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Raat Bhar...! -
8th September 2009, 12:28 AM
Dard-e-Hijr dasta raha raat bhar, Koi behad yad aata raha raat bhar, Aahat us ke aane ki satati rahi rat bhar, Wo chah k bhi na aa saka raat bhar, Suraj ki kiran, jab khirki se jhanki to ehsas hua, Main to intezaar-e-yaar mei so bhi na saka rat bhar, Is qadar main khoya tha kisi ki yaad mein, HSN! Mai jesey main nahi raha raat bhar... (Hassan Rasheed) tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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8th September 2009, 09:37 AM
H. Rasheed ji......bahut khub likha hai aapne..... iss ghazal mai aapka yeh intezaar mujhe bahut pasand aaya.......  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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8th September 2009, 11:29 AM
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Aap ka boht shukria jo aap ne apna qeemti waqt nikal kar mujhe comments diye, boht boht shukria,,, mai aisey hi likhta rahon ga aur aap pasand karte rahen ge.....  Take care, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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8th September 2009, 11:50 AM
aadaab !
Hassan Rasheed saheb sab se pehle to app ko khush amdeed kehna chahooNga shayri.com per umeed hai is meHfil meN app ka waQt bherpoor acha guzre ga , bahut kuch seekhne ko mile ga aur bahut kuch seekhaane ko appke bayaaN kerda aHsaas mujhe passand aaye , likhte rahiye Mujeeb |
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Shukria Mujeeb Ji, -
8th September 2009, 11:55 AM
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Aap ke teh dil se shukria aada karta hon. Meri adna si koshish pasand karne ka boht boht shukria Take care tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2009, 11:40 AM
Bahaut khoob Hassan Ji....parhkar accha laga
aabhaar vipin 
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9th September 2009, 01:14 PM
bahut khub likha hain hassanji..daad!
Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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9th September 2009, 02:18 PM
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9th September 2009, 02:40 PM
Hassan bhai ..
ek dum mast lika hai ye sher to sachai se bharpur hai.. bhot mast. Suraj ki kiran, jab khirki se jhanki to ehsas hua, Main to intezaar-e-yaar mei so bhi na saka rat bhar, Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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9th September 2009, 02:46 PM
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Hassan jiii, bahuttt hi khoob likha hai aapne, hume sabhi sher acche lage, aur rahi baat intzaar ki uska hume khoob tazurba hai, hum aapke ahsaas bahut acchi tarah samaj sakte haiN. likhtey rahiye god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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9th September 2009, 07:51 PM
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Mujhe sarhanay aur mera saath dena ka boht boht shukria... Aisey hi saath banaye rakhiye ga... Take care, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2009, 07:55 PM
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Is bazm mein main naya naya hon, aur aap ne meri composition per tawajah di aur usey pasand kiya, mujhe daad di, main aap ka boht mashkoor hon, aisey hi saath banaye rakhiye ga, Take care tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2009, 08:07 PM
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Mera likha pasand karne ka boht boht shukria, aisey hi saath banaye rakhiye ga, Take care, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2009, 08:14 PM
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Adaab! Mera saath banaye rakhne ka boht boht shukria, aisey hi mera likha pasand karte rehna... aur sath banaye rakhna, Take care tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2009, 08:20 PM
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Aap ka teh-dil se shukria ada karna chahon ga ke aap ne apna qeemti waqt is nacheez ki composition per sarf kiya.... aur pasand kiya, aisey hi saath banaye rakhiye ga, GOD BLESS YOU Take care tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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11th September 2009, 11:57 PM
Dard hai ke bharta hi rahay lamha ba lamha, Ban ke nagin tanhai dasti rahe lamha ba lamha, Aaray koi to samjhavay maaray pagal man ko, Kyun bewajah tot'ta rahay lamha ba lamha.... (HSN) tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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12th September 2009, 12:01 AM
Tumse kabhi hum iqrar-e-ishq kar nahi payen ge, Tere bin lekin ik pal is dunia mein reh nahi payen ge, Jetay to sab hain apni apni dhun mein magar! Hum tujh ko bhula kar hargiz jee nahi payen ge... (HSN) tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th September 2009, 12:58 AM
Dil kitni faryaad karta raha raat bhar...!
Tu kyun humse juda raha raat bhar....? tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th September 2009, 04:05 PM
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Gham ke barish mein bhigtaa raha raat bhar eik Diya kaa lou bhujhta raha raat bhar achhi nazam keliye daad  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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17th September 2009, 04:56 PM
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Adaab, Sab se phelay to main aap ka dil ki gehrayi se shukria adaa karna chahon ga, ke aap ne meri composition mein kuch lines add kar dien, jo ke boht hi zaberdast lagien mujhe, Aur aap ki daad qabool... Aap aisey hi mera saath banaye rakhien ge to main aur acha likhta rahon ga ,Stay Happy, GOD BLESS YOU, Take care, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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29th September 2009, 01:41 PM
Kis Qadar ajeeran hai silsla-e-ishq bhi...
Mohabbat to qayim rehti hai magar insaan toot jatay hain... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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1st October 2009, 10:16 PM
Gham-e-ishq kitna ajeeb hai, yeh junoon se kitna qareeb hai, Kabhi ashk palkon pay ruk gaye, kabhi pora darya baha dia... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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5th October 2009, 08:25 PM
Hassan saahab..
KahiN aapne likha tha ki maiN aapki aur bhi likhi hui ghazloN ki taraf nazar karuN.. to janaab aapki ilteza-o-izzat ke ba-basta maiNe aapke likhe tamaam kalaamoN ka rukh kiya .. ek baat maiN khaas taur pe kehna chahunga.. aapke andar naye alfaazoN ko jaudne ki kaabiliyat ba-khuda naayab hi nahi lajawaab hai .. aur uspe aapki soch bhi kam kamaal nahi karti .. but phir bhi ek raa'ii rakhna chahta huN.. ki aap ghazal ke andaaz-e-bayaan ki taraf thoda nishaana rakheN.. kayi kitaabeN ya bohat see baateN aapko kayi sites se pata lag sakti hai .. pehle radeef aur kafiye ko baithaane ki purzor koshish kijiye .. baad maiN ho sake to behar maiN haath aazmaaye.. mujhe na jaane kyuN itna yakeen hai ki aapke alfaazon main wo taaqat hai jo aapka rehkta poore jahan maiN failayengi.. kyuNki ley mai jaate hue kahiN kahin atakte hai alfaaz aapke... baaki ye meri jaati raa'ii hai zaroori nahi aap bhi isse ittefaq rakhe .. mujhe muaf kijiyega meri koi bhi ghalti ke liye... ab aapki is ghazal kee baat to janaab aapne is ghazal maiN la jawaab kar diya hai .. kuch kehte nahi banta... kabhi aise hi khyaalaat mere zehan maiN bhi aye the .. aap kahenge to maiN aapko uska link dounga ... mujhe pasand aaya ye kalaam.. aise hi likhte raheN Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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5th October 2009, 08:32 PM
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Mujhe acha laga aap ke comments phar kar, Aur mujhe khushi hui ke aap ne mujhe kuch mufeed mashwaray bhi diye, main teh dil se aap ka shukar guzaar hon, Main aainda koshish karon ga ke aur bhi acha likh sakon, Aur jo kuch khamiyaan mujh mein hain woh door ho sakien, Bas aap younhi mera saath banaye rakhna, Aur aap mujhe apni post ka link zaroor behjiye Mujhe intezaar rahay ga... Stay Happy, GOD BLESS YOU, Take care, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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5th October 2009, 10:41 PM
Hassan jii,
Sab phele u are most welcome here @ SDC ... Aur shayad aapko phelii baar padhne ke liye chnace mila ... Good work ..likhtey rahye take care mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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6th October 2009, 04:26 PM
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Main aap ka teh-dil se shukria ada karta hon k aap ne waqt nikaal kar meri shayri per taawajh di aur mujhe welcome kiya... Bas aap younhi mera saath banaye rakhiye ga, GOD BLESS YOU, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th October 2009, 04:48 PM
Hassan sahab aadaab
Bahut khoob aapki yeh post behad dilkash ahsaason se less hai ek behad naya pan hai aapki is post mein.... sabhi sher bahut achche lage... Suraj ki kiran, jab khirki se jhanki to ehsas hua, Main to intezaar-e-yaar mei so bhi na saka rat bhar, Likhate rahiye.. Khusha rahiye.. Khuda hafez.. 
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6th October 2009, 05:45 PM
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Meri kawish ko be-had pasand karnay ka aur mera saath banaye rakhnay ka boht boht shukria Umeed karta hon aagay bhi aap isi tarah mera saath detay rahien ge.... GOD BLESS YOU, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th October 2009, 05:53 PM
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6th October 2009, 06:54 PM
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Mujhe khushi hui ke aap ko meri mamooli si koshish itni pasand aayi... Main umeed karta hon k aap aagay bhi aagay bhi aisay hi mera saath banaye rakhien gi... GOD BLESS YOU, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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8th October 2009, 01:48 PM
Hum se pocho kia hota hai pal pal bitaana... Boht hi mushkil hota hai betab dil ko samjhana... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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