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ek chhoti si htya.. - 10th May 2015, 10:42 PM
ek chhoti si htya..



jispe vilap nhi..

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ho udas man..

koi tok nhi..



ek choti si htya..



jispe soch nhi..

koi drd nhi..

ho jiska ilaz..

ubhre ghav ni..



ek chhoti si htya..



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koi nigah nhi..

ho upaye jiska..

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ek chhoti si htya..



apne man ki..

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koi nigah ni..

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ho udas man..

koi tok nhi..



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11th May 2015, 09:43 AM
bahot khoob ashok saahab.................. andar tak utar gaye aapke ehsaas....

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11th May 2015, 09:54 AM
aapki koshish bahut pasand aayi ashok jii..
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12th May 2015, 03:38 PM
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bahot khoob ashok saahab.................. andar tak utar gaye aapke ehsaas....

likhte rahiye

Shaad.....
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bahut bahut sukriya....................

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13th May 2015, 11:01 PM
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aapki koshish bahut pasand aayi ashok jii..
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14th May 2015, 09:50 AM
Ashok ji, aapke ehsaas hame pasand aaye aur ham aapki rachna meiN kahi baatoN ko samaj bhi gye, par agar en baatoN ko jara aur tafseel se kaha jaata to jayada behtar ho sakti thi rachna...yeh meri apni raaye hai.

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14th May 2015, 10:09 AM
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ek chhoti si htya..



jispe vilap nhi..

koi sok nhi..

ho udas man..

koi tok nhi..



ek choti si htya..



jispe soch nhi..

koi drd nhi..

ho jiska ilaz..

ubhre ghav ni..



ek chhoti si htya..



jispe afsos nhi..

koi nigah nhi..

ho upaye jiska..

koi fark nhi..



ek chhoti si htya..



apne man ki..

apne jamir ki..

apne viswas ki..

apne insaniyat ki..



magr..



koi nigah ni..

koi drd nhi..

ho udas man..

koi tok nhi..



ek chhoti si htya..

ek chhoti si htya.!?!



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17th May 2015, 11:04 PM
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Ashok ji, aapke ehsaas hame pasand aaye aur ham aapki rachna meiN kahi baatoN ko samaj bhi gye, par agar en baatoN ko jara aur tafseel se kaha jaata to jayada behtar ho sakti thi rachna...yeh meri apni raaye hai.

god bless u

ji sunita mam namskar....,
bahut bahut sukriya ji mujhe bhi lga ki kuch or sbd isme jode ja skte the lekin jis halat me mai ne is kavita ko likha sach kahu to us wqt mujhe koi sabd hi nhi mil paa rhe the..
kosis karunga ise or behtar roop de saku..
sujhao dene ke liye behad sukriya..

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