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29th December 2010, 10:27 PM
Doston haazir huaa hoon apne ek pichle likhe hue kalaaam ke saath, jo ki bahot pahle likha gaya tha aur thoda modification kiya huaa hai.. Sharaab ka aur dard ka jo rishta hai use bayaaaN karne ki koshish ki gai hai samaat farmaaiyega aur apni beshkeeemti raay se nawaaziyega...
Aaj roko mat mujhe ki peena chahta hoon ik jaam,
Ye maikashi hai dile-naakaam kii barbaadi ke naam.
Fikar nahii ke ho jaaunga main Qaafir, ise peete hii,
Ise muh lagate hi ho jaeenge mere sare dard tamam.
Karke bismillah tere naam se, kho jaaun kuch aise,
Jahaan tu hii meri subhaa ho aur tu hii meri shaam.
Yaa khudaa mere ashqon ki barsaat Giraana wahan,
Un be-qadaron ko bhii pahuche mere dard ka payaam.
Piyoon to buraai, naa piyoon to Haaye darde-judaai,
Dard ki Shiddat Rab ne badhaai, karke sharab haraam.
Par yahi soch ke bewafa,main peeta nahi hoon jaam,
Bekhudi me kahiin tujhe main,kar hi naa doon badnaam.
In aankhon ki nami ko dil se lagaa rakhnaa hameshaa,
yahi milaa hai "shaad" tujhe,terii muhabbat kaa inaam.
shaad...
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30th December 2010, 09:39 AM
wah wah, shaad bhai dard aur jaam ek saath, bahut khoob..........dono ek-doosre se bahut nazdik ka rishta hai.
chalkayeN jaam aayie aapki aankoN ke naam,
hontho ke naam.....................................
likhtey rahiye.....jaam chalkate rahiye
diii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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30th December 2010, 04:00 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
wah wah, shaad bhai dard aur jaam ek saath, bahut khoob..........dono ek-doosre se bahut nazdik ka rishta hai.
chalkayeN jaam aayie aapki aankoN ke naam,
hontho ke naam.....................................
likhtey rahiye.....jaam chalkate rahiye
diii
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Behad shukriya baaji , jo aapne is baar bhi nacheez ka saath diya hai.. aapko acche lage jazbaat jaankar accha laga .. wese aapka kahna sach hai sharaab aur dard ka nata bahot puranaa hai.. shukriya ek baar fir.. aati rahen,
shaad...
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30th December 2010, 05:28 PM
Shaad bhaa'ii:
La-jawaab! mazaa aa gayaa!
daad hi daad dil se..! yuuNhi liKhate rahiye aage bhee
KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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Aala Boht Aala! -
30th December 2010, 07:35 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Aaj roko mat mujhe ki peena chahta hoon ik jaam,
Ye maikashi hai dile-naakaam kii barbaadi ke naam.
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Yaa khudaa mere ashqon ki barsaat Giraana wahan,
Un be-qadaron ko bhii pahuche mere dard ka payaam.
Piyoon to buraai, naa piyoon to Haaye darde-judaai,
Dard ki Shiddat Rab ne badhaai, karke sharab haraam.
Par yahi soch ke bewafa,main peeta nahi hoon jaam,
Bekhudi me kahiin tujhe main,kar hi naa doon badnaam.
In aankhon ki nami ko dil se lagaa rakhnaa hameshaa,
yahi milaa hai "shaad" tujhe,terii muhabbat kaa inaam.
shaad...
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Adaab Janaab Shaad Sahab,
Gem absolute gem! Dilkash bohat dilkash! Satar-satar ek apne aap mein mukammal kahani bayaan ker rahi hai! Lutf boht lutf aaya perh ker aapka ye muaainon ki gehrai se bharpoor kalaam! Boht shukriya nawazish ka! Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein!
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30th December 2010, 10:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Shaad bhaa'ii:
La-jawaab! mazaa aa gayaa!
daad hi daad dil se..! yuuNhi liKhate rahiye aage bhee
KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Behad shukriya Dhaval bhai jo aapne is mahfil me bhi shirqat farmaai.. aapko accha laga jaankar intehaai khushi naseeb hui hai.. Guzaarish hai ki yoonhi aamad banaae rakhen.. khush rahen.
shaad...
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30th December 2010, 10:58 PM
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Adaab Janaab Shaad Sahab,
Gem absolute gem! Dilkash bohat dilkash! Satar-satar ek apne aap mein mukammal kahani bayaan ker rahi hai! Lutf boht lutf aaya perh ker aapka ye muaainon ki gehrai se bharpoor kalaam! Boht shukriya nawazish ka! Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein!
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Bhai aapke reply padhta hoon to yakeen janiye ki gumaan hota hai ki koi aisa bhi hai jo is kalaam ko meri nazar se dekhtaa hai... behad khushi hui jo aaap Hum-khayaal hue.. hausla aafzaaai ka shukriya.. yoonhi aate raha karen.. khush rahen..
shaad...
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22nd July 2013, 08:27 PM
Wah sameer ji , aap toh matlab dil kho bha gaye yaar aaj. daad haazir hai aapki is kalam ke liye. Kubool kijeeyega
Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
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23rd July 2013, 05:11 PM
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Wah sameer ji , aap toh matlab dil kho bha gaye yaar aaj. daad haazir hai aapki is kalam ke liye. Kubool kijeeyega
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Zarra nawaazi hai aaapki saahab....... meri khushnaseebi jo apko ye adna si koshish pasand aa saki..... shukriyaa.
Shaad......
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14th September 2013, 05:39 PM
ye soch ke main sharaab nahin peeta kee kitna piyunga,
Har ghoont pe aayegi teri yaad, itna piyunga to kitna jiyunga....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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14th September 2013, 05:40 PM
aapki shayri padkar kuch lines mere zehan mein aayin...bahut sundar likha hai aapne..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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21st September 2013, 06:28 PM
Shaad Sahaab Aadaab....!
WaaH janab waaH kia kahne waaH bahut khoob badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai janab.... behad khoobsurat aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...
Sabhi ashaar behad umdaa rahe... Is umdaa kalaam par meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khdua Hafez...
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