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Beete din beete lamhe, (tHE pAIN) - 14th October 2004, 01:06 PM

Beete din beete lamhe,
Hume yaad aate rahe.
Guzre zamaane zindagi bhar,
saath nibhate rahe.

Is dil me bhi kuch sapne the,
Kuch log the jo apne the,
jab abr e gardish ghir aaye,
Vo log bhi jaate rahe.

Koi soorat hai koi chehra hai,
dhoondte chale har saaye me,
Anjani si aankhon se fir,
sab log daraate rahe.

Bas kohra hai tanhai ka,
Aandhere me soyi raahen hain,
Khud bhatke hue musafir hume,
raasta dikhate rahe.

Badi der tak raah dekhe hain,
simti hui si palkon se,
Kuch khoye hue khayalon sang,
Din raat bitate rahe.

Har gham ko dabaa kar seene me,
Hum muskurate rahe.
Apni si koi soorat ki jhalak,
Palko pe basate rahe.

Jab chhod chale hum duniya ko,
Dil rooya koi door kahin,
Tasveer chum kar badi der tak,
vo aansu bahate rahe.

Beete din beete lamhe,
Hume yaad aate rahe.
Guzre zamaane zindagi bhar,
saath nibhate rahe.
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Re: Beete din beete lamhe, (tHE pAIN) - 14th October 2004, 01:25 PM

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Beete din beete lamhe,
Hume yaad aate rahe.
Guzre zamaane zindagi bhar,
saath nibhate rahe.

Is dil me bhi kuch sapne the,
Kuch log the jo apne the,
jab abr e gardish ghir aaye,
Vo log bhi jaate rahe.

Koi soorat hai koi chehra hai,
dhoondte chale har saaye me,
Anjani si aankhon se fir,
sab log daraate rahe.

Bas kohra hai tanhai ka,
Aandhere me soyi raahen hain,
Khud bhatke hue musafir hume,
raasta dikhate rahe.

Badi der tak raah dekhe hain,
simti hui si palkon se,
Kuch khoye hue khayalon sang,
Din raat bitate rahe.

Har gham ko dabaa kar seene me,
Hum muskurate rahe.
Apni si koi soorat ki jhalak,
Palko pe basate rahe.

Jab chhod chale hum duniya ko,
Dil rooya koi door kahin,
Tasveer chum kar badi der tak,
vo aansu bahate rahe.

Beete din beete lamhe,
Hume yaad aate rahe.
Guzre zamaane zindagi bhar,
saath nibhate rahe.
............

pLZ TELL ME HOW IT IS?
samir bhai ...

Koi soorat hai koi chehra hai,
dhoondte chale har saaye me,
Anjani si aankhon se fir,
sab log daraate rahe.

ye ashar na jane kyun najar ruk gayi in pe ...bohat khoob likhi hai aapne poori gazal ... bohat pasand aayi ... har sher la jawab hai iska .... par ye line mujhe behad pasand aayi ... daad kabool kare...

ek rasta door dikhta hai
manzil ke jab koii mitta hai...
tere dil ke darwaze toote nahi tabh bhi...
jab koi yahan khaak main milta hai ..

chalta hun... yun hi likhte rahiyega

khaksaar

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thanx kunal bhai
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thanx kunal bhai - 15th October 2004, 10:09 AM

Kunal bhai bahot bahot shukriya......


Aur ek sher jo is me jodaa ja sakta hai .....

Kuch un hai...

Kabr ka daaman bhar gaya,
jab aaya mausam patjhad ka,
Girte hue patte bhi,
Kuch yaad dilate rahe.



Take care...


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