~~ Rani is back ~~

[Rani]

Salaam everybody .I havent been been to the forum in agesss.I hope ke sub theek ho.And I want to thank meena sooo much for remembering me.She pmed me a while ago ,and I came back to see how the forum was going.I didnt know meena was such a great friend.Well folks hope you are all doing well.And welcome me back.


Hope you like this poem.

Ser Ko Jhookaoo Gay To Pather Bhi Devta Ho Jaye Ga
Itna Mat Kisi Ko Chaho Wo Be Wafa Ho Jaye Ga

Aya Jo Moot Ka Khayal Zindagi Bhool Gaye
Chaya Jo Gam Ka Sama Her Khoshi Bhool Gaye

Jis Rah Per Bhi Gaye Thoker Hi Khai Ham Ney
Rastey Tak Hi Poohnchey Manzil Na Pai Ham Ney

Her Pal Tanhai Main Ro Ro Ker Guzara Ham Ney
Safer Zindagi Ka Kuch Is Tarha Guzara Ham Ney

Badley Hain Wo To Is Ka Gila Kin Se Kijye
Pheley Se Khoosh Mizaj To Ham Bhi Nahin Rahey

Kisi Dooshman Ney Ye Izat Mujhey Ab Tak Nahin Bakhshi
Hamaisha Dost Ka Haat Pooncha Hai Merey Gireyban Tak

Ay Dost Is Chamaan Say Aysay Gulloon Ko Chun
Kay Har Shaqs Daad Day Teray Intekhab Per

[meena chheda]

rani,
meri dost,
tumhe kaise bhulti? dost... bhulne k liyae thhodi na hote hai... dost is liyae hote hai k jo aapki raah dekhae... aapki raah maie roshni de.... aapko mahesoos karaaye k aap dost ho.
khair..... aaj to tumne meri bahot taarif kar di..... lol
tum hamesha mere sar aankho par rahi ho.
tumhari yah rachna ki ab baat kare.....
bahot achha likha hai........ par yah sher muje sabse jyada pasand aaya.

Ser Ko Jhookaoo Gay To Pather Bhi Devta Ho Jaye Ga
Itna Mat Kisi Ko Chaho Wo Be Wafa Ho Jaye Ga

Jis Rah Per Bhi Gaye Thoker Hi Khai Ham Ney
Rastey Tak Hi Poohnchey Manzil Na Pai Ham Ney

hamesha khush raho.

[Pulkit_gupta]

Rani,

Bahut hi pyaara likha hai. Keep up the good work

[misnomer]

rani ji,
acha likha hai aapne!aur meenaji ke bare mein jo bhi kaha blkl theek kaha!unhon ne tho is parivaar ke sabhee logon ko apnee pyaar ki dorr se bandhe hue hain!aap yunhi likhtee rahiyega

[joe_arg261986]

joe_arg18@yahoo.co.in


Hi Rani kya baath hain kya sher likha hain aapne i m new in here.

Hi Rani
aap kab aayi.....aap kyon aayi
challo ab aa he gayi hain to boliye kya lengi?
chai,coffee,thanda ya kuch aur....

Hi Rani
aap kab aayi.....aap kyon aayi
challo ab aa he gayi hain to boliye kya lengi?
chai,coffee,thanda ya kuch aur....

[Rani]

Sub ka bout shukrai for liking the poem.

Meena toh itni achi dost hain ,tareef toh karni hai.Par kum ki hai.

Mohit ek cold coke ho jaye toh it would be gerat.

joe_arg261986 ty ,and welcome to the forum.

misnomer jee haan ,meena jee bohut achi dost hain.Unhon nai mujhe pm kiya ,even though I never did.Mai toh itni busy ho gayi thi.ke couldnt.Par she remembered me.

Pulkit_gupta thanks.

cold coke di ki gal karde yo ji
tuhaade layi coke di factiry haazir ae
par kaha par bhejni hai?????

[sanjoo]

Rani...waah bohot achhi gazal hai ye kissne likhii hai unka naam bhii bata do tau achha hogaa..bohot baar sunni hai...ap ki pasaandh achhi hai...good

[sushil_sagar]

century deeppink

Rani ji;
Main kya likhun mujhe jo bhi kahana tha sub aaki
dost meena ji ne bayan kar diya ..aap waqayi bahut acha likhati hain... main abhi is ke liye naya hoon...aur ummid karata hoon ki aap aise hi likh kar humari ummidon per khara utarengi...........
aapki her line mujhe achi lagi magar aap iatani uadas mat rahiye ..aap humain apani kalam se khush rakhiye aur hum aapko apane dosti ya labjon se khush rakhane ka prayas karenge............................
aap bhi aiye aur humko bhi bulate rahiye
dosti jurm nahi dost banate rahiye
aapaka
sushil sagar

[manoj kureel]

rani ji aap ne acha likha hai...koi shaq nahin...parantu aap ki nazm ka pehla mukhda aap ka nahin hai....yeh hamne pehle bhi kahin padh rakha hai...yeh poori gazal kuch yun hai...

sar jhukaaoge to patthar devataa ho jaayegaa
itanaa mat chaaho use wo be-wafaa ho jaayegaa

ham bhii dariyaa hain hame.n apanaa hunar maaluum hai
jis taraf bhii chal pa.De.nge raastaa ho jaayegaa

kitani sachchaai se mujhase zindagii ne kah diyaa
tuu nahin meraa to koi duusaraa ho jaayegaa

main Khudaa kaa naam le kar pii rahaa huun doston
zahar bhii is me agar hogaa davaa ho jaayegaa

ruuTh jaanaa to mohabbat kii alaamat hai magar
kyaa Khabar thii mujh se wo itanaa Khafaa ho jaayegaa


meri baat ka kripya bura mat maniyega.....

-MANOJ

[jitendra]

[jitendra]

hi rani
i m jitu from baroda.i like your shayri the most.
i want to be your friend. will u make friendship with me . if u r ready than mail me ..........




bye with favourable reply........