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Jisko bhoole woh sada yaad aaya - 9th August 2008, 01:49 PM
Jo bhi dukh yaad na tha yaad aaya,
Aaj kya janiye kya yaad aaya,

Phir koi haath hai dil per jaise,
Phir tera ahad-e-wafa yaad aaya,

Jis tarah dhund mein lipte hue phool,
Ek ek naqsh tera yaad aaya,

Aisi majboori ke aalam mein koi,
Yaad aaya bhi to kya yaad aaya,

Yaad aaya tha bicherna tera,
Phir nahi yaad ke kya yaad aaya,

Jab koi zakham bhara daagh bana,
Jab koi bhool gaya yaad aaya,

Ye mohabbat bhi hai kya rog,
Jisko bhoole woh sada yaad aaya.


Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
MujH ko yaad aane waale tu hi koi raasta bata de.
   
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9th August 2008, 04:23 PM
I think something is missing in last couplet(maqta), Can anyone guess?

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9th August 2008, 06:41 PM
Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
MujH ko yaad aane waale tu hi koi raasta bata de.


bahat achha hai yeh lincs....
na kabhi dur hai hum unse na woh humare pass hai
mohabbat hain unse itna har pal unka hi eheshash hai


Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

Goodbye SDC

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Smile Shukriya Diya - 9th August 2008, 07:17 PM
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Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
MujH ko yaad aane waale tu hi koi raasta bata de.


bahat achha hai yeh lincs....
na kabhi dur hai hum unse na woh humare pass hai
mohabbat hain unse itna har pal unka hi eheshash hai



Bahot Shukriya... Diya... Aur Aap Ki Shayari Bhi Laa-Jawab Hoti Hai.

Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
MujH ko yaad aane waale tu hi koi raasta bata de.
   
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9th August 2008, 07:21 PM
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Bahot Shukriya... Diya... Aur Aap Ki Shayari Bhi Laa-Jawab Hoti Hai.
khus hue hum .......hum to sayar nehin janab bas kabhi kabhi mehefil main aajate hain....


Muje yaqiin to nahi magar yehi such hai...
k main tere waste umrein guzaar sakti hoon...
aisa nahi ke tujhe jit ne ki khwahish hai...
me tere wasate khood ko bhi haar sakti hoon..


Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

Goodbye SDC

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17th February 2009, 07:22 PM
dear very good keep it up....good........sharing....
saare ashar lajawaab...............

Jo bhi dukh yaad na tha yaad aaya,
Aaj kya janiye kya yaad aaya,

Phir koi haath hai dil per jaise,
Phir tera ahad-e-wafa yaad aaya,

Jis tarah dhund mein lipte hue phool,
Ek ek naqsh tera yaad aaya,

Aisi majboori ke aalam mein koi,
Yaad aaya bhi to kya yaad aaya,

Yaad aaya tha bicherna tera,
Phir nahi yaad ke kya yaad aaya,

Jab koi zakham bhara daagh bana,
Jab koi bhool gaya yaad aaya,

Ye mohabbat bhi hai kya rog,
Jisko bhoole woh sada yaad aaya.


very good...bohat khoob.


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27th April 2009, 12:28 AM
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I think something is missing in last couplet(maqta), Can anyone guess?

Mayank

.................... .kya missing hai???....may be shayer ka naam............hmmmm.....no idea....aap hi bata dijiye..........


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