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Love Alag nahi hai teri sharaab meri sharaab sey... - 22nd September 2014, 04:44 PM

Alag nahi hai teri sharaab meri sharaab sey...
Farak nahi hai yeh azaab uss azaab sey...

Aankhon sey pilakar mujhe barbaad kardiya
Ab jaam ki ijaazat nahi leta main jenaab sey....

Suroor-e-ishq kho gaya kahan hai aaj kal,
Itna hee jaanta hoon mukhaalif hai shabaab sey....

Ab kya karoon' sawaal iss maiqadey sey main
Har saans chal rahi hai iskey jawaab sey....

Pehchaan khudko ab tu peekar meri sharaab
Nafrat si hogi tujhko apne naqaab sey....

Alag nahi hai teri sharaab meri sharaab sey...
Farak nahi hai yeh azaab uss azaab sey...

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Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...."
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22nd September 2014, 05:00 PM

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Alag nahi hai teri sharaab meri sharaab sey...
Farak nahi hai yeh azaab uss azaab sey...

Aankhon sey pilakar mujhe barbaad kardiya
Ab jaam ki ijaazat nahi leta main jenaab sey....

Suroor-e-ishq kho gaya kahan hai aaj kal,
Itna hee jaanta hoon mukhaalif hai shabaab sey....

Ab kya karoon' sawaal iss maiqadey sey main
Har saans chal rahi hai iskey jawaab sey....

Pehchaan khudko ab tu peekar meri sharaab
Nafrat si hogi tujhko apne naqaab sey....

Alag nahi hai teri sharaab meri sharaab sey...
Farak nahi hai yeh azaab uss azaab sey...

(SR)©


bahut khoob likha hai aapne...sabhi sher bahut acche hai...yeh wala aik sher muje behaaaddddd pasand aaya.

Aankhon sey pilakar mujhe barbaad kardiya
Ab jaam ki ijaazat nahi leta main jenaab sey....


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23rd September 2014, 02:30 AM

Thanks Sunita ji, Inayat, aapko meri koshish acchi lagi. So nice of you.


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