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Terii Yaado.n Se Ulajh Kar Dil Kaii Baar Girta Hai... -
20th May 2017, 12:52 PM
Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, kaii baar girta hai.... Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai... Ye dil ke rasm-o-riwaaz, bade pechiide hai.n janaab.... Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai... Huii muddat ke shor-o-gul se raabta na raha apna... Ki dil bhi ab seene mei.n khaamosh dhadakta hai... Is qadar abtar hai aashiyaan ulfat ke khwaabo.n ka... Sametu.n jab bhi pehlu mei.n, mera aa.nchal sisakta hai.... Laazim tha ke maange duaaein hijr-e-yaar ki har roz... Waakif the, visaal-e-yaar ki dua koii aur padhta hai... Masarrat baksh ke Ghafil ko, kiya ghaflat kaatib ne... Chalo aziiyat kubool kii humne, ki parwaah kaun karta hai?? Terii yaado.n se ulajh kar dil, har baar girta hai.... Girta hai, Sambhalta hai, Sambhal kar phir se chalta hai... par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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21st May 2017, 12:30 PM
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Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai... kyaa khoob andaaze bayaan hai, waaahhhhhhhhhhhh yoon to poori ghazal kamaal hai magar ye quoted sher lajawaab laga... aati rahiye, likhti rahiye Shaad............ |
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18th June 2017, 07:58 AM
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Jannat ka raasta aksar dozakh se guzarta hai... Bahut hi Umdaa sher aur behad nayaab tareeke se pesh kiye hue khayaal hai is pur asar ghazal mein nacheez ki daad qubool farmiye aur likhte rahiyegaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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24th June 2017, 11:41 PM
Waahh!!!!Nisha ji.....bahot pasand aayi aapki ghazal ashaar dil chhoo Gaye....
Aati rahiyega अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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