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Originally Posted by Mujahid Ali
Madhu ji maine gaur kiya aapne iss ghazal mai kuch ashaar mai aakhri rukn "Faa'ilaan" rakha hai
Maslan= 2nd & 4th sher ke Misra-e-oola mai
Toh Behar-e-mutadaarik mai ye aahang bhi hai kya
Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun/Faa'laan
Zara bataiye na hamey bhi
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Ji..bahut achcha laga aapne ye sawaal poocha...is behr me ye permission hai ki
akhiri lafz ka vazan gira sakte hain...agar zaroorat pade to...
Isliye maine 2nd aur 4th sher me maine ye chhoot le li hai...
Ummeed hai jawab de payi hun main...
Aate rahiyega...
Aate rahiye..