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Lightbulb Kuch Aise Hi - 23rd May 2013, 03:29 AM

dastoor yahi raha sadiyon se
shiqwon ka kaafila..

yuhi chalta raha sadiyon se
aahaton ki umeed main..

khwaishe hain zinda
aazad udti rooh bhi..

kisi aur ka kya mukaddar likhe koi
khushi se gum main bheegi tanhai...

hai yakeen guzaarish hogi qubul ik kafir ki
beeti hai jiski sadiyan muflisi se bhari hui...



   
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behad acche aur sacche ehsaas hain aapki kavita me.....

likhte rahiye... khush rahiye

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hai yakeen guzaarish hogi qubul ik kafir ki
beeti hai jiski sadiyan muflisi se bhari hui...

Nicely written..
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dastoor yahi raha sadiyon se
shiqwon ka kaafila..

yuhi chalta raha sadiyon se
aahaton ki umeed main..

khwaishe hain zinda
aazad udti rooh bhi..

kisi aur ka kya mukaddar likhe koi
khushi se gum main bheegi tanhai...

hai yakeen guzaarish hogi qubul ik kafir ki
beeti hai jiski sadiyan muflisi se bhari hui...



Bahot hi umda kiha hai aapne.......
Bahot hi achchhi soch.....

Dil ko chhoo gayee apkee ye kavita

Likhte rahiyega......

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