$$$**khuub-suurat mausam***$$$

aapki_anamika · **$$$**khuub-suurat mausam***$$$ -** 25th September 2007, 05:58 PM

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...

nonu · 25th September 2007, 06:06 PM

bahut achha likha hai aapne..

coolaadi_1985 · **bahut acchi anamika ji... -** 26th September 2007, 05:06 PM

hi anamika i like your feelings..fantastic poem..

Mayank · 26th September 2007, 05:22 PM

anamika....

pyaar ke behad pyaare ehsaas ko tum ne lafzo.n se khuub-suurati ke saath bayaa.n kiyaa hai! mujhe behad pasa.nd aaye hai.n..yuu.n hii likhati raho, khush raho hamesha

mayank

aapki_anamika · **thanx nonu.. -** 26th September 2007, 05:41 PM

i just want u 2 read this poem by heart..u like it i m happy..

aapki_anamika · **shukria g.. -** 27th September 2007, 10:14 AM

thanx 4 appreciating dear aadi

kp smiling

acharya_mj · **hi -** 27th September 2007, 10:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...

anamika ji aap ke ehsaas bahut hee khoobsurat hai, achha likha hai. dil se daad kabool kare. yunhee likhate rahe.
regards
manu

aapki_anamika · **bhaiya g ...:))) -** 27th September 2007, 11:01 AM

thanks bhaiya..kp smilimg

kuhulika · 27th September 2007, 11:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...

pyari Anamika
bahut pyara likkha hai bilkul apne naam ki tarah.... bas yun hin khilti raho pyar mein.. mehnatt rang laegi... tumne mere bhi armaan jagaa diye aaj...

tc ji

aapki_anamika · **hi manu.. -** 27th September 2007, 11:03 AM

manu..thanku g thanku

lolz..........

kp smiling g n take care

aapki_anamika · **o hiiiiiiiiiiiiii diiiiii........:)) -** 27th September 2007, 11:09 AM

thanx khikhikhikhikhikhikhi

aap hi se seekhna hai dhire dhire or bhi accha likhna

khush rahiye ..love u

MahamAzmi · 28th September 2007, 01:44 PM

Aanamika ji ,

Najanae kyun Maham muskura dee dheere se apki ye nazm parh kar

Behud sada aur macum see kaavish .............jis mein pyar ke tamaam rang baharon ke sang nazar aye

Rab kare ye mausam apke liye amar ho jayen

Maham Azmi

ronit_14300 · 28th September 2007, 01:45 PM

aapki shayari bahut hi umda hai ... mujhe bahaut pasand hain ..aapne jiske liye likhi hai meri dua hain wo is jaroor padhenge

aapki_anamika · **shukria ronit sahab -** 28th September 2007, 01:51 PM

shukria meri kavita ko padhne or use pasand karne k liye..kp smiling..

aapki_anamika · **pyaari maham di... -** 28th September 2007, 01:58 PM

aap jaanti hain aapne meri poem k bheetar chipe marm ko samjha hai...esa laga mujhe aapki reply me jab aapne kaha behad saadgi or maasumiyat se likha hai maine

...

ise padhne or samajhne k liye bhot bhot shukria..se hi pyar dete rahiyega di...sada muskarate rahiye

regards..
ur n only ur's anamika

MahamAzmi · 28th September 2007, 02:06 PM

apki nazm aur phir ab apka reply parh ke i m constantly smiling , dono dimples deeply at work hein abhi hamarae haaha ji .......i get very deep dimples when i smile or laugh and they re at their working mode rite now cuz of u

THANX haaha

ji apkee nazm mein bahaaron ki amaad bhi hie , khaabwbon ki rehguzar bhi , umeedon k diye bhi jalte dekhe aur khauhishon ke poora hone ke armaan bhi dikhayee diye

Nazm ho ya she r................Maham jab tak koi tehreer dil mein na mehsus kare na usko daad de patee hei na usko kuc hkeh patee hei

I luved the tones of ur pure writing here Anamika ji ,

Yunhee pyara a likhtee rahayae sada

Apki

Maham

aapki_anamika · **hehehe:))) -** 28th September 2007, 02:19 PM

maham di

..kya baat hai bhot muskara rahe ho..well agar saccchi me meri poem ne esa jaadu kiya hai aapke uper k aapke chehre par hasi aa gayi to ye meri khushnaseebi hai..waise itna to jaan gayi ye anu k aap kaafi pahunche hue ho

..kisi chij ki gehraayi maapna aapko khoob aata hai

kavita ko padhte to sab hai..reply bhi sabhi de dete hai..par sach wo log bhot hi kam hote hai jo kavita k bheetar chipe har ehsaas se rubaru ho jate hai..aap unhi me se ek hai...what a fantastic poet u r i knw..

hasti rahiye...hasaati bhi rahiye...

acharya_mj · **hi -** 28th September 2007, 02:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...

anamikaa ji aap ke yeh kalam doosari bar padhaa, bahut mazaa aaya.
magar mujhe to yeh kalam padh kar bahut hee jalan ho rahi hai ...........
sachiiiiiiiiiiii.................................. ...............

bahut jalan hoti hai

puchhna mat kyun

regards
manu

aapki_anamika · **ohhhhhhh -** 28th September 2007, 03:02 PM

fire brigade bulwa du

i think aapko jarurat hai manu g

..anyways thanx 4 ur 2nd reply on my little poem

acharya_mj · **hi -** 28th September 2007, 03:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

fire brigade bulwa du

i think aapko jarurat hai manu g

..anyways thanx 4 ur 2nd reply on my little poem

ajeee fire brigade ki kya jaroorat hai

aap khood hee aa jaiye

aap bhi kisi fire brigade se kam nahee

regards
manu

mausam · 28th September 2007, 04:24 PM

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

bahut hi achha ehsaas hain anamika.....chehre pe khushi aur dil mein..ehsaas umad gaye tumahri is kavish ko padhke....

dil se daad kubool karna..aur aise hi likhti rehna...

mausam

aapki_anamika · **jiiiiiiiiiiiiii:"> -** 28th September 2007, 04:32 PM

hi mausam di kaise ho??

acche lage aapko mere ehsaas wowow mujhe bhot khushi ho rahi hai..wo kya hai na di yahan actually baarish wala mausam bhot ho raha hai aajkal isliye is mausam me itni pyaari pyaari baatein dimaag me aati hai ki kaagaj kalam uthaana hi padta hai

or yaad bhi bhot jyada aane lagti hai ese khoobsurat mausam me

aapko yahan dekhkar bhot accha laga..sada muskarati rahiye

muaaaah...!!!

ur's anu

Mohammad Kashif · 1st October 2007, 04:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...

ADAAB ANAMIKA JI.....................
wah kya baat hai apke kalaam ki hum to kuch pichle ehsaaso men kho gaye bahut pyara likha hai apne ek umda koshish ke liyen mubarakbaad ke saath dili daad kubool karen aur unhi likhti rahiye............khush rahiye

aapki_anamika · **shukria kashif sahab.. -** 2nd October 2007, 11:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mohammad Kashif

ADAAB ANAMIKA JI.....................
wah kya baat hai apke kalaam ki hum to kuch pichle ehsaaso men kho gaye bahut pyara likha hai apne ek umda koshish ke liyen mubarakbaad ke saath dili daad kubool karen aur unhi likhti rahiye............khush rahiye

kashif sahab meri is choti c kavita ko pasand kiya aapne..mai dil se aapka shukria ada karna chahti hu..ese hi saath djijiyega..

khush rahiye..

masoomshayer · 3rd October 2007, 01:23 PM

anmika bahut achee tarah se tum ne dil kee baat bayan kee hai kaheen koyee kamee nahee bahut achha

Anil

ek uljhan · 3rd October 2007, 06:02 PM

HI ANAMIKA JI MAINE ABHI-2 SHAYRI.COM JOIN KIYA HAI AUR SABSE PEHLE PADA BHI TO JO AAPNE LIKHA HAI..BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE DIL KO CHHO GAYA, MAIN GAZLON KA SHOKEEN HUN PAR AAJ JO PADA MAIN TO AAPKI GAZAL KA KAAYAL HO GAYA..AASHA KARTA HUN AAP ISI TARAH LIKHTI RAHENGIAAPKI SHAYRI SE MUJHE AAPKI BAGHUT MADAD MILEGI..KYA MAIN AAPKI IS MEHFIL MEIN SHAAMIL HO SAKTA HUN ?????

AAPKA NAYA DOST

ek uljhan · **Hi -** 3rd October 2007, 06:06 PM

HI DOSTON KYA MAIN AAPKI MEHFIL MEIN SHAAMIL HO SAKTA HUN??????????

aapki_anamika · **bhaiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa:)))) -** 3rd October 2007, 07:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by masoomshayer

anmika bahut achee tarah se tum ne dil kee baat bayan kee hai kaheen koyee kamee nahee bahut achha

Anil

hii bhaiya g kaise ho tussi??

baal bacche raaji na?

accha aapne aaj fir se meri poem padhi or ye aapko pasand aayi.m bhot khush hun sacchiiiiii

ese hi bhaiya saath djijiyega or agar koi kami lage kavita me to hamesha ki tarah jarur bata dijiyega
aapki anu..

aapki_anamika · **hey hiiiiii -** 4th October 2007, 04:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ek uljhan

HI ANAMIKA JI MAINE ABHI-2 SHAYRI.COM JOIN KIYA HAI AUR SABSE PEHLE PADA BHI TO JO AAPNE LIKHA HAI..BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE DIL KO CHHO GAYA, MAIN GAZLON KA SHOKEEN HUN PAR AAJ JO PADA MAIN TO AAPKI GAZAL KA KAAYAL HO GAYA..AASHA KARTA HUN AAP ISI TARAH LIKHTI RAHENGIAAPKI SHAYRI SE MUJHE AAPKI BAGHUT MADAD MILEGI..KYA MAIN AAPKI IS MEHFIL MEIN SHAAMIL HO SAKTA HUN ?????

AAPKA NAYA DOST

sabse pahle ek lambi c hi uljhan ji aapko....hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iii...mai aapka naam to nahi jaanti par ab to uljhan g se kaam chalana padega na

welcome in ur family uljhan g...

aapko meri kavita pasand aayi uske liye thanx a lot..i hope ab aap is parivaar me shaamil ho hi gaye ho to jald hi sabse ghul mil jaayenge or har pal yahan khushi se bitaayenge..

mujeh aapki post ka intejaar rahega..

khush rahiye..

anu..

pankajpvr · **aj kal shayri mein picture hoti toh kiya hota -** 4th October 2007, 10:12 PM

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Kuchh mithi mithi baate,
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Thodi si shrarat,
Bahut sari mohabbat,,
Ek bholi si muskan,
Ooncha udne ka armaan,
Sabse alag sabse juda,,
Jiski hai pyari har ek ada.......,
wo Sweet Girl Hai "AAP"
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munfairy · **frnd 4 ever -** 7th October 2007, 05:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...

Aadab anamika ji,
kaise hain aap?

wah kya baat hain,
asan se alfazon me itna khubsutar ehsaas ..

sach bohot hi umda koshsihs rahi aapki.
aapke yeh ehsas wakayi kabile tarif hai,

daad hazir hain,kabul kijiyega,
ALLAH apko aur tarakki de.AAMIN.

KHUSH RAHIYE,
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE,
ALLAH HAFIZ

Sandhya1 · 11th October 2007, 08:02 AM

anamika ji aap ne bahut hi pyara likha hai....aapko padha kara bahut hi aacha laga...aise hi likhte rahena....nice one....hopeing to see some more from u dear...keep it up.......

pankajpvr · 19th October 2007, 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...

Very nice poem anamika

This world is full of people
but those who care are rare.
The finest of the few is you
& its nice 2 know you are there.

Merul · 22nd October 2007, 11:23 AM

Anamika ji
kese ho aap?

pehle to mein aapse mafi mangna chahta hu ki mein aaj kai dino baad yaha aa paya hu..yaha aake mujhe ek baat ka gum bhi lag raha hai ki aapki itni behtareen rachna se hum aaj rubaru ho rahe hai...

anamika ji bahut hi umda aur dil ko chhulene wali rachna se rubaru karwaya hai aaj aapne is dil ko...

dil se nikle asaar pe aap daad hazir hai, kabuliyega

khas karke

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

ye alfaaz hamien bahut hi pasand aaye, ye alfaaz mein hamein hamari yaadein taza hoti hui nazar aai hai..

sada yuhi likhte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul

Quote:

Originally Posted by aapki_anamika

dosto aaj bhot waqt baad kuch likha hai ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega..koi kami lage to jaroor bata dijiyega ye aapse request hai..this poem is dedicated to someone special..wo padh le to mehnat safal ho jaaye..

khuub-suurat is suhaane mausam me.n
ehsaas mere machalte hai.n
kho-kar baajuuo.n me.n tumhaare
gir-gir kar hosh sa.nbhalte hai.n

yeh Thandi hawaae.n,yeh surkh fizaayue.n
pa.nchhiyo.n ki gu.njan, yeh saraaratii ghataaye.n
yeh ghir ghir ke baadalo.n kaa aana
sab dekh kar mujeh khil jaate hai.n

tum zindagi tum pyaar mere,
wajaahe mere wajood ki,
paakar tumhara sparsh,
rom rom sihar jaate hai.n..

thandi thandi in bundo ki,
lehelahaate in bheegey patto ki,
dastak chahey kaano tak naa pahunche,
magar...

ruh se meri ruh ka tere,
haseen rishta ye jod jaate hai.n...