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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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4th July 2007, 11:12 AM
AJJ DA ISHAQ DIKHAWAE DA HI ROOP HAI
ISS DA ASLI ROOP TAA GUMNAAM BAN KE REH GAYA
KADE HUNDA SI LUKIYA YAARA DE DILA CH
AJJ BAZAARA CH EH SAREAAM BAN KE REH GAYA
KADE VASDI SI ISS DI NAGRI SACHE YAARA NAAL
AJJ EDA UJARRIYA KE SHAMSHAN BAN KE REH GAYA
JAAN VARDE SI LOKI KADE SACHE ISHAQ TO
AJJ ISHAQ VI BEYIMAAN BAN KE REH GAYA
KADE HUNDA SI ISHAQ MALAK DILA NA
PAR AJJ KHUD MEHMAAN BAN KE REH GAYA
ISS DI JIND KADD LAYI DAGEBAZA NE
TA HI ISHAQ BEJAAN BAN KE REH GAYA
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Mai Shayar To Nahi
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8th July 2007, 01:08 PM
Wah ji wah, kina sohna likhiya hai tusi taa, HEER JI,
ek ek word te ek ek line nu bahut khubi naal sajaya hai ji
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8th June 2008, 11:10 PM
[quote=ADHURI HEER;237651]AJJ DA ISHAQ DIKHAWAE DA HI ROOP HAI
ISS DA ASLI ROOP TAA GUMNAAM BAN KE REH GAYA
KADE HUNDA SI LUKIYA YAARA DE DILA CH
AJJ BAZAARA CH EH SAREAAM BAN KE REH GAYA
KADE VASDI SI ISS DI NAGRI SACHE YAARA NAAL
AJJ EDA UJARRIYA KE SHAMSHAN BAN KE REH GAYA
JAAN VARDE SI LOKI KADE SACHE ISHAQ TO
AJJ ISHAQ VI BEYIMAAN BAN KE REH GAYA
KADE HUNDA SI ISHAQ MALAK DILA NA
PAR AJJ KHUD MEHMAAN BAN KE REH GAYA
ISS DI JIND KADD LAYI DAGEBAZA NE
TA HI ISHAQ BEJAAN BAN KE REH GAYA..
eh poem hai ta bahut sohni HEER par mai iss naal sehmat nahi ha.sorry
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9th June 2008, 03:12 AM
Heer Ji tusi buhat sohna likhde ho Rab kere es he tarah likhde te hasde basde ravo.
Sufne soon na dende !~ Sanu roon na dende !~
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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10th June 2008, 03:18 AM
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eh poem hai ta bahut sohni HEER par mai iss naal sehmat nahi ha.sorry
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Thank u babbu ji iss reply layi, eh gal samajh nahi lagi ke tusi iss naal kyon sehmat nahi, shayd tusi Ajj-kal de ishaq nu nahi jande,................
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10th June 2008, 03:19 AM
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Heer Ji tusi buhat sohna likhde ho Rab kere es he tarah likhde te hasde basde ravo.
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Thank u Roogi ji, iss poem nu like karan layi
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14th June 2008, 10:05 PM
Heer ji tusi sachi ajj kal de ishaq bahut khooobi naal byan kita hai,
-------------------------------------------- Jihdi mitro bhaal ch dil oh na kuri labhdi,oh na kuri labhdi
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17th June 2008, 12:49 AM
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Heer ji tusi sachi ajj kal de ishaq bahut khooobi naal byan kita hai,
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Thanks deep ji,
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25th June 2008, 09:57 AM
bahut vadia defination ditti hai g tussa ishq di but sab di aapo apni soch...main v kuj hadh tak tuhade naal sehmat haan
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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25th June 2008, 10:06 AM
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Originally Posted by balraj chahal
bahut vadia defination ditti hai g tussa ishq di but sab di aapo apni soch...main v kuj hadh tak tuhade naal sehmat haan
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Thank u Balraj ji, iss poem naal sehmat hon layi, vese mai ta aajkal de ishaq nu dekh ke likhiya hai,
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26th June 2008, 10:48 AM
last line is awesome heer ji.........keep it up.
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3rd July 2008, 08:34 AM
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Originally Posted by D33P
last line is awesome heer ji.........keep it up.
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Thanks Deep ji for your comments
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