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Tumhari yaadain - 7th October 2006, 11:04 PM

Some thoughts...



Raat ke andhere me
jab dil bahut tarapta hai
Apne pyar ko dekh kar, hawa se bikhre baal cehre par, dil me sharmati hai
Tumhari yaadain ik hawa ke jhoke ki tarha aati hai

Jab bhi akela mehsus karti hu
Dil bhi bechain hota hai
Pyar bhare pal, dil me umag ki tarap cha jaati hai,
Tumhari yaadain phool par gire ik pani ki boond ki tarha aati hai

Mere ye haath jaise tumahre haathon mein
Shor bahut gehra hua karta hai, kabhi kabhi san'naton mein,
Sapni ki duniya bhi, aasman mein uda le jaati hai
Tumhari Yaadain kabhi khamoshi kabhi shor ke jaise aati hai...

Jaisa hai ik te'j tumahre cehre par
Shaanti aur ik dheemi si hasi
Shaant pawan, thandak se bhari, badan ko sehrati hai
Tumhari yaadain, tej behni wali nadi ki lehron ki tarha aati hai


Priya


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7th October 2006, 11:14 PM

Namaskaar Priya Ji

Aapne bahaut hee khubsoorti se is rachna ko shabd diye. Ehsaaon ko jagah di hai.

yunhi likhtey rahiyega

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7th October 2006, 11:47 PM

wonderful.... tum jab bhi apne dil se likhti ho... dil ko kagaz par behne deti ho... it just Rocks' i loved it.... all i will say is... people with a heart as beautiful as u.... really deserve... the best... and all the happiness in the world...

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8th October 2006, 01:41 AM

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Namaskaar Priya Ji

Aapne bahaut hee khubsoorti se is rachna ko shabd diye. Ehsaaon ko jagah di hai.

yunhi likhtey rahiyega

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khush rahe

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8th October 2006, 12:17 PM

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apke is peshkas ke lafz bade ahche hai asie hi likhte rahiye

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8th October 2006, 02:20 PM

Quote:
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wonderful.... tum jab bhi apne dil se likhti ho... dil ko kagaz par behne deti ho... it just Rocks' i loved it.... all i will say is... people with a heart as beautiful as u.... really deserve... the best... and all the happiness in the world...

Take Care
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Thanks Rohin, Appreciate it Buddy.

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