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लड़के वाले नाच रहे थे लड़की वाले गुमसुम थे
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लड़के वाले नाच रहे थे लड़की वाले गुमसुम थे - 29th April 2018, 11:05 PM

ग़ज़ल

लड़के वाले नाच रहे थे लड़की वाले गुमसुम थे
याद करो उस वारदात में अकसर शामिल हम-तुम थे

बोलचाल और खाल बाल जो झट से बदला करते थे
सोच-समझ की बात करें तो अभी भी कुत्ते की दुम थे

बाबा, बिक्री, बड़बोलापन, चमत्कार थे चौतरफ़ा
तर्क की बातें करने वाले सच्चे लोग कहाँ गुम थे!

उनपे हँसो जो बुद्ध कबीर के हश्र पे अकसर हँसते हैं
ईमाँ वाले लोगों को तो अपने नतीजे मालूम थे

अपनी कमियाँ झुठलाने को तुमने हमें दबाया था
जब हम ख़ुदको जान चुके तब हमने जाना क्या तुम थे


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30th April 2018, 12:18 AM

Sanjay saaheb

Namaste

Sab se pehle to Shayri. Com pariwaar mein aap ka dil se swaagat kartaa huuN... Aik umdaah Ghazal bazm meiN aapne pesh kee hay... Andaaz bhee bahot khoob!! Bazm ki shaan yuuNhi baDhaate rahiye... dil se daad hi daad aapko

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Shukriya Ka Shukriya - 30th April 2018, 11:08 PM

Bahut-bahut shukriya Dhaval Saaheb.

Ghazal aur Andaaz ki taarif ka bhi shukriya.

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baat chalti rahegi.

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