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12th November 2008, 05:00 PM
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Sabhi dostoN ko zainy ka salaam....ek arse baad aap ki bazm me ek adnaa si kosish ke saath hazir hoon...khabool kijiyega aur bejhijhak apni raai dijiyega

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Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.

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Woh pal pal hame ab sataane lage haiN.

JahaaN bhii milo yuun hi bas muskuraana,
Keh dil is adaa per lutaane lage haiN.

Jo dekha hameiN to woh sharmaaye hai yuu.N,
Keh haathoN se chehraa chupaane lage haiN.

Jo nazreN milii thi to palke.n jhuka lee,
Hayaa ke ye manzar suhaane lage haiN.

Mile dil se dil, ab na ye phir judaa ho,
Duaa yeh laboN per sajaane lage haiN.

Nasha ishq ka hai ajab sa yeh zainy,
Sanam ke sitam bhi lubhaane lage haiN.

Bohat khoob zainy ji kya kehna hai app ki es koshish ka bohat khubsurat likha hai apne khush rahen..apna khayal rakhna....Or aik baat aj bohat arse k baad meri es site per wapsi hui hai sab se pahla riply app ki post ko he ker raha hoon...ayse he khubsurat likhti rahen...

EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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13th November 2008, 12:35 AM
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Bohat khoob zainy ji kya kehna hai app ki es koshish ka bohat khubsurat likha hai apne khush rahen..apna khayal rakhna....Or aik baat aj bohat arse k baad meri es site per wapsi hui hai sab se pahla riply app ki post ko he ker raha hoon...ayse he khubsurat likhti rahen...


Rizi saheb..

Sab se pehle mein app ko SDC per dubaara Khush Amdeed kehti hon aur umeed kerti hon app yahaan pehle ki tarah aate rahenge..Aap ki daad dil se qabool hai .....Koshish rahegi aagey bhi isi tarah aap sab ke saath apne ehsaason ko share karti rahun..khush rahiye...

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Rizi saheb..

Sab se pehle mein app ko SDC per dubaara Khush Amdeed kehti hon aur umeed kerti hon app yahaan pehle ki tarah aate rahenge..Aap ki daad dil se qabool hai .....Koshish rahegi aagey bhi isi tarah aap sab ke saath apne ehsaason ko share karti rahun..khush rahiye...

zainy..

ji janab bilkul hum zarur ate rahen gy.ager app jayse doston ka saath milta raha..bas app ayse he achi achi post kerti raho hum app ko daad dete rahen g...apna khayal rakhna..KHUSH RAHO HAMESHA...

EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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16th November 2008, 03:41 PM

zainy saahiba!

aadaab arz hai!

Aapki ghazal padhkar bahut lutf aaya. Har sher mein koi khaas baat hai..hame aap ki yeh koshish behad achchi lagii....... aap ki mehnat saaf nazar aa rahii hai... zameen bhii mujhe be-Had pasand aa'ii ! meri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool kejiye! yuu.n hi likhti rahe.n.....

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bohat khuub!

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18th November 2008, 03:30 AM
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zainy saahiba!

aadaab arz hai!

Aapki ghazal padhkar bahut lutf aaya. Har sher mein koi khaas baat hai..hame aap ki yeh koshish behad achchi lagii....... aap ki mehnat saaf nazar aa rahii hai... zameen bhii mujhe be-Had pasand aa'ii ! meri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool kejiye! yuu.n hi likhti rahe.n.....



bohat khuub!

Mayank
MAYANK JI...


Apki nazare.N inaayat hui ..teh dil se shukriya ,muaafi chaahti hu.N ,shukriyaa der se adaa karne ke liye ..yakeen maaniye alfaz kam padh rahe hai ,shayed kalaam likhte waqt bhi ye alfaaz ki kami nahi mehsoos ki humne jo aaj apko shukriya adaa karne me ho rahi hai...bahut faqr hua khud pe ....
Aapne ghazal pasand ki, yaane ke kuchh had tak kaamiyaab mili. duaaoN aur himmat_afzayii ke liye shukrguzaar huN...


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ji janab bilkul hum zarur ate rahen gy.ager app jayse doston ka saath milta raha..bas app ayse he achi achi post kerti raho hum app ko daad dete rahen g...apna khayal rakhna..KHUSH RAHO HAMESHA...
rizi saheb...inshallah poori koshish karungi ke aagey aur bhi acchi acchi ghazalein likhu....yuhi saath dete rahiye aur mehfil me aate rahiye..

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