From the Ashes:best one, please comment

[time_traveller]

Burned to the cynders ashes still remain,
burned to the death we still live on,
slowly we rise in the light of dawn,
as we stand strong and tall,
we sing the cries of DEATH

We will rise from the ashes , which were buried so deep
We will rise from the ashes , and awaken from our sleep

Into your mind we shal wander,
It is your soul that we conquer,
Turning ur dreams into night mare
Making your life a living hell

Far beyond the trashhold, from the remains of us
as light slowly fades, we await the final dusk
Far beyond the trashhold, from the serpents blood
we are the chosen 1 , to begin the masaacre

We will rise from the ashes , which were buried so deep
We will rise from the ashes , and awaken from our sleep
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