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22nd August 2014, 09:12 AM
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wahhh! ..... bohat khoob tabaaH saheb... maza aa gaya phad ke!
tum khata karo, hum wafa karieN
aise tujhe hum chaha karieN
kahiN chhoot na jaye saath tera
us waqt se hum darra karieN
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bahut khoob Hassan saheb.. bahut achi lagi hume ye peshkash.. or sukriya apki meherbaani ka..
Mohabbat ho chuki puri.
Chalo ab zakhm gintey hain..
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22nd August 2014, 11:19 AM
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bahut khoob Hassan saheb.. bahut achi lagi hume ye peshkash.. or sukriya apki meherbaani ka..
Mohabbat ho chuki puri.
Chalo ab zakhm gintey hain..
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wah wah.. superb tabaaH saheb...
husN us ka na khul saka 'Mohsin'!
loG thak gaye shayri kartay....
-Mohsin Naqvi
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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23rd August 2014, 07:48 PM
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wah wah.. superb tabaaH saheb...
husN us ka na khul saka 'Mohsin'!
loG thak gaye shayri kartay....
-Mohsin Naqvi
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wah Hassan saheb..
Teri kahani saari duniya,
Mera hulaasa* bass ek tu..
(hulaasa;summary) nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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23rd August 2014, 10:15 PM
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wah Hassan saheb..
Teri kahani saari duniya,
Mera hulaasa* bass ek tu..
(hulaasa;summary) nm
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wahh tabaaH saheb... slight si typing mistake ho gayi,
yeH word hulaasa nahi khulaasa hai...
socha tha un se bichre to mar jayeN ga!
ajeeb sa weham tha, bukhaar tak na hua...
-nm
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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25th August 2014, 06:24 AM
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wahh tabaaH saheb... slight si typing mistake ho gayi,
yeH word hulaasa nahi khulaasa hai...
socha tha un se bichre to mar jayeN ga!
ajeeb sa weham tha, bukhaar tak na hua...
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haa Hassan Ji is galti ke liye is nachij ko Muaf kijiyega..
Aa gaya hai farq uski nigaah mai yaqeenan
kyuki
Ab wo shaks mujhe “Andaaz” se nahi “Andaaze” se pehchanta hai.... nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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25th August 2014, 10:15 AM
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haa Hassan Ji is galti ke liye is nachij ko Muaf kijiyega..
Aa gaya hai farq uski nigaah mai yaqeenan
kyuki
Ab wo shaks mujhe “Andaaz” se nahi “Andaaze” se pehchanta hai.... nm
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wahh .. bohat khoob tabaaH saheb..
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th August 2014, 10:21 AM
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Awesome.....
Aye dil ye tujhse kaisii galtii hogai
Ek saraab se aashiqui hogaii
Kaisii tishnagii hai bujhtii hi nahiN
JaaN letii nahiN, Jeeney detii nahiN
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wahhh wahh.. adaigi bhi khoob hai.. aur jazbaat bhi khul ke saamnay aaye...
hai husn be-panah phelaa hai ja-baja
dekhe jo tujhe so jaaN se ho jaye fida
tu hai arsh ki pari yaa hai farsh pe diya!
kyuN dekh kar tujh ko jaata mera imaa.N
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25th August 2014, 11:46 AM
Hai jaha log registaan ki garmi se paresha'n..
Hum har ret k zarre me, tere didar se khush hai..
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25th August 2014, 11:55 AM
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Hai jaha log registaan ki garmi se paresha'n..
Hum har ret k zarre me, tere didar se khush hai..
~Lekhraj~
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tere ghar ke aainey khusnaseeb hai,
jo jee bhar ke tujhe dekhte to hai..!!
-nm
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th August 2014, 01:02 PM
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tere ghar ke aainey khusnaseeb hai,
jo jee bhar ke tujhe dekhte to hai..!!
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waahhhh baaji.. bohat khoob..!
soona chahooN per so naa paooN!
hans'na chahooN per rotaa jaooN..
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25th August 2014, 10:14 PM
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Wah! Bahot khoob....
YaadoN ki sulagtii raatoN meiN
Dil thaam ke roya kartey haiN
Hum hasrat se tasveer terii
AshqoN se bhigoya KarteiN haiN
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shaam hote hi yeh dil udhas hota hai,
toote khawboN ke siwa kuch bhi na paas hota hai,
aise meiN aapki yaad bahut aati hai,
jab tanhai meiN dil ka dard jawaaN hota hai
-nm
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th August 2014, 10:47 PM
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Wah! Bahot khoob....
YaadoN ki sulagtii raatoN meiN
Dil thaam ke roya kartey haiN
Hum hasrat se tasveer terii
AshqoN se bhigoya KarteiN haiN
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wahhh! Naaz.. bohat khoob!
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shaam hote hi yeh dil udhas hota hai,
toote khawboN ke siwa kuch bhi na paas hota hai,
aise meiN aapki yaad bahut aati hai,
jab tanhai meiN dil ka dard jawaaN hota hai
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wahh baaji.. bohat khoob..
aap se mil ke hum kuch badal se gaye!
shair padh'ne lagay, gun'gunanay lagay
pehle mashoor thi apni sanjeedgi
ab to jab dekhiye muskuraanay lagay
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25th August 2014, 11:22 PM
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wahhh! Naaz.. bohat khoob!
wahh baaji.. bohat khoob..
aap se mil ke hum kuch badal se gaye!
shair padh'ne lagay, gun'gunanay lagay
pehle mashoor thi apni sanjeedgi
ab to jab dekhiye muskuraanay lagay
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aapse milkar ham bhi kuch badal se gye,
sajne lge sawarne lge, bin baat ke muskurane lge,
raat raat bhar jaag kar karte hai ham shayri,
dil ki baate ab ham gazlon meiN aapko suna.ne lge
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th August 2014, 11:24 PM
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aapse milkar ham bhi kuch badal se gye,
sajne lge sawarne lge, bin baat ke muskurane lge,
raat raat bhar jaag kar karte hai ham shayri,
dil ki baate ab ham gazlon meiN aapko suna.ne lge
-sunita virender
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaH! baaji.. aap ne to mere dil ki baat keH di jese!
aankhoN mein rat-jagoN ke azaab liye phirta hooN!
maiN kia hooN aur kia khwaab liye phirta hooN!
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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25th August 2014, 11:30 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaH! baaji.. aap ne to mere dil ki baat keH di jese!
aankhoN mein rat-jagoN ke azaab liye phirta hooN!
maiN kia hooN aur kia khwaab liye phirta hooN!
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Khvaab kii tarah bikhar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai
aisii tanhaa_ii ki mar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai
ghar kii vahashat se larazataa huu.N magar jaane kyo.n
shaam hotii hai to ghar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai
-nm
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th August 2014, 01:00 AM
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Khvaab kii tarah bikhar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai
aisii tanhaa_ii ki mar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai
ghar kii vahashat se larazataa huu.N magar jaane kyo.n
shaam hotii hai to ghar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah baaji... bohat khoob..
chaand nikla to hum ne wehshat meiN!
jis ko dekha ussi ko choom liya....
-Nasir Kazmi
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27th August 2014, 11:13 AM
शमा भी देखिये, मेरी कज़ा से "जलती" है,
मोहब्बत जब से मिरे कदम मिला के चलती है !!
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Shamma bhi dekhiye meri kaza se jalti hai,
Mohabbat jab se mire kadam mila ke chalti hai!!
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27th August 2014, 03:49 PM
Hamara tazkraa choro hum aese log hain jinhe,
Nafrat kuch nahi kehti mohabbat maar deti hai.. nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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27th August 2014, 10:09 PM
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Hamara tazkraa choro hum aese log hain jinhe,
Nafrat kuch nahi kehti mohabbat maar deti hai.. nm
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"Sabak waffa ka jisey yaad hoga,
mohabatt meiN wahi barbaad hoga"
--NM
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th August 2014, 03:35 AM
ajj tumhe hai ek khnani sunani,
jisme mein hai raja par na jiski koi rani,.....
khud toh tha woh dil ka acha .
nasamaj jaise koi pgla sa bacha.....
pgla har roz ek kwab ankhon mein sjata tha,
kaisi hogi woh pari apne app ko hi btata tha, .......
khuda ne bhi use ek din ek pari se milaya,
taroan jaisi thi jiski ankein, husan chand ka sarmaya,.......
woh chahta toh tha usse dil ki baat btana,
wohi hai uski duniya yeh baat samjana,.......
par daarta tha na toot jaye dosti k woh rishta purana
AUR
janta tha woh ek kadwi sachayi ,
k akhir mein uske hise toh ani bas tanhayi,........
shyad isilye nhi tha kuch bta pa rha,
bas ek umiddd k share tha jiye ja rha,........
k ek din woh khud bhimujhe chahegi,
usdin woh mujhe samaj payegi.......
itni c hai yaaroon meri yeh khani,
jisme mein hai raja na jiski koi rani...........
#Neer#
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28th August 2014, 11:13 AM
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Wah! Bahot khoob....
YaadoN ki sulagtii raatoN meiN
Dil thaam ke roya kartey haiN
Hum hasrat se tasveer terii
AshqoN se bhigoya KarteiN haiN
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Bahut khub kaha Naazneen...
Yu hasrat se tasveer koi, Ashqo'n se bhigote mat jao...
Yaadon ki sulagtii raaton mein, Dil thaam ke rote mat jao...
Ab ishq zamane me ae dost, Kaabil itna zyada bhi nahi...
Kisi aur ko pane ki zid me, Khud ko tum khote mat jao...
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28th August 2014, 01:29 PM
Jana kha tha kha aa gye,
Duniya mein bankar mehman aa gye
Abhi to farz kholi hi thi pyar ki kitab
Aur na jane kitne yha imtehan aa gye....
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28th August 2014, 04:27 PM
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"Sabak waffa ka jisey yaad hoga,
mohabatt meiN wahi barbaad hoga"
--NM
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wah bahut khub..
Log aese wafaa nahin karte,
Jese bache gunaah nahin karte nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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28th August 2014, 08:20 PM
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IshQ meiN tere tabaaH hue
Rooth kar jab tum judaa hue
GhairoN meiN tujhe dhundatii rahii
Tere firaQ meiN behayaaH hue
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last two lines bahut pasand aayi..
Main bus ek bar la-jawab hua
Kisi apne ne kaha jab kaun ho tum ?? nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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IshQ meiN tere tabaaH hue
Rooth kar jab tum judaa hue
GhairoN meiN tujhe dhundatii rahii
Tere firaQ meiN behayaaH hue
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wahhh...bahut khoob Naaz
kiya jab se Ishq, har shai haseeN ho gye,
be-rang thi apni dunia, ab rangeeN ho gye
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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29th August 2014, 11:17 AM
VERY NICE SUNITA JI ........
umra se lambii muhabbat kii qafas me'n hoo'n mai'n
isse ba'd ke koii ho to vo sazaa de mujhko
log kho jaate hai kaa'nto'n bharii in raaho'n me'n
pyaar kii raah pe niklaa hoo'n...duaa de mujhko
POET- RAVI ROSHO
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VERY NICE SUNITA JI ........
umra se lambii muhabbat kii qafas me'n hoo'n mai'n
isse ba'd ke koii ho to vo sazaa de mujhko
log kho jaate hai kaa'nto'n bharii in raaho'n me'n
pyaar kii raah pe niklaa hoo'n...duaa de mujhko
POET- RAVI ROSHO
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apni rusvaai aur tere naam ka charcha dekhuN,
ek jara sher kahuN aur maiN kya kya dekhuN,
tu mera kuch nahi lagta hai magar jaan-e-hayaat,
jaane kyu tere liye apne dil ko dhadkta dekhuN
-nm
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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30th August 2014, 04:09 AM
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Awesome sharing sunitaji......
Shab-o-roz tera lams terii qurbat kii aarzoo
DhadkaNo ko roktii haiN saaNso ko todtii haiN
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waaaaaaaaaaaaah.. Naaz..bohat khoob...
haal kia bayaaN ho dil-e-be-haal ka!
ishQ lahaQ hua aise jese koi marz la-ilaaj!
marz : illness, disease
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31st August 2014, 09:08 AM
इतनी मजबूती से वीरानो के दर बंद किये,
दिल में उतरी ना कोई ज़ात तेरी ज़ात के बाद.. nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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31st August 2014, 09:08 PM
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Waaaahhhhhhhh! bahot khoob sharing tabaahji....
Kitnii khoobsurat ye zindagii hogai
Jabsey mujhe tujhse ashiquii hogai
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waaaaahhh.. waaah... Naaz bohat khoob...
tumhare sher se mujhe apni ghazal ka aik sher yaad aaya:-
ujRay chaman meiN bhi ranaayi aayi!
phooloN ko bhi teri aadat ho gayi..
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1st September 2014, 02:59 PM
Usne Kaha K Khawab Mein Aane Ka Waqt Do…!!
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1st September 2014, 03:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
waahhhh baaji.. bohat khoob..!
soona chahooN per so naa paooN!
hans'na chahooN per rotaa jaooN..
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Tere rone se unke dil pe naa asar hoga...
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Haseeno'n k dil patthar k hua karte hai...
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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1st September 2014, 09:18 PM
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Tere rone se unke dil pe naa asar hoga...
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Haseeno'n k dil patthar k hua karte hai...
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waaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah! Lekhraj jee,
bohat aala jawaab diya hai...... lajawaab..
chaleN aap ki baat ka jawaab Faraz saheb ke sher se dete haiN:-
barbaad karne ke aur bhi raastay thay 'Faraz'
na-jaanay unheN mohabbat ka hi khayaal kyuN aaya!
-Ahmed Faraz
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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2nd September 2014, 01:40 PM
Bade nadaan nikle tum, k jo us paar ja utre..
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Dariya-e-ishq hai bana, bas doob jane ko...
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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2nd September 2014, 05:40 PM
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Originally Posted by N@zneen
NaadaaniyoN ne mujhe diya kuch nahiN
BiyaabaaN ye zindagii muhabbat ki talash meiN
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Quote:
Originally Posted by lekhraj
Bade nadaan nikle tum, k jo us paar ja utre..
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Dariya-e-ishq hai bana, bas doob jane ko...
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waaaaaaaaaaah! waaaaaaaaaaaaah! bohat khooob!
masoom nazar, bhhoola mukhDa, honthoN pe tabassum, shokh adaa
tasveer ka jab yeH aalam hai, haqeeqat meiN woH husn-e-mujassim kia ho ga...!!
-nm
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
Last edited by Hassan; 2nd September 2014 at 05:46 PM..
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3rd September 2014, 04:21 AM
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Waaaahhhhh! bahot khoob parStaar
QaseedaH ek parStaar mere husn par padh'ta hai
Uske jazboN kii shiddat hai yuN to maiN kuch nahiN
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waaaaaaaaaahhh! waaaaah! bohat bohat khooob, Naazuk!
neend bhi mehbooba ban gayi hai
bewafaa raat bhar nahi aati…
-nm
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
Last edited by Hassan; 3rd September 2014 at 04:33 AM..
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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3rd September 2014, 09:53 PM
Meri mohabbat sey toe tum paak hogayi
aur teri mohabbat mein main bas khaak hogaya...
(SR)c&p
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3rd September 2014, 11:43 PM
Shukriya Nazneen Ji...
Tumhe yakin' nahin Humein aitbaar nahi
Phir toe tayy hai Yeh kuch aur hai pyar nahi...
(SR)c&p
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4th September 2014, 07:13 AM
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Shukriya Nazneen Ji...
Tumhe yakin' nahin Humein aitbaar nahi
Phir toe tayy hai Yeh kuch aur hai pyar nahi...
(SR)c&p
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waaaah Raina jee bohat khoob...
khushbu kyuN na aaye gi meri baatoN mere yaar!
aaj kal mera uthna bethna pholooN ke sung jo hai....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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4th September 2014, 09:17 AM
Good morning ans Thank you Hassan Bhai...Kya khoob kehtein aap aap..Masha Allah..
Aaj phir pehley saa hojaaney ko dil karta hai)
Phir teri baahon mein sojaaney ko dil karta hai...
(SR)c&p
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