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My first Try -
30th July 2008, 04:07 AM
Chalain Mohabbat main yah Rah b Apna k dekhtey hain..
Kuch din os Bewafa ko bhula k dekhtey hain.... Har Dum jo Numm rehti hain Aankahin un ki yaad main.. Inn Aansoun ko kahin chupa k dekhtey hain.. Un ki Yaadian Un ki batain Fursat nahi detin..... Khud ko kahin aur Uljha k dekhte hain.... Wo mera tha, Na mera hai, Na mera ho ga...... Bat yah phir se khud ko samjha k dekhtey hain.... Paagal kehta hai Zamana mujh ko teri chahat main..... Fasana_e_Mohabbat Zamanay ko suna k dekhtey hain... Dil ka faisla hai yah Zameer na manay ga...... Aaj iss Dil O Zameer ko lara k dekhtey hain..... Baarha khud sey ker chukey aisey wadey ' Waqar ' Aaj phir khud se Dhokha kha k dekhtey hain.... |
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Raat Gehri Thi -
31st July 2008, 08:12 PM
Raat Gehri thi Darr bhi sakte they,,
ham jo kehtey they ker b sakte thay. Tum jo bichray to yah b na socha.. Ham to Paagal thay Marr b sakte thay... |
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Shiddat Un k -
31st July 2008, 08:26 PM
Shiddat un k Husn_e_bepanah ki Seh na sake,,
Aisi Band hui Zuban ek Sher b kah na sake,,,, Chamak rahi thin Aankahin Ehsas_e_Mehroomi se,,, Aur ik Aansu they Inn Aankhon se Beh na sake...... Hai kitni Mohabbat hamain os Bewafa se,,,,,,,,, yah baat kabhi Dhang se unhain kah na sake,, Aaj to yah batana hai unhain aye Dil_e_Waqar, K bin Un k ham ek pal bhi Chain se na rah sake. |
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1st August 2008, 06:26 PM
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2nd August 2008, 04:44 PM
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aap ki yeh koshish beh kaamyaab koshish hai.. bohat pukhta Dhang se aap ne sher kahe hai.n.. daad haazir hai, qubool keejiye aur yuu.n hi likhate rahe.n... Mayank |
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2nd August 2008, 05:53 PM
Thanks Brothers Yakeen kijiye aap k comments hamesha yaad rahain gey. bohat khhushi hui k app ne ap zindagi k qeemti lamhat main se waqat nikal ker meri poetry ko perha.thanks again and GOD bless U.
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******Yaad******* -
2nd August 2008, 06:03 PM
Aaj Phir Udaasi Iss Dil pey Chayi hai,
Aaj Phir Yaad mujhey un ki aayi hai,, Kitni Sureeli Awaz Sun rahe hain Ham, Jaise Ghazal Hawa ne Koi Gungunayi hai, Ab bohat Ro chuki yah Aankhain un k liye, Baat yah ham khud ko Barha Samjahi hai, Bin Judai k Mohabbat ki Qader na ker saka koi, Shaid Isi Tarap ko kehtey Dil Rubai hain,,,,,,,,,, Na Ho Tamasha Hamari Mohabbat ka Zamane main, Iss Dil ki Kafiyat sab se ham ne Chupayi hai,,,,,,,,,, Jala k UN ki Yadoon k Chiraag *** WAQAR*** ne,, Ajj phir Shart Hawaoun se lagayi hai************* |
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2nd August 2008, 06:20 PM
Aye Kaash K Shayri Ham b ker paate,
Lafzon ka Khel Ham b khel kabhi pate, Rooop ko os k Chandni bana deta,,,, Zulf ko os ki kali Ghata kehta,,,,,, Chaand ka Tukra to sab kehtey hain Chaand ko os ka Tukra bana deta. Yaad jo os ki kabhi mujhe Sata,ti Khud ko ek Sher se Rule leta,,. Paney ki Aarzu main Chahat ko oski, Girr k Sajday main Khud ko rab se mila Leta. Husn par os k Ik Shokh Ghazal kehta, Kuch na kah ker bhi Sab kuch Suna deta, Par Kaaash Ham yah Ker paaate....Kaaash...... To be Honest guys pehlay do shers kahin se perhay they maine, baqi sari ghazal khud meri apni banayi hui hai need ur precious comments.Thanks Waqar Azeem |
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3rd August 2008, 07:03 PM
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mudda ye nahi ki usne khanjar jaan ke maara ya anjaane me khudakasam hume to taajjub uske hunar pe aa gaya.....  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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4th August 2008, 06:38 PM
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kya khuub likha hai bhai bahut accha likha hai aapne,koi kah nahi sakta ki ye aapki pahli kosis hai,apki aane wali peshkas ka intjaar rahega,aik aik sher me wo kasis hai ki kya kahne,aap likhte rahe ,gazhal ki takneek ke baare me shayad hamare seniors apko kuch rai denge par ahsaas me to aap lajawaab rahe,sukriya share karne ke liye khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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4th August 2008, 10:37 PM
Dil Lagaanaa Dil Jalaanaa-Zindagi
Hain Yahi apna Fasaana-Zindagi Dariya Dariya Pee Ke Duniyaa Ke Sitam Aansoo Aansoo Muskuurana-Zindagi Aaj Mujhko Mujhse Milne De Zaraa Tuu Kabhi Fursat Se Aana-Zindagi Maine Bhi Haari Hai Baazi Pyaar Ki Tuu Mujhe Bhee Aazmaana-Zindagi Wo Jo Dil Kaa Saaf Ho Uss Ko Sabhi Log Kahte Hain Deewaana-Zindagi Main To Hoon Raahi Safar Hi Kaam Hain Kyaa Meraa Pouchhe Thikaana-Zindagi... NM Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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5th August 2008, 02:54 AM
Zamane ne Mujhko Thukra diya hai
Maut k Aur Kareeb la diya hai Kabhi Mur k jo peechay dekhta hön Sochta Høøn,Dunya ne Mujhe kya Diya hai Wo jis ne Mohabbat ki Baazi na Kheli Kya Khaak Zamane main Wo Insan Jiya Hai Hamari Tumhari to Kuch Alag baat ho Gi Ishq to Dunya mein Bahuton ne Kiya hai Bin Piye Jo Main Larkharra raha hon Yeh Aankhøn ne teri Bata kaya Kiya hai Manzil ki Talash mein gaya tha Musafir Rastey ne khud osko Bhatka diya hai. |
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5th August 2008, 05:47 AM
Janab Waqar sahab apke shayri darbar me sherry ka sallam,
kya khub likha hai aapne.. mano hamare hi dil ka haal likha hai... Chalain Mohabbat main yah Rah b Apna k dekhtey hain.. Kuch din os Bewafa ko bhula k dekhtey hain.... Har Dum jo Numm rehti hain Aankahin un ki yaad main.. Inn Aansoun ko kahin chupa k dekhtey hain.. Un ki Yaadian Un ki batain Fursat nahi detin..... Khud ko kahin aur Uljha k dekhte hain.... Wo mera tha, Na mera hai, Na mera ho ga...... Bat yah phir se khud ko samjha k dekhtey hain.... apki koshish hame bahoot pasand aai... insha allah aaise hi likhte raho... Allah hafiz |
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5th August 2008, 07:29 AM
Thanks A lot Sherry Bhai aap jaisey pyar kernay wlaay sath hoon tu hamara dil bhi likhnay ko kerta rahey ga.Thnaks Again
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5th August 2008, 06:01 PM
Rah-e-Wafa mein Mit jatay to acha tha,
Kuch Phool aur Khil jatay to acha tha, Kaantay Paywast kiye meray Daman mein Doston ney, Dushmano say mil Jatay to acha tha, Dil k zakhmo nay b aah bhar k kaha pyarey, Kash khud he Sil jatay to acha tha, Teri Bewafai ne bharha di Tanhai meri, Mehfilo mein Tik jatay to acha tha. Na yuon Ruswa hotaySar-e-bazar Jana, Be Mol he bik jatay to acha tha. |
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6th August 2008, 05:44 PM
Os ki Chahat main Ham itne Begaanay ho gaye,
K Ab to Khud se miley bhi Zamanay ho gaye. Wo os ka mujh se Hans Hans k baat kerna, Qissay yah sab ab to Puranay ho gaye... Deti thi Dunya jis ki Perhaizgaari ki Misaal, Aaj osi Shaks ke Hath main Paimaaney ho gaye. Wo mujh Samjh saka Na main os ko Jaan Ska, Youn he Tark_e_Taluqq k Bahaney ho gaye. Teri Tanha Zaat to bey Maani thi os k liye' WAQAR' Isi liye Ab Mehfilon sey os k Yaranay ho gaye. |
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11th August 2008, 03:36 PM
Agar hum door ho jaayen,
Kahin duniya main kho jaayen, Batao kya karo gay TUM, Hamen dhoondo gay ya, phir bhul jao gay, Hamen Awaaz do gay ya, Kisi guzri kahani main hamara naam likh do gay, Chalo Aisa he Ker lena, Tum khud bhi badal Jana, Hamen Tum bhool he jana, Magar itni guzarish hay, Hamara zikr jab Aa'ay to thorra muskara dena! Khushi ka ho ya phir gham ka, Bus ik Aansuu gira dena |
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13th August 2008, 11:38 PM
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lekin main jaanna chahta hoon ki kya aap nirashawadi hain |
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13th August 2008, 11:49 PM
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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khuda -
14th August 2008, 09:29 AM
a khuda ak ahasan kr de
unke dil k hr arman pure kr de gr unki arju me kisi ki jaan jati ho to der mt kr tu hme bejan kr de. |
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23rd August 2008, 03:10 PM
Agerchay Main Ik Chattan Sa Aadmi raha hoon,
Mager Tere Baad Bhi Hosla Hai K Jee Raha Hoon. Wo Reza Reza Mere Badan main Uter raha hai, Main Qatra Qatra Osi ki Aankhon ko Pee Raha Hon. Teri Htheli pey Kis ney likha hai Qatal Mera? Mujhy to Lagta hai Main tera Dost bhi Raha hoon. Khuli Hain Aankhain Mager Badan hain Tamam Pather, Koi Batye Main Marr Chuka hoon K Jee raha hoon. Kahan milay gi Misal meri Sitamgeeri ki, Main Gulaboon k Zakham Katoon sey See raha hon. Na Puch Mujh say K Shehar Walon ka Hal Kya tha? Main to Khud Apnay Gher main Do Ghari Raha hon. Mila to Beetey Dino ka Sach Os ki Aankhon main tha, Woh Aashna Jis say Muddaton Ajnabi raha hon. Bhula dey Mujh ko kah Bewafai Baja Hai Lakin, Gunwa na Mujh k Main Teri Zindagi Raha hoon. Wo Ajnabi Ban k milay bhi to kaya hai MOHSIN? Yah Naaz Kamm hai k main Bhi Os ka raha hoon. |
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23rd August 2008, 03:12 PM
Itni Muddat baad Milay ho,
Kin Sochon main Gumm rehtay ho? Itnay Khaif Kyon rehtay ho? Har Aahatt sey Darr jatey ho. Taiz Hawa ney mujh say Pucha, Rait per kaya likhtay rehtay ho? Kaash Koi Ham sey Bhi puchay, Raat Gaye tak kyon jaagey ho? Main Draya say bhi Darta Hon, Tumm Darya sey bhi Gehray ho. Kon say baat Hai Tumm main Aisi, Itnay Achay Kyon lagtay hon.? Peechay Murr ker kyon Dekha tha? Pathar Ban ker Kaya Taktay ho? Jao Jeet ka Jashn Manao, Main Jootha hoon Tumm Sachay ho. Apnay Shehar k Logon say, Meri khatir Kyon Uljhay ho? Kehnay ko rehtay ho Dil main, Phir bhi Kitnay Door kharay ho? Raat hamain Kuch Yaad nahi tha, Raat Bohat he Yaad aaye ho. Ham sey na Pucho Hijar k qissay, Apni Kaho Ab tumm Kaisy ho? MOHSIN tumm Badnaam Bohat ho, Jaisy bhi ho Phir bhi Achay ho. |
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23rd August 2008, 03:13 PM
Kash Ham Khul k Zindagi kertay,
Umer Guzri Hai Khudkushi Kertay. Bijliyain Os Taraf nahi Ayin, Warna Ham Gher main Roshni kertay. Kon Dushman Teri Tarhan ka tha, Aur Ham Kis sey Dosti kertay? Bujh Gaye kitnay Chaand sey Chehray,, Dil K Sehra main Roshni kertay. Ishq Ujratt Talb na tha Warna,, Ham terey Dar per Nokri kertay. Ham iss Tammana main ho gaye Ruswa, Ham bhi Jee bher k Aashqi kertay. Husn Os ka na Khul saka MOHSIN, Thakk Gaye Log Shayri kertay |
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Zabardast -
24th August 2008, 08:16 PM
KIAA AMAZING AUR DIL KO CHOO LENAY WALI POETRY LIKHTAY HEIN BTAA NAI SAKTI>Dil hila kur rukh dia app ki poetry nay>Masha Allah
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25th August 2008, 03:59 PM
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27th August 2008, 03:05 PM
thanks a lot Zani beleive me ur comments are most significent and precious for me
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27th August 2008, 03:58 PM
Mere Liye To Harf_e_Dua ho agya Wo Shaks,
Sare Dukhon ki jaise Dawa ho gaya wo Shaks. Main Aasman pey tha to Zameen Ki kashish tha wo Shaks, Utra Zameen per to Hawa ho gaya wo Shaks.... Sochoon bhi Ab Osay Takhiyal k Par jalain, Mujh say Juda hoya to Khuda Ho gaya Wo Shaks. Main os k Hath dekh raha tha k Dafatan, Simat Simat k Rang_e-Hina ho gaya wo Shaks. Phirta hai lay k Aankh k Kashol Dar Badar, Dil ka Bharm Luta to Gada ho gaya wo shaks, Parta tha main Namaz samjh k osey, Phir youn hua k Mujh say Qaza ho gaya wo Shaks. |
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