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21st December 2004, 07:05 PM
WOH MAUSAM WOH BAHAR BHI USKE SAMNE KAM THI,
USKE SAATH GUZARA WO WAQT WO FIZA BHI KAM THI, PAR KYA KARE AE ZALIM APNE HAATHO MEIN, MOHABBAT KI LAKEER HI KAM THI. |
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21st December 2004, 07:27 PM
Wah Priyanka ji acha hai. Magar aapki shayri ka jawab jaroor likhonga.
Hai jaan mein jab tak jaan Toh yeh saasein chalengi hi, Seene mein jab tak hai dil, To yeh dil dhadke ga hi, Tere liye mera pyaar rahega Qayamat ke baad bhi |
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21st December 2004, 09:12 PM
hey priyanka,
now i'm use to praising u.... No doubt the shayri is too touchy... aur mein kya kahu.... Bas ek baat kehna chahta hu..... Mohabbat khud likh ti hai lakeere hathon ki.... Mohabbat mein to khuda bhi saath deta hai... Toh in do-teen lakeero ka kya sooch te ho.... We have one life to live...so go get all ur dreams..... bye take care..... : : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : : Listen to your mind...but follow your heart. "Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain." ---------------------------------------------- : : Yogesh : : |
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22nd December 2004, 12:27 AM
Hi priyankaji ,
Lakirowali baat mat karo, Fakirowaali baat mat karo, Ham apni takdir khud banate hai, Apni mahobbat ko anjam dena hame aatta hai, Jink haatho mai pyaarwaali lakir nahi, unhe ham ye shikhaate hai. Tamannaon mai bhi tume yaad kiya karenge, Ye zindagi teri hi yaad mai is tarah jiyaa karenge, Jab bhatak jaaye tu kahi andhero mai, Ye dil jalaa k teri raho ko roshan kiya karenge. |
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22nd December 2004, 10:58 PM
hi priyanka ji
well bahut hi khoob haathon ki rekha hi to hai jo kam hai sonal |
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23rd December 2004, 07:17 PM
hey rohin ,
first of all welcome in my thread....... and then thanks for praising..... the sher quoted by u was also too touching but even i would love to reply to urs..... to suniye rohin ji, badi aasani se dil lagaye jaate hai, badi mushkil se waade nibhaye jaate hai, le jaati hai mohabbat un raho par, jahan diye nahi dil jalaye jaate hai..... |
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23rd December 2004, 07:29 PM
hey i agree with u yash that we have one life and that to cherish.......
ya we should live it to its fullest but in this i would like to give u one suggestion .l.... dont search love,let love find u, thats why its called falling in love because u dont force urself to fall , you just fall and there will be someone to catch you.... |
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23rd December 2004, 07:31 PM
Wah priyanka ji agar yunhi silsila barkarar rakha jaaye toh kya baat hai kya khayal hai aapka???
Toh aapke sher se mujhe ek geet yaad aata hai.... Diye jalte hain phool khilte hain.......Khair mera jawab yeh nahi magar yeh sher hai jo mein likh raha hoon Dil hi toh hai, Phitrat hai iski pyaar karna, Hai is dil ka kya kasoor Agar mohabaat ko tha isse thukrana Wadah nibhana mushkil hai Magar nibhana na mumkin nahi Agar ho mohabbat sacchi Toh wade nibhana mushkil nahi Rah par kadam humare Toh mohabat ka kya kasoor Agar dikhte hain humein sirf katein Toh un phoolon ka kya kasoor Dil jaltatein hain woh log jinke dil pathar ke hote hain Hai magar humari mohabbat mein woh dum Ki pathar ko bhi peeghla de Thanks Rohin |
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23rd December 2004, 07:35 PM
well acharya ji,
lajawaab tha aapka sher lijiye aapke jawab mein ek aur pesh hai.... RISHTA ULFAT KA YUN NIBHAYA JATA HAI, ASHQ PEEKAR BHI MUSKURAYA JAATA HAI, AISE BHI MOD AATE HAI MOHABBAT MEIN, KISIKE KHATIR KHUDKO MITAYA JAATA HAI.... |
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23rd December 2004, 07:46 PM
well rohin ji
aapse yeh silsila barkaaar rakhne mein maza aayega.... lijiye agla sher.... suniye.... HAR DHADKAN MEIN EK RAAZ HOTA HAI, BAAT KO BATANE KA EK ANDAAZ HOTA HAI, JAB TAK THOKAR NA LAGE BEWAFAI KI, HAR KISIKO APNE PYAAR PAR NAAZ HOTA HAI.... kaisa laga.... |
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23rd December 2004, 07:48 PM
hi sonal,
shukriya pasand karne ke liye...... |
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23rd December 2004, 07:55 PM
I never regret things in life and if i love some one i love them all my life.....any ways a reply to ur sher
Mohabbat ki hai humne Koi vyapar nahi Humne dil diya tha jab toh badle mein kuch manga nahi Rahein bus khush pyaar humara Hai humeesha dua yehi ki Bayan karoon haal-e-dil, mein ek shayar to nahi Magar kehte hain log humein Ki nashe mein hote hain hum jab toh hum kissi galib se kum nahi Thanks Rohin |
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25th December 2004, 11:28 AM
dear priyanka ji
ek baat batana chahunga pehli baat to ye ki aapka ye sher hume bahut pasand aaya dusri baat ye ki - haato ki lakeeron pe kabhi bharosa mat karna kyuki taqdeer to unki bhi hoti hai jinke haath nahi hote bura mat maaniyega bas apna nazariya pesh kar raha hu I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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25th December 2004, 06:31 PM
HI ROHINJI,
ISI HEADING KE TAHAT EK AUR SHER PESH KARNE KI IZAAZAT CHUNGI.... BADIMUDDAT SE CHAHA HAI TUJHE, BADI DUAAO SE PAAYA HAI TUJHE, TUJHE BHOOLNE KI SOCHU BHI KAISE, KISMAT KI LAKEERO SE CHURAYA HAI TUJHE.. |
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25th December 2004, 06:34 PM
HI DARD....
JI HAAN AAPNE BAHUT SACH KAHA HAI AUR US BAAT KA DHYAAN DILAYA HAI JO MEIN BHOOL HI GAYI THI..... THANKS FOR THE THOUGHT... |
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27th December 2004, 06:50 PM
hi priyanka,
bura na maano to ek baat kehti hoon... HAATH KI LAKEERON PAR MAT JAA, TAKDEER TO UNKI BHI HOTI HAI JINKE HAATH NAHI HOTE... but anywayz i loved wat u wrote...keep writing... Luv Janki |
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28th December 2004, 09:16 AM
Hi Priyanka,
Aap ke sub sheer bahut pasand aaye. Hat ki lakeeron par eek sheer humain bhi yaad aata hai. Arz hai ki..... Janee kya likha hai us Rub ne apne kismat par, roz hathon ko dekh kar unee parne ke koshish karthe hai. and Khudi ki hasti ko kar buland itna ki har taqdeer se pehle khuda bande se pooche.. "Bool teri raza kya hai" Haat ki lakeeren bus disha dikhate hain ..... manzil nahin Vaaiz |
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28th December 2004, 06:16 PM
hi dil ka rishta,
well i agree to what u say....and dardji has had same view.... well thanks ki aapko pasand aaya aur aapne reply kiya shukriya.. |
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28th December 2004, 06:19 PM
hey vaaiz,
aapka swagat.... well lijiye aapke liye agla sher.. har raste ka mukaam nahi hota, dil ke rishto ka naam nahi hota, khoja hai aapko hath ki lakeero mein, kyonki aap jaisa dost hamare liye aam nahi hota.. |
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29th December 2004, 08:57 AM
Priyanka ji,
Woh dil jismain khalish naa ho Woh kashti jiska sahil naa ho doob jate hain zindagi ke bhanwar main har Woh raste kinki koi manzil na ho "Zindagi zindadili ka naam hai, murda dil kya khaak jiya karte hain" Aur dost par chacha Galib kehte hain "dost Gam_Khvaarii me.n merii sa_ii farmaaye.nge kyaa zaKhm ke bharane talak naaKhuun na ba.Dh jaaye.nge kyaa" Aache doost dil main hoote hain haathon main nahin. Vaaiz |
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29th December 2004, 04:55 PM
Hi Priyanka,
sorry for being late on this one Ek Phakir keh raha hai sun le aey majnu Kismat se na tu dar pyaare badal legi duniya chal apni ho dil mein tere hosla pyaare Thanks Rohin Quote:
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29th December 2004, 05:05 PM
aadab vaaizji aur rohinji,
well aap dono kaise hai... koi baat nahi rohin ji der hi sahi par jawab to diya.... well kaafi acha likha hai aapne... ok now for oth of u one quote on friendship u must have read this but once again, DUA KARTE AI HUM SAR JHUKAYE, AE DOST TU APNI MANZIL KO PAAYE, AGAR TERI RAAHO MEIN KABHI ANDHERA AAYE .... TO ROSHNI KE LIYE KHUDA HUME JALAYE.. |
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29th December 2004, 05:26 PM
Hi Priyankaji,
a poem i shall quote here from my own thread "yaad aate hain woh lamhe beetgaye jo haste gaate yaaron ka tha saath humesha uchalna kudna masti karna na koi chinta thi na koi pareshaani lagta tha hai sab apna yeh dharti aur yeh amber uncha barish ki woh rimjhim boondein aur unmein terti kagaz ki nauein Woh khil khilati masoom se hassi Doston ki woh toli shararaton ki thi potli Chachi ka humein woh datna Aur humara usse sata kar bhag jaana Raaton ko woh taaron ko takna Chand ko apni muthi mein qaid karne ki koshish karna Laut jaaon uss bachpan mein yehi khayal aata hai har din" Hope u like it Thanks Rohin |
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30th December 2004, 08:50 AM
Priyanka ji,
Dostoon ki baat chali hai to eek baat yaad aayi hai "Kar ke deekh dooston pe aaitbaar, phir deekh tere bhi peeth par cHura aayega" Eek sheer aur aarz hai isi rishte par... "haTaaye the jo raah se dosto.n kii vo patthar mere ghar me.n aane lage hai.n" Dost aaj kar kitaabon main hi reh gaye hain!!! Vaaiz |
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30th December 2004, 06:24 PM
HELLO VAIZ AUR ROHIN JI,
MAAFI CHAHTI HUN AAJ ZARA JALDI MEIN HUN TO AAPKO REPLY NAHI DE PAAUNGI PAR NEXT TIME PAKKA JAWAB KI UMEED RAKHIYEGA.... AAP MAT BHOOL JANA HUME ....] HAPPY NEW YEAR TO BOTH OF U.... |
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30th December 2004, 06:46 PM
Hi Priyankaji,
no Problems. Maybe some other time. Happy new year to you too. Take care and god bless you. bye Rohin |
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12th January 2005, 05:23 PM
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AAP SE HUM KYA KAHEE...... YAAD RAHEGA WOH THREAD HUMESHA HUME...... WOH PYAARE SHHER WOH SONDER NAGME... SHUKRIYA KABUL KIJIYE "ROHINJI" .."PRIYANKA" KA... KYNKI AAPNE APNE SHABDHO KO BASAYA HAI HUMARE DIL MEIN.... BYE |
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12th January 2005, 05:28 PM
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SORRY FOR LATE REPLY...... LIJIYE AAPKE LIYE.... AAPKA SHER PADHEKE VAIZ JI YUN LAGATA HAI...... DOSTI PAR AAPKA VISHWAAS DAGMAGAANE LAGA HAI... YUN NA SOCHA KARO KYONKI... DOSTI WOH TARA HAI JO DIN MEIN BHI TIMTIMATA HAI BELIEVE IN FRIENDSHIP IT IS THE GREATEST GIFT FROM GOD TO US.... |
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12th January 2005, 06:45 PM
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Chalo hum nahi humare shabd hi aap ke dil mein bas gayein hain ....lol Ummed hai yaad rahega aur aap mere naye thread ka hissa bhi banengi..Vaise soch raha tha aapki koi farmaish ho to usse poora kar doon. .. Isliye bataye kaisa kalam padna chhengi aap? Aap ke jawab ka intezar rahega Thanks rohin |
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