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Jagpal (yaaden_kamal)
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9th June 2008, 03:58 PM
JOD GHTAO WALI, IS ZINDAGI 'CH, MAIN SOCHEA, KE MAIN KADE VI TERI ZINDAGI 'CH JAMA NAHIN HO SAKNA. EHI SOCH, MANFI KAR LEA, SADA LAYI, KHUD NU, TERI ZINDAGI 'CHO. |
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9th June 2008, 08:35 PM
[quote=yaaden_kamal;292083]
JOD GHTAO WALI, IS ZINDAGI 'CH, MAIN SOCHEA, KE MAIN KADE VI TERI ZINDAGI 'CH JAMA NAHIN HO SAKNA. EHI SOCH, MANFI KAR LEA, SADA LAYI, KHUD NU, TERI ZINDAGI 'CHO. tuhadi eh rachna vi Jagpal ji vaar vaar read karan nu dil karda hai..sachmuch tusi bahut ohna likhde ho. |
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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10th June 2008, 03:03 AM
Bahut hi sohni poem hai,
sab to vakhari jihi, har ek line di nu chhu gayi,  GOD IS GREAT
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10th June 2008, 09:22 AM
Perfect hai ji. Sirf taareef karan nu hi man kardaa hai. Rab karey ki kadey tuhanu saahmney baith ke suniyey. Lajwaab. Shabd hi nahi tareef karan laee
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Jagpal (yaaden_kamal)
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10th June 2008, 04:41 PM
Babbu ji, Tilak JI & Adhuri Heer ji,
Sat Shree Akal, Kal Mainu achanak hi is web site nu visit karan da mauka milea. Inne thore samey vich inne saare nave sahitik dostan takk pahunch javanga isdi main kalpana vi nahin si keeti. Merian kavitan parhan waale mere saare sathian nu jagpal da salaam. Tuhade khatt usnu hor vi wadhia likhan layi prerna den-ge. Tuhada saarean da ik baar phir bahut bahut dhanvaad. tuhada apna Jagpal |
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14th June 2008, 10:11 PM
Bahut hi sohna likhde ho tusi, keep it up
-------------------------------------------- Jihdi mitro bhaal ch dil oh na kuri labhdi,oh na kuri labhdi
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24th June 2008, 09:23 AM
awesome,,,,,,,,,bahut hi dilkash andaaz te sadke thodi soch de,,,,,,,,rabb karer eda hi likhde raho jis nu parh k dil aakda nahin sago vaar-2 parhan lai utsuk ho uthda
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Jagpal (yaaden_kamal)
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24th June 2008, 11:11 AM
Balraj ji
Sat sri akal, Tuhadi bahut bahut meharbani, shukriya tusi aapne keemti samey cho kujh sama meri poetry read karan lai vi kaddea. Tuhanu meri poem changi laggi tuhada bahut bahut dhanvaad. Umeed karda haan ke augge to vi isey trah pyar dinde rahonge. jagpal |
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