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kya sahi aur kya galat? - 15th November 2016, 01:57 PM

kya sahi aur kya galat
humari bhawnaye ya humari soch?
zindagi ke jo do maksad
naam aur mudra ka lobh
jaati bandhan maan maryada ke uper
jee bhar ker danka bajate
tab,kya sahi aur kya galat
ghum rha sara chkravyuh
ekmatra manav soch per
praggati path per niranter le chale
vahi satya aur vahi dridh
mante mante der hhui
jo rah gye badnaseeb rahe
nahi?fir,kya sahi kya galat?
ye oonch neech ya taqat ki daulat..


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kya sahi aur kya galat
humari bhawnaye ya humari soch?
zindagi ke jo do maksad
naam aur mudra ka lobh
jaati bandhan maan maryada ke uper
jee bhar ker danka bajate
tab,kya sahi aur kya galat
ghum rha sara chkravyuh
ekmatra manav soch per
praggati path per niranter le chale
vahi satya aur vahi dridh
mante mante der hhui
jo rah gye badnaseeb rahe
nahi?fir,kya sahi kya galat?
ye oonch neech ya taqat ki daulat..
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19th November 2016, 12:18 AM

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kya sahi aur kya galat
humari bhawnaye ya humari soch?
zindagi ke jo do maksad
naam aur mudra ka lobh
jaati bandhan maan maryada ke uper
jee bhar ker danka bajate
tab,kya sahi aur kya galat
ghum rha sara chkravyuh
ekmatra manav soch per
praggati path per niranter le chale
vahi satya aur vahi dridh
mante mante der hhui
jo rah gye badnaseeb rahe
nahi?fir,kya sahi kya galat?
ye oonch neech ya taqat ki daulat..

bahot badhiyaa likhti hain aap rachna ji........

likhte rahiye


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