HI Rohin
As i read this poem for real u had played a game with the mind, as the words i read, my mind was imagining what u wrote, the hoshposh...the running..the sweat....wow I am stilll in the loop pf wat u wrote..
The poem started with a black dot...and ended up as Sun - the power, the new morning, the new enthusiasm.. ( I hope ur each mroning starts with a new energy and great success - wrapped in warmth of luv),
well i should say the reverse way cuz the sun is actually the starting..
a lot of energy and vibration this poem has!
Amazing! how u captured so much expressions and made us feel it also
I must say - mind games are really amazing and u did it well
Luv ya
Priya