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Kismat Me Meri Chain Se Jeena Likh De
Kismat Me Meri Chain Se Jeena Likh De,
Dubee Naa Kbhi Mera Saafina Likh Dy;
Jannat Bhi Gawara Hy Mgr Mere Liye,
Ay Quatib E Taqudir “Madina” Likh Dy…!!!
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ye intzaar na thahra koi bala thahri
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Naseem Amrohvi..
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rabt mai bhi ik tasalsal chahiye
zabt bhi to phir musalsal chahiye
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rabt mai bhi ik tasalsal chahiye
zabt bhi to phir musalsal chahiye
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yaarub merey zabt ki intiha ker dey
sabr sey jiyon aesee ibtidaa ker dey
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Ye na ho ki zabt ki bhi inteha ho jaye ab
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ye fiqraye chalen ye ghaaten ye baatein
tujhe o daGabaaz ham jante hain..
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ye fiqraye chalen ye ghaaten ye baatein
tujhe o daGabaaz ham jante hain..
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waahhh kya baat hai......
ye rabta ye silsila ye apse hame gila
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la-ilm sa pada mila khaak sa ye dil mera
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Bahot khoob...
Hamse kya ho poochte ye shokh dil ki adatein
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haal dil ka kya kahun hoon ab bhi usko sochta
judaa na humse ho saka par umr bhar khafa raha....
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yaa rab! Gam-e-hijraa.N me.n itanaa to kiyaa hotaa
jo haath jigar pe hai vo dast-e-duaa hotaa
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yaa rab! Gam-e-hijraa.N me.n itanaa to kiyaa hotaa
jo haath jigar pe hai vo dast-e-duaa hotaa
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Waah!!!
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Waah bahot khoob anu....
Phir se ha...
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Vah sunita ji
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bhii.D me.n ik ajanabii kaa saamanaa achchhaa lagaa
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Sabaa ji khoob hai...assuming next is 'na'
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Sabaa ji khoob hai...assuming next is 'na'
na tumse kuch gila na zamaane se hai humdum
thi apni hi khataa ki pyaar kar na sake hum...
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Buhet acha likha qasid saheb
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Buhet acha likha qasid saheb
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Bahut khoob mujahid bhai....ta se agla sher pesh hai
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ruswaayi zindagi se kuch aise nibhaayi humne
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harchund key voh dushman Eman hey hamara
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harchund key voh dushman Eman hey hamara
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Next la hai shayad..
Lekar hamara chain o sukoo.n aake tum milo
Ab aur intzaar kahiin jaa.n na meri le...
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Next la hai shayad..
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Lahu boney koh bhi jee chahta hey
Kabhi roney kih bhi jee chahta hey
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Waah kya baat
"Lekar rahega jaa.n, lailaaj ishq hai,
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Ye dil ke raaz dabaaye rakhiye
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next ho
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Waah bohot khoob peshkash
"Ho surat-e-haal agar hum sa,
Kaheen raaz bhi hum sa na ho"
Bhushan
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2nd October 2016, 09:30 PM
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Waah bohot khoob peshkash
"Ho surat-e-haal agar hum sa,
Kaheen raaz bhi hum sa na ho"
Bhushan
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Umdaa janaab....agla sher dekhiye
hoshiyaar the hum bhi kadrdaano se
vo muskuraaye aur dil baaghi niklaa
next la..
Qasid
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Umdaa janaab....agla sher dekhiye
hoshiyaar the hum bhi kadrdaano se
vo muskuraaye aur dil baaghi niklaa
next la..
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Lajwaab kar gaye jab milayi ankhein aur
mera dil bhi uski har baat pe razi nikla....
Phir se la...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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3rd October 2016, 10:38 PM
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Lajwaab kar gaye jab milayi ankhein aur
mera dil bhi uski har baat pe razi nikla....
Phir se la...
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Lakh dafa ilzaam barbaad hasrato ne lagaye aur
har dafa ishk mera kusooorwar nikla
Bhushan
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11th October 2016, 04:05 PM
laa pher eik baar wohi baada o jaam aey saaqi
haath aa jaye mujhey mera muqaam aey saaqi
allama iqbal
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Originally Posted by bhushan
Lakh dafa ilzaam barbaad hasrato ne lagaye aur
har dafa ishk mera kusooorwar nikla
Bhushan
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laa pher eik baar wohi baada o jaam aey saaqi
haath aa jaye mujhey mera muqaam aey saaqi
allama iqbal
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Qismat hee nhi payi hamdard koi hota
Tanhaiiyon ka shikwa kya phir kisi se karte.....
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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