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29th April 2005, 12:43 PM
Doston, aaj mein apne bahut hi azeez teacher-cum-dost ki rachna aap sab ke liye layee hoon. I hope you all will appreciate it.
raah-e-ishq mein aana jaana nahi bhoole
woh inqalab ka nara, woh fasana nahi bhoole
hai dushman bada, taaqat badi, jang badi
aadat purani hai, hum kaam aana nahi bhoole
aashiyan lutta hai hamara har bahar mein
hum phir bhi khwabon ko sajana nahi bhoole
bas neend se jaagne ki deri hai warna
apne armaanon ko hum jagana nahi bhoole
hai aaj bhi wahi khoon taaza ragon mein
hum bhagat-o-bismil ka zamana nahi bhoole
hon sitam humpe taari har pal khudai ka
hum phir bhi khuda pe muskurana nahi bhoole
hain aankhein hamari beshak aasmaan ki taraf
zameen se magar apna dostana nahi bhoole
-Nadim Asrar
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
-NM
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29th April 2005, 09:00 PM
Wah Shalini ji... thanks for sharing the wonderful thought!
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29th April 2005, 10:36 PM
Hi Shalini Ji,
Yaqeenan bohot hi umda kalaam. Aapke teacher cum dost ko humari daad zaroor de.
Luvs,
Salim
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29th April 2005, 11:50 PM
Dear Parul and Salim,
Thanks for appreciating the post.
Aapki daad mere dost tak pahoch jayegi.
TC and keep Smiling!
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
-NM
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30th April 2005, 07:20 PM
raah-e-ishq mein aana jaana nahi bhoole
woh inqalab ka nara, woh fasana nahi bhoole
hai dushman bada, taaqat badi, jang badi
aadat purani hai, hum kaam aana nahi bhoole
Waaaahh... Kya umda socha hai.... Janab ko salaam!!
aashiyan lutta hai hamara har bahar mein
hum phir bhi khwabon ko sajana nahi bhoole
bas neend se jaagne ki deri hai warna
apne armaanon ko hum jagana nahi bhoole
Very Well Said.....
hai aaj bhi wahi khoon taaza ragon mein
hum bhagat-o-bismil ka zamana nahi bhoole
hon sitam humpe taari har pal khudai ka
hum phir bhi khuda pe muskurana nahi bhoole
Kyaa baat haii.... bahut khoob!!
hain aankhein hamari beshak aasmaan ki taraf
zameen se magar apna dostana nahi bhoole
Well Said!! Simply Loved these 2 lines!
Dear Shalini!!
Aapke Dost ki yeh rachna to pasand aayi hi, usse zyada to main unki soch ka kaayal ho gay hoon... bahut hi umda khayal...behad asardaar shadon me bayaan kiye hain.....Do give my wishes to him... Is behtreen rachna se milvaane ke liye dher saari daad tumhare naam..... hope to read u sooon 2.... TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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30th April 2005, 09:44 PM
Thanks Pulkit :-)
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
-NM
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Re: Hum Nahin Bhoole... -
1st May 2005, 10:32 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by anjaani awaaz
Doston, aaj mein apne bahut hi azeez teacher-cum-dost ki rachna aap sab ke liye layee hoon. I hope you all will appreciate it.
raah-e-ishq mein aana jaana nahi bhoole
woh inqalab ka nara, woh fasana nahi bhoole
hai dushman bada, taaqat badi, jang badi
aadat purani hai, hum kaam aana nahi bhoole
aashiyan lutta hai hamara har bahar mein
hum phir bhi khwabon ko sajana nahi bhoole
bas neend se jaagne ki deri hai warna
apne armaanon ko hum jagana nahi bhoole
hai aaj bhi wahi khoon taaza ragon mein
hum bhagat-o-bismil ka zamana nahi bhoole
hon sitam humpe taari har pal khudai ka
hum phir bhi khuda pe muskurana nahi bhoole
hain aankhein hamari beshak aasmaan ki taraf
zameen se magar apna dostana nahi bhoole
-Nadim Asrar
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priy shalini,
ek achhi rachna se parichit karwane k liye shukria....
khush raho...... jaldi hi tumhe bhi padhungi.........
di
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1st May 2005, 10:35 PM
Pyaari Di,
Bahut accha laga ki aapne is post ko pada. Aur mein aapki umeedon par jaldi hi khadi utroon, aur apni compose ki hui rachna se parichit karwayoon, bus yahi khwahish hai.
Thanks :-)
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
-NM
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Re: Hum Nahin Bhoole... -
3rd May 2005, 08:25 PM
hi Shalini,
wonderful....really very good...
Thanks for sharing this wonderful composition with us
Thanks
Rohin
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3rd May 2005, 11:07 PM
Thanks Rohin :-)
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
-NM
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Re: Hum Nahin Bhoole... -
4th May 2005, 12:32 PM
hon sitam humpe taari har pal khudai ka
hum phir bhi khuda pe muskurana nahi bhoole
shbad achhe hain..arth bhi achha laga....aur phir di jisse achha kahden uss ke liye phir jaada kuch kahen ki jaroorat nahi rahti...thnxx ...thnxx...4 sharing shalini!!
Take care
shalu
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5th May 2005, 12:06 AM
Hi Shalu Ji,
Thanks aapne ise pasand kiya. U r absolutely right, Di ko pasand aaya toh zyada kehne ki zaroorat hi nahin hai.
Anyways, thanks for appreciating it.
TC
Aapki Humnaam :-)
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
-NM
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21st May 2015, 09:51 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by anjaani awaaz
Doston, aaj mein apne bahut hi azeez teacher-cum-dost ki rachna aap sab ke liye layee hoon. I hope you all will appreciate it.
raah-e-ishq mein aana jaana nahi bhoole
woh inqalab ka nara, woh fasana nahi bhoole
hai dushman bada, taaqat badi, jang badi
aadat purani hai, hum kaam aana nahi bhoole
aashiyan lutta hai hamara har bahar mein
hum phir bhi khwabon ko sajana nahi bhoole
bas neend se jaagne ki deri hai warna
apne armaanon ko hum jagana nahi bhoole
hai aaj bhi wahi khoon taaza ragon mein
hum bhagat-o-bismil ka zamana nahi bhoole
hon sitam humpe taari har pal khudai ka
hum phir bhi khuda pe muskurana nahi bhoole
hain aankhein hamari beshak aasmaan ki taraf
zameen se magar apna dostana nahi bhoole
-Nadim Asrar
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wahhh kitni khoobsurat gazal hai....Shallu, bahut bahut shurkiya jo aapne etne khoobsurat nagine yahan chodey hue hai...taaki ham unko pad sake...khoobsurat gazal share karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. thoda sa waqt SDC ke liye nikaal liya karo.
pyar aur duaoN ke saath
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21st May 2015, 12:52 PM
Beautiful sharing......thanks Shalini.
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21st May 2015, 02:39 PM
lovely, keep up the good work...
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