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beh gaya ashkon mein har wo armaan jo mera tha -
16th September 2004, 11:59 AM
beh gaya ashkon mein har wo armaan jo mera tha
pighal gaya aahon se wo aasmaan jo mera tha tanhaiyon ke saaye darrate hai suni raahon mein aaj hai khaamosh kal tak ham_jubaan jo mera tha khokhli buniyaad par rishte tikte nahin deir tak dheh gaya ek jhonke mein wo makaan jo mera tha rukta nahin yun waqt kisi ke intezaar mein kabhi chod gaya aaj peeche mujhe wo kaarwaan jo mera tha yeh kis roop mein aayi hai khiza ab ke baras "kureel" tabdeel hua aaj kaanton mein gulsitaan jo mera tha -Manoj Kureel karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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16th September 2004, 12:03 PM
manoj,
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16th September 2004, 12:08 PM
Merii jaan thnx......
yeh kis roop mein aayi hai khiza ab ke baras "kureel" tabdeel hua aaj kaanton mein gulsitaan jo mera tha rukta nahin yun waqt kisi ke intezaar mein kabhi chod gaya aaj peeche mujhe wo kaarwaan jo mera tha waah waah waah.....dard par daad dene kii gussthakii kar raha huu....par sach jooo khoo gaya thaa vo laut aaya hai......iss dard ko fhir wahii garonda mail gaya hai.....ab iss ghar ko dost yuu hii aabaD rakhnaa iss ummid ka saath ijaazat...tumhara dost..Sanju...  muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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welcome back -
16th September 2004, 12:13 PM
Jo tere khaatir na tha....
Us kaarwaaN ko gujar jaane de Dekh kya thandi fuhaareiN hai maahaul me Tu akela hi maza le iska...jo gujar gaya use jaane de. Manoj saahab....aapko yahaaN waapas dekhkar or parhkar...bahut khushi hui. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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16th September 2004, 12:16 PM
MANOJ BHAI.........SWAGAT HAI AAPKA TAHE DIL SE...
YE RACHNA AAPNE MUJHE PEHLE HI POST KI THI...AUR MERA MAN US TIME BHI BAHUT DRAVIT HO GAYA THA...IS LIYE YAHA COMMENTS NAHI DUNGI... FILHAL MUJHE TUMARE AANE KI KHUSHI HAI...BAS...BAS...TUMNE MERI ICCHHA PURI KAR DI....THANX UDAS ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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hi -
16th September 2004, 10:18 PM
beh gaya ashkon mein har wo armaan jo mera tha
pighal gaya aahon se wo aasmaan jo mera tha tanhaiyon ke saaye darrate hai suni raahon mein aaj hai khaamosh kal tak ham_jubaan jo mera tha khokhli buniyaad par rishte tikte nahin deir tak dheh gaya ek jhonke mein wo makaan jo mera tha rukta nahin yun waqt kisi ke intezaar mein kabhi chod gaya aaj peeche mujhe wo kaarwaan jo mera tha yeh kis roop mein aayi hai khiza ab ke baras "kureel" tabdeel hua aaj kaanton mein gulsitaan jo mera ......manoj..!!!!!!!1 phir wo hi derd?????????? lekin bahut aacha aur gehra.... keep it up..as it is the best way to write...... |
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16th September 2004, 10:36 PM
hi manoj ji .... namaskar --^--
manoj ji kya likhun aapki is nazam ke bare main mere hath likh hi nahi paa rahe kuch ...... bas dda kabool kare ... itna dard samet kar rakhna theek nahi ... yun hi nikalte raho... aur san ji aap bhi aa gayi accha laga aapko dekh kar ke umeed hai aapne mera reply padha hoga .... //Sacccha_pyar---»(kunal) har dil main SACCCHA_PYAR hota hai... phir kyun chup ke kunal tu rota hai ... |
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17th September 2004, 08:00 AM
Na na na...Manoj...
yeh kis roop mein aayi hai sabaa ab ke baras "kureel" aaj hua tabdeel gulistaan mein jo kal tak sehra thaa aaj tumhare wapis lautne par itni khush hoon, itni khush hoon ki bus itna hee keh saki... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Re: beh gaya ashkon mein har wo armaan jo mera tha -
20th September 2004, 12:18 PM
MEENA DI,SANJU BHAI,CHANND JI,UDAAS JI,SWATI JI,KUNAAL AUR PAARS aap sabhi ka dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzaaar hoon,,aap ke support aur hauslaafzai ke liye....take care
-MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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