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26th August 2015, 08:48 AM
Aurat ka darjah Humanity mei.N aur Insaniyat mei.N sub se baala ter hai aur koii ise jhuTla nahi.N sakta. Aurat per ik Nazam likhi hai, Ummeed hai aap ko pasand aaegi
Yeh aurat woh paheli hai jo jaani hai na jane.Nge Hazaaro.N gham yeh sehti hai Magar haNsti hi rehti hai Zamane ki isey parvah Sabhi log is se la parvah Hai aurat zaat hi aesi Na jeeti hai na marti hai Magar hai baala ter sub se Yeh mana hai na mane.Nge Yeh aurat woh paheli hai jo jaani hai na jane.Nge Kabhi Maryam kabhi Seeta Kabhi Qura.N kabhi Geeta Kabhi Sheeri.N kabhi Heera Kabhi Laila kabhi Meera Kabhi biwi kabhi Maa.N hai Kisi ka dil hai aur Jaa.N hai Sabhi ka yeh sahara hai PhaNsi kashti ka toofa.N mai.N Yehi tou ik kinara hai Yeh sub ki raah takti hai Mohabbat ko tarasti hai Magar aakhir tou aurat hai Sisakti hai bilakti hai Yeh ik aesa moamma hai Na samjha hai na samjhe.N ge Yeh aurat woh paheli hai jo jaani hai na jane.Nge Ise parvah nahi.N apni Magar sehti hai gham sub ke Gharasti ki khooshi khatir Magar rehti hai yeh dub ke Yeh sub ke saath haNsti hai Yeh sub ke saath roti hai Jub ghar mei.N sub hei.N so jate Tou jaa ker phir yeh soti hai Ajab iski lagan dekhi Ajab iska chalan dekha Magar yeh mard na shukre Na samjhe hei.N na samjhe.Nge Yeh aurat woh paheli hai jo jaani hai na jane.Nge Mili khushiya.N zamaane ki Tou sub mei.N baa.NT deti hai Jo gham ki raat aaii tou Akele kaa.NT deti hai Yehi iska badappan hai Yehi tou iski azmat hai Koii mane ya na mane Yeh sirf aurat ki taqat hai Ke dunya is se qayem hai Tabhi tou lafz-e-dunya bhi Muzakkar nahi.N moannas hai Magar mardo.N ki hut hai yeh Na mana hai na mane.Nge Yeh aurat woh paheli hai jo jaani hai na jane.Nge Fakhri |
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26th August 2015, 08:58 AM
Mili khushiya.N zamaane ki
Tou sub mei.N baa.NT deti hai Jo gham ki raat aaii tou Akele kaa.NT deti hai Yehi iska badappan hai Yehi tou iski azmat hai Koii mane ya na mane Yeh sirf aurat ki taqat hai Ke dunya is se qayem hai Tabhi tou lafz-e-dunya bhi Muzakkar nahi.N moannas hai Magar mardo.N ki hut hai yeh Na mana hai na mane.Nge Yeh aurat woh paheli hai jo jaani hai na jane.Nge Waaaah!! Fakhri ji...aap har baar kuch naye khayaal lekar aate hain.....aur aaj jo aurat ki zindgi uske jazbe ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai....padhte padhte meri ankhein nam ho gayi..... Ye akhiri lines me poori nazm ka nichod ho jaise......aapne itni achchi nazm likhi us par daad aur itni gahrai se jo uske jeevan k bare me socha....us sanvedansheelta ko salaam... Rep+++ added..... Khush rahein... Likhte rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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26th August 2015, 09:46 AM
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Fakhri jiiii................aapke vichaar pad kar dil ko behad sakoon mila, Aurat ke liye aapke dil mein jo maan-sanmaan hai, uske liye ham aapke shukarguzaar hai. sahi mein aurat har roop mein mahaan hai...chaahe wo maa ho, behan ho, beti ho, premika ho, dost ho, patni ho...aurat apne bare mein sabse baad sochti hai, pehle apne se judey rishtoN ke bare mein sochti hai...poori zindgi uski esi mein nikal jaati hai....dil se pasand aaye aapki yeh rachna. yeh khoobsurat ehsaas reps ponits ke haqdaar hai. reps +++ added  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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26th August 2015, 02:29 PM
Bohut khoobsoorat ehsaas fakhri ji.
auraton ke prati aapke mann mein izzat dekh kar khushi hui. yunhi likhte rahen. Sarika |
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26th August 2015, 03:12 PM
Fakhri saheb lajwaab h aapki rachna
shastro me likha h his ghar naari ka sammaan hota vahan devta vaas karte h kahte sabhi dharmadhikaari is baat ko par maanta koi nahi khud kahne waale hi nahi maante is samaaj me har bandish naari ke liye h. achha laga aapke vichaar padke khaali likhe. Nahi jeevan me utaar bhi le to Anand aa jaayega jeevan swarg ho jaayega. radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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26th August 2015, 07:19 PM
Sarikaji, Madhuji aur Sunitaji - Mujhe behad khushi hui ke aap sub ne meri tehrir ko saraha aur pasand kiya. Aurat ki mahanta bayan nahi.N ki jaa sakti. Woh in sub se ooper hai.Isi tarah himmat afzaii karte rahei.N
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27th August 2015, 08:39 AM
khoobsurtee se pesh kiyaa hai aapne surate haal ek aurat ke lihaaz se.....
har ek lafz aapkaa sacchaai ko bayaan karta hai aur aurat ki keemat bataa raha hai..... bahut si daad pesh hain aapko is ummdah takreer ke liye..... likhte rahen.... duaa me yaad rakkhen.... Shaad.... |
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