Mai hasdeyan hasdeyan thamm jaana
Aunda chete jad tu vichdi a,
Kinj tidd bhare oho lokan da
Jedi gaagar hi payi tidki aa....
Kinj tenu sahi mai saabit karan
Bcheya nahi jor hun hor channa,
Hath laa laa vekhan kaalje nu
Kinna ku bacheya a jor channa......!!

Nitt hath jodan te karan arjaan
Naa edan naa tadpaa menu,
Nahi lekhan wich te naa hi sahi
Naa ishqe di agg wich tapaa menu.....
Tnu pata kidde jazbaati han
Asi kinne han kmjor channa,
Hth laa laa vekhan kaalje nu
Kinna ku bacheya a jor channa.......!!!!
Tuhada na te nahi pata par tusi bahut changa likhya hai veere, kaleja cher ta tusi.

Ehdaa hi likhde raho


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10th April 2015, 04:27 PM
Tuhada na te nahi pata par tusi bahut changa likhya hai veere, kaleja cher ta tusi.

Ehdaa hi likhde raho

aapka apnaa

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dhanwaad tuhada baut baut MAST saab!!!!

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13th April 2015, 05:50 PM
Nitt hath jodan te karan arjaan
Naa edan naa tadpaa menu,
Nahi lekhan wich te naa hi sahi
Naa ishqe di agg wich tapaa menu.....

Benaam jee..

bada hi vadihya ty behtareen kalaam meHfil dii nazar kitta ay tussi ....

daad qabool karo!

likhde raho ... aaundy raho....

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13th April 2015, 05:50 PM
originally posted by Benaam

Nitt hath jodan te karan arjaan
Naa edan naa tadpaa menu,
Nahi lekhan wich te naa hi sahi
Naa ishqe di agg wich tapaa menu.....
Tnu pata kidde jazbaati han
Asi kinne han kmjor channa,
Hth laa laa vekhan kaalje nu
Kinna ku bacheya a jor chan

Benaam ji chaNga naam kamaoge aan wale waqt vich.badi tadaf bhari kavita likhi hai tusi.badi achi lagi.likhde raho.God bless you.

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16th April 2015, 05:07 PM
bahut vadiya likhiya hai tusi...changa lagiya tuhanu padna

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17th April 2015, 01:24 PM
bahaut bahaut dhanwaad hassan g raajinderseep g te sunita thaku r meherbani janab baut baut!!!

kujh hoyian bewafaiyan ne aa kede raahi paata
kujh kafir jehe akharan ne mehfilan ch khadna sikhata....!!!

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bahut vadiya likhiya hai tusi..

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