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YeH kYa Hua HaiN - 28th May 2015, 09:13 PM

Bechain dil ghumshuda hua hain
Kise khabhar hai yeh kya hua haiN

Kuch dost hasi udaa rahe haiN
Kuch keh rahe hai bura hua haiN

Main is baat par yaaron chup hooN
Jo hua manzoor-e-khudaa hua haiN

Waafiq se the sab chehre yaha par
Ek woh tha jo dil se juddaa hua haiN

Shikasht meri ho tumhe Mubarak
Yeh sab bas bewajaa hua haiN



बेचैन दिल घुमशुदा हुआ हैं
किसे खभर है यह क्या हुआ हैं

कुछ दोस्त हसी उड़ा रहे हैं
कुछ कह रहे है बुरा हुआ हैं

मैं इस बात पर यारों चुप हूँ
जो हुआ मंज़ूर-ए-खुदा हुआ हैं

वाफिक से थे सब चेहरे यहाँ पर
एक वह था जो दिल से जुदा हुआ हैं

शिकश्त मेरी हो तुम्हे मुबारक
यह सब तो बेवजा हुआ हैं



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Bechain dil ghumshuda hua hain
Kise khabhar hai yeh kya hua haiN

Kuch dost hasi udaa rahe haiN
Kuch keh rahe hai bura hua haiN

Main is baat par yaaron chup hooN
Jo hua manzoor-e-khudaa hua haiN

Waafiq se the sab chehre yaha par
Ek woh tha jo dil se juddaa hua haiN

Shikasht meri ho tumhe Mubarak
Yeh sab bas bewajaa hua haiN



बेचैन दिल घुमशुदा हुआ हैं
किसे खभर है यह क्या हुआ हैं

कुछ दोस्त हसी उड़ा रहे हैं
कुछ कह रहे है बुरा हुआ हैं

मैं इस बात पर यारों चुप हूँ
जो हुआ मंज़ूर-ए-खुदा हुआ हैं

वाफिक से थे सब चेहरे यहाँ पर
एक वह था जो दिल से जुदा हुआ हैं

शिकश्त मेरी हो तुम्हे मुबारक
यह सब तो बेवजा हुआ हैं
Mast bhai....bahut khoob gazal kahi aapne.
yeh sher behad khaas lga.

Kuch dost hasi udaa rahe haiN
Kuch keh rahe hai bura hua haiN

yu hi likhte rhiye, khush rhiye.

duaoN ke saath


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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Bechain dil ghumshuda hua hain
Kise khabhar hai yeh kya hua haiN

Kuch dost hasi udaa rahe haiN
Kuch keh rahe hai bura hua haiN

Main is baat par yaaron chup hooN
Jo hua manzoor-e-khudaa hua haiN

Waafiq se the sab chehre yaha par
Ek woh tha jo dil se juddaa hua haiN

Shikasht meri ho tumhe Mubarak
Yeh sab bas bewajaa hua haiN



बेचैन दिल घुमशुदा हुआ हैं
किसे खभर है यह क्या हुआ हैं

कुछ दोस्त हसी उड़ा रहे हैं
कुछ कह रहे है बुरा हुआ हैं

मैं इस बात पर यारों चुप हूँ
जो हुआ मंज़ूर-ए-खुदा हुआ हैं

वाफिक से थे सब चेहरे यहाँ पर
एक वह था जो दिल से जुदा हुआ हैं

शिकश्त मेरी हो तुम्हे मुबारक
यह सब तो बेवजा हुआ हैं


waaahhhhhhhhhhhh jnaaab kya abaat hai kyaa khoob ghazal huii hai ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai....... aapki ye ghazal itne rang samete hue ai ke bayaani ke baahar hai..... behad naazuq sii.... bahot aalaa...

Kuch dost hasi udaa rahe haiN
Kuch keh rahe hai bura hua haiN

Main is baat par yaaron chup hooN
Jo hua manzoor-e-khudaa hua haiN


ye sher to khoob hue hain.... likhte rahiyegaa....

Shaad.....


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bewafa mehboob se gila shikva aur judai ka dard , ye ab kuch byan kiya aapne apni is kalam meiN ,,

masla kuch aisa tha ki jor ka jhatka dheere se lage .. bahut kamal likha aapne .dheron daad kabool karein

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Bechain dil ghumshuda hua hain
Kise khabhar hai yeh kya hua haiN

Kuch dost hasi udaa rahe haiN
Kuch keh rahe hai bura hua haiN

Main is baat par yaaron chup hooN
Jo hua manzoor-e-khudaa hua haiN

Waafiq se the sab chehre yaha par
Ek woh tha jo dil se juddaa hua haiN

Shikasht meri ho tumhe Mubarak
Yeh sab bas bewajaa hua haiN



बेचैन दिल घुमशुदा हुआ हैं
किसे खभर है यह क्या हुआ हैं

कुछ दोस्त हसी उड़ा रहे हैं
कुछ कह रहे है बुरा हुआ हैं

मैं इस बात पर यारों चुप हूँ
जो हुआ मंज़ूर-ए-खुदा हुआ हैं

वाफिक से थे सब चेहरे यहाँ पर
एक वह था जो दिल से जुदा हुआ हैं

शिकश्त मेरी हो तुम्हे मुबारक
यह सब तो बेवजा हुआ हैं
Waaaaaaahh.!! Waaaah! Bahut khoob ghazal huyi hai mast ji...

कुछ दोस्त हसी उड़ा रहे हैं
कुछ कह रहे है बुरा हुआ हैं

मैं इस बात पर यारों चुप हूँ
जो हुआ मंज़ूर-ए-खुदा हुआ हैं

Pur asar ehsaas o andaz janaab.......

Likhte rahein..
khush rahein.....



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Bechain dil ghumshuda hua hain
Kise khabhar hai yeh kya hua haiN

Kuch dost hasi udaa rahe haiN
Kuch keh rahe hai bura hua haiN

Main is baat par yaaron chup hooN
Jo hua manzoor-e-khudaa hua haiN

Waafiq se the sab chehre yaha par
Ek woh tha jo dil se juddaa hua haiN

Shikasht meri ho tumhe Mubarak
Yeh sab bas bewajaa hua haiN



बेचैन दिल घुमशुदा हुआ हैं
किसे खभर है यह क्या हुआ हैं

कुछ दोस्त हसी उड़ा रहे हैं
कुछ कह रहे है बुरा हुआ हैं

मैं इस बात पर यारों चुप हूँ
जो हुआ मंज़ूर-ए-खुदा हुआ हैं

वाफिक से थे सब चेहरे यहाँ पर
एक वह था जो दिल से जुदा हुआ हैं

शिकश्त मेरी हो तुम्हे मुबारक
यह सब तो बेवजा हुआ हैं

kya baat hai mast bhai bahut khoob
duaon ke saath

radhe radhe


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Bahut khub likha hai aapne.. ghazal apni chap chhod rahi hai..
dad Kabul kareN aur likhate raheN

Akant...


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