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Yaad aati hai. - 24th March 2004, 11:34 AM

Kue dikhaye thay woh sare khwaab
Jub khudhi unhe toor diye
Kis manzilki taalash mein
Hume saath leke chal diye?

Kue mile thay hum
Jub bichar na hi tha ek din
Kue kho gaye thay sapno mein
Jub jaagnahi tha ek din?
Baar baar aati hai yaad aapki
Har paal rulati hai bewafai aapki.

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Kue dikhaye thay woh sare khwaab
Jub khudhi unhe toor diye
Kis manzilki taalash mein
Hume saath leke chal diye?

Kue mile thay hum
Jub bichar na hi tha ek din
Kue kho gaye thay sapno mein
Jub jaagnahi tha ek din?
Baar baar aati hai yaad aapki
Har paal rulati hai bewafai aapki.

Laakh chahne par bhi mita nahi saki
Woh pyari baatein aapki.

Aab aap hi bataiyein ke kiya kare
Is nachees pyar mein aapki........?
.......................dil dukhane wale ahsaas hai jaha meri mausam ke....


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18th April 2008, 10:27 AM

Mausam didi:

aadaab..!

aapki yeh kavviSh dil ko chhu gaYii.. YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe..!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Question 18th April 2008, 12:35 PM

Bahut aachha likha hai aapne....
I always thought loving some1 was the greatest feeling, but I realised tat loving a friend is even better, we lose ppl we love but we never lose true friends.
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Question Friend? - 18th April 2008, 12:37 PM

Bahut aachha likha hai aapne....
I always thought loving some1 was the greatest feeling, but I realised tat loving a friend is even better, we lose ppl we love but we never lose true friends.
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dii bahut hi dard-baraa likha hai. dil k aar paar ho gayi aapki yeh ehsaas. hum to yahi dhua karnge k aap humesha khush rahein.

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Kue dikhaye thay woh sare khwaab
Jub khudhi unhe toor diye
Kis manzilki taalash mein
Hume saath leke chal diye?

Kue mile thay hum
Jub bichar na hi tha ek din
Kue kho gaye thay sapno mein
Jub jaagnahi tha ek din?
Baar baar aati hai yaad aapki
Har paal rulati hai bewafai aapki.

Laakh chahne par bhi mita nahi saki
Woh pyari baatein aapki.

Aab aap hi bataiyein ke kiya kare
Is nachees pyar mein aapki........?
di bahut hi acha likha hai apne aaj mene pehle baar apki gazal padhi hai aur padhak bahut acha lag raha hai ki app itni achi gazal likhte ho kyu ki mene aj tak apko game khelte hi dekha hai kabhi gazal nahi dekhi thi apki isi liye


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Kue dikhaye thay woh sare khwaab
Jub khudhi unhe toor diye
Kis manzilki taalash mein
Hume saath leke chal diye?

Kue mile thay hum
Jub bichar na hi tha ek din
Kue kho gaye thay sapno mein
Jub jaagnahi tha ek din?
Baar baar aati hai yaad aapki
Har paal rulati hai bewafai aapki.

Laakh chahne par bhi mita nahi saki
Woh pyari baatein aapki.

Aab aap hi bataiyein ke kiya kare
Is nachees pyar mein aapki........?


mausam ji muje yeh do line behad pasan aai hain

Laakh chahne par bhi mita nahi saki
Woh pyari baatein aapki.

Aab aap hi bataiyein ke kiya kare
Is nachees pyar mein aapki........?



unhi likhte rahiye


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unhi likhte rahiye
nihar yeh maine nahin likha hain..iska credit to uske writer ko jaata hain......yeh to shared poetry hain.........yeh to bahut pehle post kiya tha....jyada rules pata nahin the ......


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Nice sharing di! Very touchy!!!!

Take Care..

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Jub khudhi unhe toor diye
Kis manzilki taalash mein
Hume saath leke chal diye?

Kue mile thay hum
Jub bichar na hi tha ek din
Kue kho gaye thay sapno mein
Jub jaagnahi tha ek din?
Baar baar aati hai yaad aapki
Har paal rulati hai bewafai aapki.

Laakh chahne par bhi mita nahi saki
Woh pyari baatein aapki.

Aab aap hi bataiyein ke kiya kare
Is nachees pyar mein aapki........?
hi mausam di!
kaise ho aap?
aur apni behna ki koi khabar bhi nahi li?
bahut accha likha hai aapne.
really bahut bahut accha!!
god bless you.
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Kue dikhaye thay woh sare khwaab
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Kis manzilki taalash mein
Hume saath leke chal diye?

Kue mile thay hum
Jub bichar na hi tha ek din
Kue kho gaye thay sapno mein
Jub jaagnahi tha ek din?
Baar baar aati hai yaad aapki
Har paal rulati hai bewafai aapki.

Laakh chahne par bhi mita nahi saki
Woh pyari baatein aapki.

Aab aap hi bataiyein ke kiya kare
Is nachees pyar mein aapki........?
"aaj phir baar baar tera khayal aaya hai,
mausam-e-bahaar par jo nikhaar aaya hai"

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Oye hoye kya baat hain.

Mere dil mein bhi yeh sawaal aaya hain!
Kyun is naalayak pe itna pyar aaya hain!


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Kue dikhaye thay woh sare khwaab
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Kis manzilki taalash mein
Hume saath leke chal diye?

Kue mile thay hum
Jub bichar na hi tha ek din
Kue kho gaye thay sapno mein
Jub jaagnahi tha ek din?
Baar baar aati hai yaad aapki
Har paal rulati hai bewafai aapki.

Laakh chahne par bhi mita nahi saki
Woh pyari baatein aapki.

Aab aap hi bataiyein ke kiya kare
Is nachees pyar mein aapki........?

bahot hi haseen peshkash mausam ji.... aapki kaavish bahot pasand aayee hame.... aati rahiyega likhtii rahiye

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@sameerji.....maine pehle hi mention kar diya hain ki this is shared poetry..fir bhi pasand karne ke liye thnx...

@ Sunitadi...

Har kadam pe sawaal aur jawaab hain zindagi
Jo isse darega .... woh kya khak jiyega zindagi

Pata hain di bahut waqt baad kisise tukbandi ki hain..ya kuch likha hain


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@sameerji.....maine pehle hi mention kar diya hain ki this is shared poetry..fir bhi pasand karne ke liye thnx...

@ Sunitadi...

Har kadam pe sawaal aur jawaab hain zindagi
Jo isse darega .... woh kya khak jiyega zindagi

Pata hain di bahut waqt baad kisise tukbandi ki hain..ya kuch likha hain
"mere har sawaal ka jawaab hai tu,
jaisi bhi hai mere liye bemisaal hai tu"


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