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3rd September 2015, 01:00 PM
roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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3rd September 2015, 02:30 PM
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
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Madhu ji...Wah bahutt Khubsurat Ghazal Inayat Ki Appne. Dili Daad Qubool Kijiye. Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye....
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3rd September 2015, 02:44 PM
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
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Uttam, ati uttam, Madhu Ji...! Khayaal aur bayaani behad acche lage, hamari taraf se dher saare badhaaiyaN iss shaayri ke liye...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?
DuaaoN ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
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madhu bala....bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, sabhi sher aik se badkar aik hai....khhobsurat gazal par dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye
duaoN ke saath
dii
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Madhu ji...Wah bahutt Khubsurat Ghazal Inayat Ki Appne. Dili Daad Qubool Kijiye. Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye....
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Namaskaar...harash ji
Bahut khushi huyi ki aapko ghazal pasand aayi..
Yun hee Aapki daad milti rahe...taki likhne ka hausla bana rahe.....yahi dua hai..
Shukriya...
Aate rahiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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3rd September 2015, 10:17 PM
bahut umdah khayal aur bayani rahi aapki is rachna me madhu jee
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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3rd September 2015, 10:57 PM
Madhu.........
Hamesha Ki tarah bohut simple bohut sacha aur bohut acha.....
Dil se shubh kaamnayen.
Yunhi likhti raho.....
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4th September 2015, 06:19 AM
Lajawaab.
Bohot baDhiya ghazal huyii hai jenab.
yuNhi samaa bandhte rahiye mehfil meN har baar.
khair andesh
Sagar Aashna
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4th September 2015, 10:23 AM
Ise kehte hai shayri .. baqamaal har sher aala hai.. kehna hi padega 'kya kahiye'.. ek accha sa takhallus bhi rakhiye ho sake to .. mubarakbaad is dilfareb qalaam ke liye .. likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye ..
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
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4th September 2015, 10:30 AM
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
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dard se labrez kalaam pesh kkiya hai aapne madhu saahibaa........
muaafi chahtaa hoon takheer se haaziri ke liye, asal me zara masrufiyat ka daur chal raha hai to aanaa thoda kam ho gaya hai.....
magar aat ehi ssaath apaki is pyaari ghazal pe jo nazar gayee to dil ke andar tak utartee chalee gayee ye ghazal..... dard se saraabor yun lagaa aapne apnaa dil nikaal kekaagaz pe rakh diyaa aur khoon ki syaahi se ye kalaam likha hai.... dua hai ke Allah aapko sukoon de.....
khush rahiye salaamat rahiye
Shaad.....
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4th September 2015, 04:58 PM
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
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रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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Uttam, ati uttam, Madhu Ji...! Khayaal aur bayaani behad acche lage, hamari taraf se dher saare badhaaiyaN iss shaayri ke liye...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?
DuaaoN ke saath
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Bahut bahut shukriya danny ji..jo aapne yahaan aakar meri hausla afzai ki...meri koshish aapko pasand aayi bahut khushi huyi......
Aate rahiyega...
Salamat rahein.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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8th September 2015, 07:57 PM
bohat khoob madhu ji...
simply superb!
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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bohat khoob madhu ji...
simply superb!
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Itne vaqt ke baad aaj aapko apni thread pe dekhkar kaisa mahsoos kar rahi hoon..bayaan kar pana mushkil ho raha hai....vo yadein taza ho gayiin jab shuruaat me main kuch bhi post karti thi aur us par aapka" good one madhu ji."...dekhkar dil khush ho jata tha..... ..aapki daad pakar aaj vahi khushi hasil ho rahi hai........
Bahut shukriya...
Aati rahiyega.......
Salamat rahein......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
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Waah Madhu ji
Kya Ghazal kahi hai aapne. "Aapke ye asha'ar kya kahiye"
Yahi kahooNga.
Aaapki shayri aur fikr meiN din ba din aata nikhar dikhayee de raha hai. Aapki mehnat aapke sheroN meiN jhalak rahi hai. Sada bayani lekin bohat koob. Har sher behtareen hai.
Agle kalaam ka intezaar rahega.
Khaksaar
Praveen
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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madhu bala....bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, sabhi sher aik se badkar aik hai....khhobsurat gazal par dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye
duaoN ke saath
dii
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Bahut bahut Shukriya di...aap sab ki mohabbatein hain jo ghazal ko khoobsoorat bana deti hain....
Yun hee aati rahiyega
Apna khayaal rakhiye...
Regards..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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bahut umdah khayal aur bayani rahi aapki is rachna me madhu jee
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
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Bahut bahut shukriya ishq ji...
Sath dete rahiyega......
Apna khayaal rakhein.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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27th October 2015, 11:37 PM
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..
mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..
kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.
bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.
char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.
kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.
daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
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bahut umdaah ghazal huii Madhu ji ... waah
asardaar ashaar se bharpoor
dilee mubaaraqbaad !!!!!!!!!!!!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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Madhu.........
Hamesha Ki tarah bohut simple bohut sacha aur bohut acha.....
Dil se shubh kaamnayen.
Yunhi likhti raho.....
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Shukriya sarika....
Hamesha ki tarah mere is kalaam ko bhi apka sath mila achcha laga...
Aati rahna aage bhi...
Takecare..
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Lajawaab.
Bohot baDhiya ghazal huyii hai jenab.
yuNhi samaa bandhte rahiye mehfil meN har baar.
khair andesh
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Shukriya sagar ji....
Ham to mahfil me aate hee rahte hain...aapse guzarish hai...aap bhi thoda vaqt nikal kar aate rahein...
Takecare..
Madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Ise kehte hai shayri .. baqamaal har sher aala hai.. kehna hi padega 'kya kahiye'.. ek accha sa takhallus bhi rakhiye ho sake to .. mubarakbaad is dilfareb qalaam ke liye .. likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye ..
Sifar
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Namaskaar kunal ji..
Aapko yahaan dekhkar bahut achcha laga..aur khushi hai ki aapko ye ghazal pasand aayi...apki rai ka aage bhi intzaar rahega....
Khush rahiye. ..
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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dard se labrez kalaam pesh kkiya hai aapne madhu saahibaa........
muaafi chahtaa hoon takheer se haaziri ke liye, asal me zara masrufiyat ka daur chal raha hai to aanaa thoda kam ho gaya hai.....
magar aat ehi ssaath apaki is pyaari ghazal pe jo nazar gayee to dil ke andar tak utartee chalee gayee ye ghazal..... dard se saraabor yun lagaa aapne apnaa dil nikaal kekaagaz pe rakh diyaa aur khoon ki syaahi se ye kalaam likha hai.... dua hai ke Allah aapko sukoon de.....
khush rahiye salaamat rahiye
Shaad.....
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Ji..koi baat nahi kabhi kabhi masrufiyat yun hee apno se door rakhti hai....yahi bahut hai ki aapko fir bhi doston ka khayaal hai...apni ghazal pe mujhe hamesha aapka intzaar rahta hai......
Duaon ka tah e dil se shukriya...aate rahiyega
Apna khayaal rakhein...
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Alfaazon mein kehna mushkil hai ... kya kahiye ...... is qalam ke har lafz se girtaa aansu mujhe nam kar gaya...
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Gustakhi maaf ho ji..aapki ankhon me nami kabhi nahi chahte ham...magar alfaaz aapka dil chhoo paye ye achcha laga....
Yun hee sath banaye rakhiyega....bas yahi chahti hun..
Khush rahiye...
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Waah Madhu ji
Kya Ghazal kahi hai aapne. "Aapke ye asha'ar kya kahiye"
Yahi kahooNga.
Aaapki shayri aur fikr meiN din ba din aata nikhar dikhayee de raha hai. Aapki mehnat aapke sheroN meiN jhalak rahi hai. Sada bayani lekin bohat koob. Har sher behtareen hai.
Agle kalaam ka intezaar rahega.
Khaksaar
Praveen
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Namaskaar praveen ji...aapka comment padhkar chehre par ek khushi chha gayi hai..wakai aap jaise umda shayron se itni bhi tareef mil jaye to..khushi lazmi hee hai...
Meri koshish ko tawajjo dene ke liye aur hausla afzai ke liye...aapka tah e dil se shukriya..
Aage bhi aapki rai ka intzaar rahega mujhe..
Apna khayaal rakhein..
Regards
Madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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bahut umdaah ghazal huii Madhu ji ... waah
asardaar ashaar se bharpoor
dilee mubaaraqbaad !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji......
ashaar aapko pasand aaye hushi huyi..
aate rahiyega...
aabhar
madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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