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Love bheed se nikal kar....... - 7th September 2014, 07:39 PM
Bheed se nikal kar,
MahfiloN se bachkar,

Chupne ko teri yaad se,
Bachne ko tere khayaal se,

Aksar tanha waqt bitati hooN maiN,
Is sunsaan jagah aati hooN maiN,

JahaN koi na ho jo tera zikr kare,
Dekhkar aankheiN
mere dard ko pahchaan le,
Par sukoon nahi pati hooN maiN.

LahreiN sagar ki shor machati haiN,
Jaise mujhe chidhati haiN.

Badal bhi bankar kali ghata darata hai,
Jane kyoN bin mausam baras jata hai.

Kya karooN ab ki bas tu aye,
teri yaad nahi.
Bula sakooN awaz dekar,
Ab ye bhi to ISHQ me haal nahi.

Bheed se nikal kar,
MahfiloN se bachkar,
Chupne ko teri yaad se,
Bachne ko tere khyaal se.

Aksar tanha waqt bitati hooN,
sunsaan si is jagah pe aati hooN


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7th September 2014, 09:31 PM
very nice madhu jee......ye aapki tpt wali kavita aaj bhi nayi lagti hai.....mubaraq aapko...


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8th September 2014, 11:30 AM
wahhh! Madhu jee,

TPT meiN pesh ki hui aap ki yeH nazm waqai be-misaal-o-ba-kaamal thi..
Aaj dobaara issay phad'ha to phir se wohi lutf aaya... aur zoq-e-shukan ko
taqviyyat pohnchii...... DherooN daad iss dil-fareeb nazm ke liye.....

Likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,

*hSn* : parStaar

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9th September 2014, 11:31 AM
Wah Madhuji....Bohut achhi lagi aap ki kavita....

Khaas kar is stanza se mujhe hansi ayi ek second ke liye.

LahreiN sagar ki shor machati haiN,
Jaise mujhe chidhati haiN.

Waise sagar ke paas to main jata hun...magar aisa kabhi socha na tha....yani chidhanewali baat......achhi peshkash hai..mubarak ho

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10th September 2014, 05:31 PM
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Wah Madhuji....Bohut achhi lagi aap ki kavita....

Khaas kar is stanza se mujhe hansi ayi ek second ke liye.

LahreiN sagar ki shor machati haiN,
Jaise mujhe chidhati haiN.

Waise sagar ke paas to main jata hun...magar aisa kabhi socha na tha....yani chidhanewali baat......achhi peshkash hai..mubarak ho

Mujeeb Parwaaz
bahut shukriya ki aapne meri kavita ko pada aur saraha......

Yoon hi sath dete rahein.....


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wahhh! Madhu jee,

TPT meiN pesh ki hui aap ki yeH nazm waqai be-misaal-o-ba-kaamal thi..
Aaj dobaara issay phad'ha to phir se wohi lutf aaya... aur zoq-e-shukan ko
taqviyyat pohnchii...... DherooN daad iss dil-fareeb nazm ke liye.....

Likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,
Mafi chahti hoon der se reply kar pa rahi hoon hassan ji....tah e dil se shukriya meri mamooli si nazm ko padne aur tareef k liye.....
Yoon hi aate rahiye...
Aur sath dete rahiye...


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very nice madhu jee......ye aapki tpt wali kavita aaj bhi nayi lagti hai.....mubaraq aapko...
Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aru ji...aapki tareef milna khushnaseebi hai meri.....
yoon hi sath dete rahein...


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