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23rd February 2004, 09:12 PM
Dil ki gehrayion se chaha tha tumhe
zehen ki unchayion se saraha tha tumhe; Lagti thi tum chaand ki tarah suraj ki ujjawal kirnon ki tarah; Tanhai mein bhi sochte the' tumko bheed mein bhi khojte the' tumhi ko; Tumhare siva kisi ka khayal na tha aur kisi rishtey ka sawaal hi na tha; Tum 'bewafa' nikloge kabhi socha na tha majhdhaar mein soch doge kabhi socha na tha; Socha to ye tha maana to ye tha; ki kabhi pyaar na karenge hum kisi pe bhi aetbaar na karenge hum; Dil ko patthar bana liya tha tumhari yaadon ka pehra bitha liya tha; tanha hi jee lete hum ashkon ko yuhin pee lete hum; par..... KYUN main ek bewafa ke liye kisi ki wafa ko salaam na karoon; KYUN main tum jaiso ke liye apne dukhon ko qurbaan na karoon; KYUN jiyun main yun tanha jab tum 'JEE' rahi ho har lamha; KYUN main deewanon sa chahoon tumhe jab mera khayal bhi nahi hai tumhe; HAAN...main kabhi tumse pyaar karta tha jee-jaan tumpe nisaar karta tha; par aaj se main tumhe yaad na karoonga kabhi milne ki fariyaad na karoonga; Apni bewafaayi to shaayad bhool bhi jaoge par meri wafa ko kabhi na bhula paaooge; Tumhe to ek din bhool jaoonga main par hamesha TUMHE yaad aaoonga MAIN.....  |
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25th February 2004, 12:01 PM
main bata nahi sakta aap ne kitna acha likha hain.
sach much dil ko bha gai aap ki ye lines kee it up and go on writing 4 the laden(broken) hearts Love_shoaib |
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25th February 2004, 08:58 PM
hello shoaibji.....thank you so much for appreciating me...i had written it with the intention that may be the DEVDAS's out there will quit being so and live their lives to the fullest....thanx a lot once again....take care...bye 4 now
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25th February 2004, 09:15 PM
very well said!!!!2 good
chalte chalte zindagi me rukna nahi Haste rehna kabhi roona nahi Ayengi rahoon mein musibatein toh pheche hatna nahi Iisi ka naam zindagi tum kabhi isse muh modna nahi Tum mein woh jasba hai ussey kabhi khona nahi Rehna isi tarah kabhi badal na nahi Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th February 2004, 08:28 PM
thankyou so much mausamji....thanks a lot...bye 4 now!
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27th February 2004, 11:56 AM
Tumhe to ek din bhool jaoonga main
par hamesha TUMHE yaad aaoonga MAIN Shivani ji kaisi hai aap??? aaj 1st time aap ko padha,,,aur behad acha laga....bahoot khoob likha hai aapne....saral aur meaningfull....antim line to dil mein ghar kar gayi.....hamari daad kubool kijiye,,aur aise hi khoobsurati se likhte rahiye.....aap ke kalaam ka sada intezaar rahega....apna kahayl rakhiye. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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27th February 2004, 12:31 PM
Hi $hivani!
The post is gud. but plz kindly tell me.. how does it help the guyz with broken hearts  . Jsut kiddin.. Keep writin.Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th February 2004, 08:38 PM
hi manoj ji.....yakeen maaniye hamein aaj bahut khushi hui ki hamari koi baat aapke dil ko choo gayi....aapka bahut bahut shukriya....take care....KEEP SMILING....bye 4 now...hope 2 hear from u soon....
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27th February 2004, 08:42 PM
hello punitji.....in lines ko phir se padiye...shaayad aap samajh paaye ki hum kya kehna chahte hain....thanx a lot 4 replying....
KYUN main ek bewafa ke liye kisi ki wafa ko salaam na karoon; KYUN main tum jaiso ke liye apne dukhon ko qurbaan na karoon; KYUN jiyun main yun tanha jab tum 'JEE' rahi ho har lamha; KYUN main deewanon sa chahoon tumhe jab mera khayal bhi nahi hai tumhe; HAAN...main kabhi tumse pyaar karta tha jee-jaan tumpe nisaar karta tha; par aaj se main tumhe yaad na karoonga kabhi milne ki fariyaad na karoonga; Apni bewafaayi to shaayad bhool bhi jaoge par meri wafa ko kabhi na bhula paaooge; Tumhe to ek din bhool jaoonga main par hamesha TUMHE yaad aaoonga MAIN..... do reply....... |
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I think u were addressing me over here. Vaise yaar, mera naam 'Pulkit' hai. I had understood what u wanted to say, was just kiddin as I usally do... Don't mind... Nobody else on this site does... Neways Do keep writing........... Take Care Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th February 2004, 07:54 PM
i'm sorry pulkitji....i am so sorry....ya i was addressing u there...and of course i didnt mind that....humour is very essential u know......
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1st March 2004, 10:37 AM
Hi again $hivani!
U r right, humour is a very eseetial part of life.. but as evrybody on this site knows, how serious I hav always been & takin care of the minute details 2... see I always took care of the '$' sign in ur ID....pretty meticulous of me.. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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1st March 2004, 12:40 PM
Hi $hivani, Kem chhe ?
Really nice work u've done... Aapni gujarati bhashama kahoo.N to... saral shabdo ma sundar rajooaat.. I really like it.... par jab sachche dil se dosti yaa pyaar kiyaa jaata he tab us bewafa dost ya sanam ko chah ke bhi bhulaayaa nahi.n jaata..... ek gaana he jo mujhe behad pasand he.... "achchha silaa diyaa tune mere pyaar ka, yaar ne hi loot liya ghar yaar ka... ashko ki mala mere gale pahenaa ke, khoosh he vo ghar kisi aur ka bahaa ke... kar diyaa khoon dekho mere etbaar ka... yaar ne hi loot liyaa ghar yaar ka.... " I hope you know this song... yaad aa gayaa to likh diyaa... well, aavu j sundar lakhtaa rahesho... take care.... may god bless you... ---------------------------------------------- Ye alfaz he dard e dil ke, aur kuch nahi.n Ye ghaav he zindagee ke, aur kuch nahi.n ---------------------------------------------- |
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1st March 2004, 09:49 PM
hello pulkitji.....ya i noticed the way you had written my name...thats cool u know....
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1st March 2004, 09:51 PM
hello rakshit ji....thanx a lot for appreciating...and ur gujju is fab better than mine act i am not a gujrati...i speak hindi only but i do understand it and can speak although not that well....thanx a lot once again...bye 4 now...take care
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2nd March 2004, 04:41 PM
You r most welcome $hivani
actually I've seen ur location @ BARODA, that's y I was thinking that u might be gujju.... Any way... sorry for that... I'll take care next time.. You just keep writing..... may god bless you... bye bye.. ---------------------------------------------- Ye alfaz he dard e dil ke, aur kuch nahi.n Ye ghaav he zindagee ke, aur kuch nahi.n ---------------------------------------------- |
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$hivani -
3rd March 2004, 10:47 AM
hi $hivani,
its nice to read ur shayri.i like it u have written it well.i am a new one in this wonderful world and thats alo have become possible bcoz of my best friend bela.she registered me.i like ur shayri .plz write more and more.mein bhi broken heart guys mein se hi hun with love and best wishes devraj |
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3rd March 2004, 12:43 PM
hi dev.............!
dont say like this......  u dont have any broken heart..........forget all ....... n listen friend i m with u na.............? soooo...............plz dont hurt......ok n shivani...............! u did really a great job............n u know dev also said it sooo............its really. really...............! take care friend..... keep writing....bye. |
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3rd March 2004, 03:32 PM
Hi shivani
Its really beautiful. Dil kay parr ho gaya. Dil ko patthar bana liya tha tumhari yaadon ka pehra bitha liya tha; tanha hi jee lete hum ashkon ko yuhin pee lete hum; par..... KYUN main ek bewafa ke liye kisi ki wafa ko salaam na karoon; KYUN main tum jaiso ke liye apne dukhon ko qurbaan na karoon; KYUN jiyun main yun tanha jab tum 'JEE' rahi ho har lamha; KYUN main deewanon sa chahoon tumhe jab mera khayal bhi nahi hai tumhe; HAAN...main kabhi tumse pyaar karta tha jee-jaan tumpe nisaar karta tha; par aaj se main tumhe yaad na karoonga kabhi milne ki fariyaad na karoonga; Beautiful…………. Keep eritting & keep smiling. So keep smiling ----------------------------------------------- Youn nafrat bhari nigahon sey na dekh humein, Kahin dil-e-nadaan in adaaon ko mohabbat na samajh bethey bikash |
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3rd March 2004, 03:45 PM
$hivani ji,
kya khub kaha hai aapne... Tumhe to ek din bhool jaoonga main par hamesha TUMHE yaad aaoonga MAIN.. dil ko chhu gayi yah line aapki..esi se milta hua ek sher maine kabhi likha tha..aapko najar kerta hoon... apane hi hatho se maine unka daman chhuda diya kerke aazad unhe hamesha ke liye dil mein basa liya... likhati rahiye..aur khush rahiye, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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3rd March 2004, 09:10 PM
hi devrajji..welcome here...its really a very nice place,even i am new here i mean not compared to u but still.......thanx a lot and i'm glad u liked it and hope u've got the real message from it and as far as u being alone is concerned then i am telling u that in this place u will never be alone and plus u have such a nice and supportive friend here-bela.....that was a very nice of her to introduce u to this site....hope u love it here....and thanx a lot once again...bye 4 now...take care!
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3rd March 2004, 09:13 PM
hello belaji...thanx a lot for appreciating my composition....and i must say u must be a really good friend.....with friends like u world is a far better place 2 live in and life is more easy......thanx a lot once again....bye 4 now....take care!
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3rd March 2004, 09:16 PM
thank you so much priyamitraji....i'm glad u liked it...i just made an attempt to bring some relief to the broken hearts hope it has helped atleast one person.....thanx a lot once again....bye 4 now!....take care!
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3rd March 2004, 09:19 PM
hello akantji....thanx a lot....and this is wonderful....too good....
apane hi hatho se maine unka daman chhuda diya kerke aazad unhe hamesha ke liye dil mein basa liya... very appropriate...thanx a lot once again....bye 4 now!...take care! |
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3rd March 2004, 09:24 PM
bohat achi nazm likhi hai aap nay
aik baat kehna chahoongi..k zindagi isi ka naam hai... hum jo chahte hain woh hota nahin hai, aur jo hota hai woh ghalat....magar hum inhi ghaltiyon say hi to sekhte hain aap bhool kar bhi apne SACHE (TRUE) pyar ko bhula nahin sakte....zindagi ke har modh par woh aap ko zaroor yaad aaye gi...magar ab aap ko zindagi ki aik aham cheez a andaza ho gaya ho ga....k DON"T TRUST ANYONE>..... i hope u didn't mind this..but that's what I wanted to say.. thanks....and a great poem once again....bye mujhe to sirf tera waada aazmana tha. |
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3rd March 2004, 09:33 PM
hello ajforuji....i was just about to logout,just saw that u replied so i came back...firstly to thanx a lot for appreciating me...and secondly i totally agree with the wonderful thing u have written its so very true....wish everyone could think that way...and hope that everyone gets their true love or else in few yrs nobody would believe in love....thanx a lot once again 4 replying...bye 4 now!....take care....
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6th March 2004, 07:29 PM
hello payalji....thank you so much 4 replying...thanx a lot...and u know y i wrote it 4 guyz only as at this place i found that we have more no. of guyz with broken hearts than the girls....thanx once again...take care...bye 4 now!
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6th March 2004, 11:37 PM
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Shivani... Aap ka yeh ghazal padha aur bahut hi acha laga... Lekin agar kisi ko hum dil ki gehraayion se chaah lete hai, agar woh kuch bhi kar le hum unhe nahin bhula sakte... Kyunki pyar koi aisi cheez nahin hai ki jab chaahe le liya jab chaahe de diya aur jab chahe bhool gaye... Pyar to har baar nahin ho sakta.... Baherhall bahut ahca likha hai... Keep It Up... Mat karo woh waada jise nibha na sako Mat karo woh chaah jise barqaraar na rakh sako Pyaar kis ka kab hoowa hai poora Pyaar ka pehla manzil hi hai adhoora |
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7th March 2004, 12:07 PM
hi vvenomoussji...i totally agree with you lekin kya aap ye jaante hain ki agar koi aapke pyaar ki gehrayi ko samjh nahi sake to wo aapke anmol pyaar ke kaabil nahi hota..aapne bilkul thik kaha ki pyaar baar baar nahi hota lekin main ek baat bahut dil se maanti hoon aur wo ye
IF U LUV SOMEONE...SET HIM/HER FREE ...IF HE/SHE COMES BACK 2 U...HE/ SHE IS URS BUT IF HE/SHE DOES NOT THEN HE/SHE WERE NEVER URS |
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Hi... Shivani....
Thanks 4 ur reply & thanks 4 agreeying with me... Aur thanks 2 Shimul kynki mein ne yeh baat unhi se sikhi thi... & even I agree with u : Quote:
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8th March 2004, 03:49 AM
Tu ne nahin samjha tu ne nahin jaana
Heere jaise is dil ko pathar hi jaana Jaise chaahi jee li tu ne, teri zindagi thi Par, is jaan ka kya hoga tu ne nahin jaana Tu na bhoolega, kaise bulaawoon mein? Kaisi hai udaasi yeh, kaise yeh wairaani hai Ek tere na hone se, kaisi zindagaani hai Le liye hai chain tu ne ghum yeh mujh ko de kar Par, seh bhi sakoonga kya tu ne nahin jaana ... Likhte rahiyega. |
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