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back after a long time -
18th April 2005, 11:19 AM
back after a long time with small but cute notations
kal ke beete hue zamane ko guzra hua pal kar diya kai haseen shamon ko be rangeen kar diya galiyaron mein na ab hum dost ikhtta hote hain un chaubaron ko bhi alvida kar diya kaise kahein kitni raatein tanhaiyon mein kati hain kitni baaaton ne karvat badalne pe majboor kar diya kai saalon se band padi thi teri yaadein mere ghar ke band darwazon mein aaj ek jashn ke saath unehein bhi rukhsat kar diya |
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18th April 2005, 11:40 AM
jisne jivan ki sahchai jaani ussiii ne jivan paar kar liya
khudd ko sambhaal ke ,tumne apni jindgi khushiyouno ke naam kar diya ...................... khush rahiye .......... kabhi kisi ko mukmmal jahan nahi milti kabhi aasmaan toh kabhi..............  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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19th April 2005, 01:41 AM
Bahot khoob. accha likha hai aap ne, daad kubul karna aur aaise hi likhte rehna.........TC
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19th April 2005, 03:55 PM
kal ke beete hue zamane ko guzra hua pal kar diya
kai haseen shamon ko be rangeen kar diya galiyaron mein na ab hum dost ikhtta hote hain un chaubaron ko bhi alvida kar diya kaise kahein kitni raatein tanhaiyon mein kati hain kitni baaaton ne karvat badalne pe majboor kar diya kai saalon se band padi thi teri yaadein mere ghar ke band darwazon mein aaj ek jashn ke saath unehein bhi rukhsat kar diya waah.. poori ghazal hi kamaal hai!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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19th April 2005, 09:14 PM
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kamaal ka likha hai ... reguler aaiye .. sach hume bhi kuch accha padhne ko milega aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th May 2005, 07:14 PM
bahot bahot shukriya aap sabhi ka chandsi ji, payal ji,pulkit ji aur
kunaal ji aapka gar aise hi hausla afzai milti rahi to zarur likhte rahenge |
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